[Gender-Bender Yuri + Transformation + Little Girl + Everyone's Darling + Fake and Real Heiresses + Overpowered Female Lead + Doormat + Tsundere + Wife-Chasing Crematorium]
My name is Su Aiyuan. I was minding my own business as a little beggar, so what did I do to deserve being tricked into having my manhood chopped off on the spot?
You're awake? The surgery was a success!
Waaah! My life is ruined!
System: Don't be afraid, Host! You're a real girl now!
What? I'm the fake heiress?
What? You want me to drain all the assets from the Su Group?
No way! I refuse to be an accomplice to a gang of con artists!
I'll go ask the female lead, Gu Qingxue, for help.
As I looked at her sweet smile, my face turned red.
In every way, she was my ideal type.
I thought I'd found the moonlight of my life, but I never expected to fall into a demon's lair!
The powerful female lead Gu Qingxue knew the original story's plot too!
She was about to come after me, the fake heiress, to reclaim the life that belonged to her...
Gu Qingxue is a successful villain. I was disgusted by him. The protagonist has a soft-tempered mentality and feels that he owes Gu Qingxue. The problem is that the protagonist, who has not been recognized for a long time, has to return it. He does not enjoy much that this identity brings. He does not owe Gu Qingxue in the first place. In the end, Gu Qingxue, just like the protagonist owes him, still regards the protagonist as his property, the more he looks at it, the angrier he gets. Also, the Gu family is good to the protagonist, and then Gu Qingxue becomes jealous. The protagonist writes a song for his third brother and wants to repay him. However, because he is jealous of his third brother's kindness to the protagonist, and then he is jealous of the protagonist's treatment of the family. It's so sweet, but it's deliberately ruined. If you don't know how to write about chasing your wife in the crematorium, you don't have to write about it. The Gu Qingxue you're writing now is like a villain. When I think about the content of chasing my wife in the crematorium later, I'm already feeling heartbroken. If this continues, I might as well let Gu Qingxue go offline. I just want to watch the protagonist. , The biggest problem that makes it like this now is that Gu Qingxue is not the protagonist of the original book, but also traveled through time, and has never experienced anything in the original world line, and then with his identity, he is jealous of the protagonist and the love he enjoys in the Gu family. The problem is that she is a time traveler, so where does her position come from? And as I said above, he has no position, saying that the protagonist owes him, and then regards the protagonist as his property. This is a problem. Because of this setting problem, the more I watch it now, the more frustrated I am. Then the protagonist's love is also inexplicable and very blunt, as if it was set up to chase his wife in the crematorium. You can't say that it was because of Gu Qingxue that he saved him and helped him. He solved Uncle Jiu, and it was obviously saved by the system. The protagonist's suffering in the early stage was helped by the system, and the injury he suffered later was saved by the system. It has something to do with Gu Qingxue. This is also what I find frustrating. Gu Qingxue, who came from time travel, has no position to blame the protagonist, and did not save the protagonist. This unequal love relationship only left aggrieved. Thinking about the content of chasing his wife later, I started to feel heartbroken.
The first boss, Uncle Jiu, was engaged in technology, looking for people, being a gangster, and trying to hollow out the largest family. I thought he was a ruthless character with a high IQ, but it turned out that he offered me two million a week to make fun of me, so I'd better leave it alone. It's pretty good.
This plot looks a bit familiar, a bit like Ye Fuli next door. Especially Gu Qingxue, I feel that she and Ye Fuli are carved from the same mold. Also, Su Aiyuan looks a lot like Ye Zhen next door. Now I seriously doubt whether you are Meng's trumpet.
In Chapter 45, all these feelings are gone. I can only say that if you write Gu Qingxue directly as the villain, forget it. He is more qualified as a villain than Uncle Jiu. Why should someone who has traveled through time and never experienced the plot of the Su family be jealous of the protagonist? The protagonist has to be jealous and sabotage in order to repay the favor and help the third brother write a song? Chapter 45, I really can't see any emotion at all 😓
The heroine raises a new heroine I've been too cruel, and I can't see any chance of recovery. In this chapter, I heard what Du said later. This is not emotion. There is no emotion at all. A small problem can turn into a big problem. Emotional issues are a big deal. The author shouldn't have written it wrong. There are many problems with character issues and personality issues. Chapter 45
I have just read a few chapters, and it feels surprisingly good. Although I never read this kind of novels without thinking, the author's writing style makes me feel very comfortable. The use of humble words and honorifics is very reasonable, there are no typos, and the language is fluent. Come on, author, I hope you can ensure the quality.
It's so to my liking. Come on, author.
Don't stop it, it suits my taste
Another heroine is pure CS
It's so beautiful, five stars.