Disability*****

Author, come on, this novel will definitely be a hit

Hmm... Please tell me if you've cut it, don't keep us waiting☆

If you have any comments, please submit them directly [please pay attention] It is impossible to satisfy every reader, but please tell me if there are any shortcomings. Only when there is a direction can we improve.

After reading Chapter 63, the disadvantage of reading fan fiction is that if a new world is added to identify characters, and the reader does not know the background story of this character in the original world, it will be very uncomfortable to read. I don't know what the original background of the heroine is, and what events caused her character. So for me, it is her character that is very uncomfortable to read. The first thing is that the heroine knows the character of the hero, and she also knows that holding the summoner will kill her, but she doesn't save her life, just saying that she will die, but the hero also wants to protect her friends, and the heroine has a contradiction. In my opinion, this is something I can't understand. And what are some of her actions? If you don't respond, you will be misunderstood. That's for sure. However, in the book, there is no clarification about the chapter where she almost killed a child by mistake. Later, it's hard to understand what kind of world this is. But I can still agree with the protagonist's personality. The specific content is pretty good. I'll give it a five-star review.

Come on, well written

The author should work harder to write novels Author, please tell me how long it has been since you updated this book. I have saved this book for a long time. I took a look at it when I had nothing to do and found out that it has been updated.

Personal opinion is okay

Author, please don't stop updating (><)