Gregorian calendar year 3024, parallel world, Hengyu star!
Dependent on each other. The sun star has been together for 450,000 years. The ecosystem has undergone transformation and no longer produces sunlight. The sun star has begun the process of destruction!
Something floated from the depths of the universe, bringing hope to Hengyuxing!
The second island world is born!
Ten island owners from each country are selected and dedicated to building a second home!
An ordinary person with pig's feet, a family heirloom, with a support system, leads the elves to develop the island and be at the top of the island world!
Reader comments
After reading Chapter 6, what should I say... It's okay. The main problem at the moment is the person problem. Most of the narration is third person, and occasionally it changes to first person. It's not a big problem, but the mutation of person will affect the sense of substitution.
. . . Not bad. . . . Come on write!
The writing angle is pretty good, keep up the good work! Character descriptions can also be used.
After reading Chapter 6, what should I say... It's okay. The main problem at the moment is the person problem. Most of the narration is third person, and occasionally it changes to first person. It's not a big problem, but the mutation of person will affect the sense of substitution.
. . . Not bad. . . . Come on write!
The writing angle is pretty good, keep up the good work! Character descriptions can also be used.