Fantasy: the Starting System Gave Me a Beautiful Sword Spirit

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There is no need to hesitate about Manxing. The writing is good and the plot is in line with my taste. The emotional change of the sword spirit towards the male protagonist in the back is probably what I and most book friends want to see the most. However, this also means that there must be a lot of foreshadowing in the front. It is recommended to add some interaction to retain book friends. It should be good to get through this early stage and later on.

The writing is still very good! (The reason is as follows [blowing kiss]) The protagonist is not the Holy Mother and does not lick 🐶; It would be nice if the author would change the fact that Shuang'er is Lily in the future; The emotional scene between the protagonist and the heroine is also very good. There is no knife, and the only conflicts have solutions. I look forward to the subsequent development; Also, I think the handling of the protagonist's frequent defeat in high-end games is pretty good, and it's not uncomfortable to watch;

It's okay, but I hate it. It's quite annoying to see such a character appear in the book, so I hope the author can straighten her out later and I'll continue reading. Come on.

There are relatively few good-looking contents that are not very clear. For example, the male protagonist explained the system to the female protagonist. It would be better not to write the system at the beginning and wait until later to let the male protagonist practice elixir formation or let the female protagonist transform into a body with a sword and use the sword to channel spirits. Of course, the author's ideas are the main ones. We readers are just giving some opinions.

I just like to watch movies with more female protagonists.

It's so sweet. The protagonist's unconditional trust in the heroine is so worthy of trust. Even the trump card system is revealed. I like this kind of relationship with no interests but only love. No matter what happens, the protagonist will become a wife and son. I hope to give the protagonist some hardships or give him a little background so that the heroine can be an immortal before. Why can't the hero be an immortal emperor or something? He has lost his memory in reincarnation and the system is his backup [laughter]

It's very interesting, good luck to the author!

It's quite interesting, but there are too few. I personally recommend 10 chapters a day [Thinking] I've finished reading it, it's very good, but... It's still a bit lacking [currently in development]

It's nice to watch, but a bit boring. I suggest you get something that can challenge or take risks.

Beautiful and exciting, with a single female protagonist, excellent [Sending my heart to you]

When to be together

The writing is okay, keep up the good work

It feels ok! Come on

Very good, worth recommending

Good, very good, very good

Very nice, recommended Nice looking..

Yes, come on, author, it's okay to be slow if you don't have any ideas [Love]

Okay, the heroine is very good, she's right, the knife is fine, don't give me the whole big knife suddenly

At present, this book is biased towards daily life, not the kind of traditional immortality writing, but there is nothing poisonous about it. Friends who like it can try [eating melon]

Give me a five-star support, the author writes well, keep up the good work!

It's okay, I wanted to give it four stars. There's nothing poisonous about it, but at the same time there's nothing exciting about it. The secret realm is a bit repetitive, and I keep entering the secret realm. I feel like it's more suitable to take the dog food route and add some plot, which is better than frequently entering various secret realms.

Interesting and novel

There's no big problem, it's just Yue'er, the annoying person

It's pretty good, but the title isn't very good.

Very nice and mindless to watch

It's a bit hard to comment, please give it a try, author

It looks good, the author keeps up the good work

Not bad, looks okay

The protagonists can be strengthened