Hogwarts: Who Do You Call the Dark Lord?

I found a very serious problem. More than one person must have discovered it. It's very dangerous. It will have a very bad impact on your novel and life. Of course. I am on your side. After all, I have been studying for so long. Like this, you can send me all your manuscripts. I'll check it out for you. Avoid avoidable problems as soon as possible~ Right?

I hope it has a single female protagonist. I hope it has a single female protagonist. It's good to watch. I hope it's nicer to Professor Snape. It would be better if there was no female protagonist, but this trend cannot be expected now

The character of the male protagonist is what I like to read, and Hermione also pokes fun at me as the female protagonist. I hope it will be a single female protagonist, and the plot of the apostle will not collapse later, then I declare this book to be a god.

The protagonist is too violent and bloody, but why am I not scared at all but want to laugh? [Laughing and crying] This book also adds other settings, which is very novel. The current pace of the original book is less descriptive than the plot part. +1 Point

I won't comment but I can only say that this feels great, like the mysterious socket man regaining his nose [smile]

From the current point of view, it is still very good. It has its own main plot, as well as its own originality and ideas. Secondly, the handling of interpersonal relationships is more reasonable. At least from the current point of view, the content of the original work is basically consistent, so it is okay. Give me a five-star support and keep up the good work.

The plot is quite interesting, and the male protagonist is a character I like very much, he is a villain. The heroine should have a harem. The interaction with Hermione in the early stage felt very sweet, but later on, it was probably because of the harem that she deliberately had some conflicts with Hermione. However, I read that male netizens in the comment area said that Hermione is useless and weak, and not as useful as other women. I feel a little uncomfortable.

Oops, not bad, but the updates are too slow. New Tomato books are always like this. They are updated twice a day, which is not attractive at all.

At the beginning of this book, it is still in the style of daily comedy, but in the middle and late stages, the story slowly unfolds and the world view becomes more and more grand. Unlike other Tomato books, this book requires some energy to read. The article is generally well written. If you can calm down and read it slowly, it is a good book. However, if you just want to read Long Aotian, it is best to change to another book. Also, author, please update as soon as possible! There are only two updates every day, and they actually have a day off on May Day. If you're not dead, get up and code quickly.

Actually, this book is quite well written. The author's character creation is very good and the writing is quite good. I quite like the character of the protagonist. The writing is quite interesting and I can read it. I give it four stars for the above points. Why not give it one star? To be honest, I don't really want to read books with female protagonists. Then The introduction didn't say who I was paired with, so I thought it was because the protagonist of the book didn't have a partner. Then I looked at a few pictures and realized something was wrong. This led to me reading a book with two male protagonists or one without a partner. I was a bit regretful, but overall this book is still very interesting. I recommend it.

I actually don't rate this book very well. The male protagonist kills decisively and leaves no consequences. It feels more like semi-invincible, but it doesn't have the feeling of Dragon King. The plot is more interesting, and each chapter has its own unique characteristics. The author's writing is good, and you won't feel like you are watching a fool telling you the truth. The advantage is that this book makes people feel very comfortable when reading it. [Blow kiss] Next, let me give you some suggestions. The plot advances too fast. If it is done this way, the book will be shorter. And now I feel that there may be something wrong with the outline. The protagonist grows too fast and the subsequent plot is not easy to advance. Please sort it out and don't stop updating. It is such a good book.

So sweet~ This is the last good one in Harry's "Poor" series after a certain well-written but discontinued novel.

It's so beautiful, IQ is online, not brainless and invincible

Very pretty. But I hope I won't write about the harem. I really want to lock in the CP between the protagonist and Chi Min. Or if they can't be together in the end, I will cry to death.

It looks good, please update soon. You have been resting for a long time. Please update soon. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this. [Cool]

Same Hogwarts, different story, the main plot becomes a branch plot, the new main plot is very well written

No, this book doesn't mention a single female protagonist. Is there a problem? Come on, author. I really want to see how Hermione realizes the protagonist's full face later, and the collision between the Virgin and herself.

It looks really good, but I suggest the author clearly write on the homepage whether it is a story without a heroine, a single heroine, or a harem [Salute]

I finished reading another completed HP today, and I was very moved. I couldn't help but think of this, the first Harry Potter fan novel I've ever read in my life. At first, I just finished reading Harry Potter. I felt like I couldn't get out. I opened Tomato novels for the first time, learned about fan fiction for the first time, and came into contact with this book for the first time. I found that he wrote really well, so I read it day and night, but the author [cryed], I wanted to find a book that could replace this book, but I found that there is no book that can replace you. Can you come back and finish it? I have seen that the high school entrance examination is coming since I just entered junior high school. I really hope that after I finish the high school entrance examination, I will find that the author has updated a lot.

I know it's not easy for you to write a book. We are all just strangers who have never met. It's getting cold. Please take care of your health. Remember to take medicine when you are sick! If you still have a breath, please update the next episode [cry][cry][cry]

The book is very nice and the emotions are quite delicate, I think. Maybe it would be better if there is no emotional line. My uncle also sees that the male protagonist pursues power more, so since there are emotions in this case, I don't feel very good. However, I think this book is still very interesting and I give it five stars.

This is a good book. Except for the upgrade speed problem, other points are well controlled. It's just that I'm tired of having to keep an eye on my daily work. I can't stand reading a novel with a protagonist who is too rational.

The heroine Hermione is fine too, as long as it feels comfortable to write, keep writing.

The plot is novel and imaginative. The writing style needs to be improved, and the way some people speak is very inconsistent with the original characters. It's just a fan, so it's understandable. Overall, it's still a very good article. I'll follow it! [Shy]

It can be said that it is very good-looking. I watched it at three o'clock in the morning. [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] The plot is very good. Anyway, it is good to watch. I love watching it. I like it. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

The hp fan is number one, not even tied, the writing is so good!

I hope the author will keep updating. The writing is really good. I won't be able to see you after I take the medicine, woo woo woo

The best Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read in my life If you like watching Harry Potter, you must come and see it Warm reminder It is recommended that you read this one after reading the original work (the original work is also worth reading) You will have a deeper understanding of Harry Potter

I've read a lot of Harry Potter fanfics, and this one is pretty good, but the author has stopped updating it a lot [crying]

I don't give it five stars because I'm afraid you'll be inflated, and I'm really a little afraid. This book is so good, it would be a pity if it was discontinued later. The writing is pretty good so far. And this book gave me the illusion of two heroines. Keep updating Have a question. If the normal plot line follows, Dumbledore will be sent in the original plot. However, there is a high probability that it will not follow the original plot. After all, Grindelwald is still there. I'm still looking forward to what will happen to the protagonist after Dumbledore sends it. Okay, I really stopped updating. It's a prophecy