[Single female protagonist] [No system]
The young man in the novel is crazy and has a violent liver. His sudden death leads to the end of the novel. Who knows that he will be reborn in his own novel world?
I wanted to help the protagonist become the Immortal King and the Immortal Emperor, so that I could complete the novel and not bear the name of a eunuch.
Who would have thought that my handsome male protagonist would turn out to be a chic and free-spirited knight-errant.
No matter, I, Wang Erben, am the author of this world! All magic weapons and elixirs were obtained by cheating.
Huh? Why do I feel like our protagonist looks at me strangely?
Huh? Our protagonist Xianzhen doesn't like seafood, but prefers a bite of candied haws?
Huh? How did the talented protagonist from our famous family become the devil that everyone is afraid of?
This is different from the outline I thought about!
I? Who I am?
Let me tell you, I am the little follower of the Golden Fairy Emperor!
Reader comments
Brief description: This book has a single female protagonist, and is more of a nurturing character. It's a bit slow and not fast paced.
It's easy to see Lin Qingyu's emotional turmoil towards Wang Er, as a defeated dog witch is interspersed in the plot. The purpose should be to promote the female protagonist to confirm her feelings for the male protagonist, from friends to lovers. Single-female protagonist stories usually focus on this point. What the author wants to give readers a sense of experience is the gradual promotion of the emotional changes and comparison between the male and female protagonists pursuing each other.
At present, it seems that the main clues that promote the plot are Wang Er's preparation to enter the back mountain, the purple gang, and the new characters and new conflicts introduced after Wang Er enters the back mountain.
To be honest, if you want to write better later, you must set up ambush on some small forces, and then pull out a person who hinders the heroine from becoming emperor. According to the routine, that "obstacle" must be seriously injured or even killed. Otherwise, Wang Er and Lin Qingyu's relationship, which was just a touch away at the time or had just formed a weak relationship, would not be able to go further.
That's all there is to understand about this book so far.
I would like to write about my happy time with the above words.
It's old wine in a new bottle, with an emotional line, the main plot and embellishment, a bit of a harem and a bit of a single girl, I guess I haven't thought about it well, the introduction looks like a harem, so it's okay, the main thing is that the writing is novel, it just depends on how the author writes the rest. Anyway, I think it's good, if you are interested, you can check it out
Okay, okay, I think it's okay for the time being, but it's best not to do that kind of bloody plot, and don't do that kind of harem plot.
I'll give it five stars first. If I write about the protagonist having an affair with other girls later, I'll give it one star.
Author of pretty tiles
Some anecdotes, but the story is good
Come on, author, you write really well [I learned it]
The characterization is okay and it suits my taste, and the plot is also good.
Brief description: This book has a single female protagonist, and is more of a nurturing character. It's a bit slow and not fast paced. It's easy to see Lin Qingyu's emotional turmoil towards Wang Er, as a defeated dog witch is interspersed in the plot. The purpose should be to promote the female protagonist to confirm her feelings for the male protagonist, from friends to lovers. Single-female protagonist stories usually focus on this point. What the author wants to give readers a sense of experience is the gradual promotion of the emotional changes and comparison between the male and female protagonists pursuing each other. At present, it seems that the main clues that promote the plot are Wang Er's preparation to enter the back mountain, the purple gang, and the new characters and new conflicts introduced after Wang Er enters the back mountain. To be honest, if you want to write better later, you must set up ambush on some small forces, and then pull out a person who hinders the heroine from becoming emperor. According to the routine, that "obstacle" must be seriously injured or even killed. Otherwise, Wang Er and Lin Qingyu's relationship, which was just a touch away at the time or had just formed a weak relationship, would not be able to go further. That's all there is to understand about this book so far. I would like to write about my happy time with the above words.
It's old wine in a new bottle, with an emotional line, the main plot and embellishment, a bit of a harem and a bit of a single girl, I guess I haven't thought about it well, the introduction looks like a harem, so it's okay, the main thing is that the writing is novel, it just depends on how the author writes the rest. Anyway, I think it's good, if you are interested, you can check it out
Okay, okay, I think it's okay for the time being, but it's best not to do that kind of bloody plot, and don't do that kind of harem plot.
I'll give it five stars first. If I write about the protagonist having an affair with other girls later, I'll give it one star. Author of pretty tiles
Some anecdotes, but the story is good
Come on, author, you write really well [I learned it]
The characterization is okay and it suits my taste, and the plot is also good.