Rebirth**********

It's not easy to write code, please support it by giving it a five-star rating and check the duration. What I want to say is a bit complicated, so I'll just say it casually. By the way, I have only read the first volume. I don't know what the follow-up will be. If someone really uses the subsequent plot to refute me in the future, then don't blame me for being harsh. First of all, I think this novel is okay, just for killing time. I think the main plot of the whole book should be the self-rescue action of the male protagonist. To put it bluntly, it is to establish a good relationship with the female protagonist group and change his negative image in their eyes. The side plot is the overt and covert struggle with other forces. After all, his life is about to be lost, and he is talking about Mao's ideals. However, the actual perception is that the protagonist is desperately pushing the side plot, and at the same time pushing the main plot. The result is that the branch plot is pushed very quickly, but the main plot is not promoted at all. , The seven people did not appear in the first volume at the end, let alone the strategy. Of course, I can also understand that the male protagonist wants to improve his image by becoming a qualified young landlord, but the actual effect is that the personal master and the tsundere are both resurgent types. They originally had a basis for goodwill. I don't know about the other ones. They have not been released. The main plot has not made much progress, and the branch plots have made obvious breakthroughs. Secondly, there is the foreshadowing. Some comments say that she is the protagonist of the original game, so why does Lao Wang want to follow her, so I think she is the daughter of the protagonist. Speaking of Machiavellian plots, there's not much to say. The characters in the novel have a stable IQ. That's it. Of course, it may be the reason for the first volume. Speaking of making love, in the first volume, there was one boy and three girls, so I was optimistic about Nangong Yan. The remaining two, one was cold and the other was arrogant, were not interesting and could not be played. In short, I just want to support the author. After all, if you dare to write a novel and publish it, you are already awesome. Come on.

Yes, the plot is quite interesting, but I feel like the protagonist's IQ and situation judgment could be improved. It's impossible not to understand everything.

It's very beautiful and well written. I recommend reading it.

The writing is very interesting, why doesn't anyone read it👀.

Has this book existed before? Why does it feel like deja vu? Can any brother who understands tell me what's going on?

Villains do what villains should do

The writing is good, and the writing is quite interesting.

A very good book that made my Binzhou spin

It's very interesting. Please keep updating the author [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Quite a good book. Even after watching it for so long, I haven't even found all 7 stars [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

Author, please code words

The writing is very good, good luck to the author!

This is a really good book.

Ye is not the heroine

Well written, keep it up

I advise the author to take it easy when feeding the knife, otherwise the blade will arrive at the doorstep at any time. The process can be painful, but don't kill people [I'm about to cry]

Why is the rating so low?

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

Personal rating, not for reference

The writing is good and the story is pretty good too.

It's great, I'm really looking forward to the author's follow-up plot! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Come on, author, this book is very good, it must be five stars, and don't stop updating it.

It's good to watch. I love watching it. The protagonist has brains and the heroine is well portrayed.

The writing is great, the characters are very interesting, and the layout feels great.

It's worth appreciating, a good book, it will definitely make you more popular, the author,

So far, it's quite interesting. I personally hope to see more of Ye Ningshuang's plot. Also, the author said that this is a dark sadistic novel, which made me a little panicked [crazy]