Quick Transmigration Across the Multiverse: Duoduo Has Arrived

In fact, the author should not write Tuantuan Duoduo said that every sentence said so-and-so does not make you feel involved, and it is not Tuantuan: Just don't write and talk.

There is a long and lengthy story, but the heroine is still stupid and selfish without any knowledge of herself, and she thinks she is stupid without knowing it. The more I look at it, the more my head hurts. I can't stand it anymore. The author recommends that you stop writing. It is really torturing the readers and they cannot bear it. It was so torturous.

This is similar to writing a composition. It is the kind of composition with only commas and periods. It makes me uncomfortable and strain my eyes.

Give yourself a good review, after all, this is my first time writing, hehe😁😁😁

There is nothing exciting about it. The most important thing is that there are serious typos and missing words, and the punctuation marks are also messy. 🍉

The fourth master asked you, Duoduo said, what to say here, I am really convinced, this writing style, don't be awkward, it's like twisting a twist, it's really annoying to read

It's like a child playing house, there is no particularly mature plot of palace fighting, the heroine's character is vague, there is no discernible personality, and there is nothing attractive about it. Every time I go through a world, I don't learn any skills, I don't know anything, I just eat and sit around every day, without any strategy, to put it bluntly, the heroine looks like a 25-year-old!

The selection of content topics is good, but the content is too childish. The heroine has traveled through so many worlds without studying seriously and has no broad vision. The supporting characters also seem to have been dumbfounded by the halo of the heroine. If it weren't for the golden finger, the heroine would be a character who would rush into trouble at the beginning.

How should I put it, this novel is a bit uncomfortable to read.

How can I put it, it always feels weird, like reading a book, reading a story in the eyes of others, like reading an autobiography, give it three stars, after all, it is hard for the author to type so many words.