At the Beginning, I Came to the World of Cultivating Immortals, and the System Gave Me Invincibility.

Overall, it's okay, but it's too short, which is a pain for my sister-in-law [laughs]

I have a small suggestion: from top to bottom, there are peak masters/hall masters (emperors), true elders (quasi-emperors), inner elders (great sages), outer elders (god kings), and handyman elders/stewards (tianzun). If the author has his own ideas, I won't tell you.

It's still pretty good-looking, but a bit too everyday, but it's fine for casual people. But it's still a bit of a pity. It's a pity that I didn't see what I wanted to see. [Cover face]

I started following the last book, so am I considered an old fan? Give it a thumbs up

I really like this book written by this author, and the reading is also very good.

At first, I heard from a friend that this book has pictures, but after reading it, I found that the author's writing style is also very good! I also saw many comments and the author Da Da responded, and I feel that the author Da Da is a great person, so I will decisively follow the author Da Da Da and look forward to the author Da Da Da's new book. From today on, I will be the author Da Da Da's die-hard fan [Adore][Adore][Adore]

The shortcoming is that the sect must have ordinary disciples, set up outer sect elders, inner sect elders, recruit ordinary disciples as system tasks, and then the sect protects its shortcomings. It would be better to have a few more conventional plots and stories.

The story is great, but the emotional line with the eldest disciple is a bit rushed. Although it is a female protagonist, this should be the reason why the author writes fantasy for the first time. From the later stages of Xuanjian Continent, the plot has become more and more rushed, and the ending also seems very hasty. But it is well written and very enjoyable. It is a rare and interesting article with logic.

I've read books about recruiting disciples and creating power, but not many, and I've never read a book like this that directly reaches full level at the beginning. When I was reading it earlier, I saw someone saying that there were about ten poisonous points in the beginning, but I didn't see any poisonous points. Even though you already knew what was going to happen next when you saw the plot, it still felt quite interesting.

It's okay. The male protagonist doesn't drag his feet. I haven't seen the plot of slap in the face so far. It's good, good, really good. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] Keep up the good work.

It's very comfortable to watch. It's not like you just destroy the family just because you are strong. The character of the protagonist is very good. Of course it's comfortable to watch. I want to read more [laughing]

This book is the best book on immortality I have ever read.

Well written! No CP. Only invincible and cool! Looking forward to your next work! Come on, come on, come on!

It's really super pretty! ! I finished reading it in an afternoon. I really like the characters, but it's too short [please update]

It looks great. When will the heroine come out?

It's not bad. If the protagonist had more competitors, or if there were actually many continents besides Tianxuan Continent, there were also many forces, many strong men, and there would be many great emperors of the Four Realms. The story with them would be over.

It's very beautiful, very good, the author's writing is very good, I like the content very much

Are they all practicing the Void Bible? Is this the only method?

It's very enjoyable. I'm a diaosi and I like to watch it.

The advantage of taking photos is that you can use memories to keep you warm when life is cold.

I find it quite enjoyable. It's not bad. Just look at the quality of my bookshelf. This book is not bad.

The male protagonist is strong. But he should be closer. You should also have a partner by your side!

It speeds up the update. It's great. Thanks to the hard work of the author. The sentences are not cluttered and the sense of inclusion is very strong.

I really like this kind of sect training article. Others are either fighting or destroying the sect.

Although it is not a new theme, it is much better looking than other similar themes. Especially Qin Wudao, this guy is a living treasure in this book. Good!

This book is also very beautiful.

The world of cultivating immortals is not about fighting and killing, but about human relationships. This book explains these very well, but the end of the book is too sudden, and I was caught off guard!

Okay, Wudi Wen, although it went very well, it was not pleasant and a bit bland.

What I like most about this book about cultivating immortals is that the writing style is more relaxed and naughty, and it looks happier. Furthermore, the master-disciple relationship between the male protagonist and the disciples is well written, and the family generally enjoys it. The emotional line between the male protagonist and the eldest disciple is relatively obscure. It is considered a foreshadowing but not stated clearly. It can be considered that there is no female protagonist! The portraits of the disciples are also relatively well done.

It's really good-looking, it's a pleasure to see, and the description is delicate