Baiyunlin Family

It's a good-looking story about a family cultivating immortals who plays with swords. It seems to have a single heroine. It's also well written.

So far, it seems that overall it is a well-written novel, but there are a few things I would like to ask the author; 1. Does Siha want to express the meaning of snakes making sounds? If it feels unnecessary, it is a bit awkward to read anyway. 2. I feel that this is also a common problem of most Tomato Cultivation authors. The description of the fight is not satisfactory. Does the protagonist just use a small sky sword formation every time he fights and then it is over? I hope that in the future, the author will strengthen the description of various moves between the protagonist and other people, and I also hope that the author will continue to do so [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Although the writing is a bit novice, the plot arrangement is still very good. As a novice, it is a good book. I hope that future works will be better.

It's okay, but the author is a bit short

Good, good, good, good, good, good The author writes very well, very wonderfully

It's still very good, why doesn't anyone rate it?

The subject matter is good, pig's feet are alchemists, but there is a lack of planting space. Pig's feet must have a hanging place, right?

Well written, keep up the good work Come on, don't suck.

The plot is smooth and well developed.

So pretty, so pretty

There's nothing toxic about the beginning of the plot, so far it's okay

There is nothing poisonous about it at the moment. Write it well and try to update it at least twice a day. This book should become popular. Come on!

Not bad, keep up the good work

It sounds pretty good and I hope you continue to do it.

Very very wonderful

It's okay, there's nothing poisonous about it so far.

Give the male protagonist a female protagonist who has traveled from Earth. When he reaches the peak of his cultivation, he will go back to his father-in-law's house on Earth.

An unforgettable fantasy masterpiece, it leads readers into a fantasy world full of charm and wonder.

Family stories are my favorite type. As long as the writing is not too bad, I will give it five stars.

Looks pretty good, hope to keep it up

The author said, please give me a good review

It's okay so far. I'll give it a try later and try not to mess it up.

This book is well written

It feels pretty good.

Very good, I support you very much

Isn't it nice to read three chapters a day?

Not bad, not bad

Just think about it

It looks okay! Come on

This book is well written