Siheyuan: Ding Qiunan at the Beginning of the Blind Date

Generally speaking, it's okay. I'm not cowardly. I'm just a bit verbose. I know the plot clearly and act decisively. I understand the principle of not killing a snake but suffering its consequences.

The writing is weird. The protagonist has been bullied by the Jia family. Why does he talk so much nonsense but refuses to call the police and call the street office? Moreover, Qin Huairu saw Jia Dongxu abandon her and run away. How can he still take a fancy to her? ? ! It's not like he's the only one. The protagonist is about to go to work, and it's not like he has no job. Qin Huairu can still marry Jia [laughing and crying]. The protagonist didn't mess up his marriage. He talked a lot of nonsense with Yi Zhonghai. With his two-ear photon skills, he just talked nonsense. There were too many unreasonable things.

Anyone can write

I just can't figure it out, Jia Dongxu still wants to get married when the Jia family is like this. He won't stop until he turns it into porn, the protagonist can really endure it

It's so confusing, Ding Qiunan and Qin seem to be more than ten years apart.

It's boring to read. The author's writing skills are not good, and the protagonist is not well written. The Jia family is too generous in terms of money. Marrying Qin only cost five yuan as a gift. Here, it is more than ten yuan for the matchmaker. It is unrealistic.

I wrote about loneliness,

If the author continues to write like this, you will definitely become a great author one day. Come on, come on.

What are you writing?

I don't want to talk about anything else. Just write that price, that price, and I will act directly.

What the hell has changed inexplicably?

The introduction does not match the content...

It's okay. I don't know if the author chose a bad name or is too lazy to do it. The name of the protagonist sounds really awkward. Can it be changed?

Tui, garbage.

It's so fake. Didn't the author even read this? , It cost tens of thousands of dollars in the 1980s. Too rich

The language is inconsistent, ask an editor to take a look at it for you.