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Logically, it shouldn't be evaluated. After all, it's still a fanatic period and it can't be fair and impartial. But if the score is less than 8 points, then it's fine. Just one question for the time being: a common problem among new authors is that they talk too much. There can be narration, but not too many, which will affect the reader's experience. Then it turned out that a routine was used (starting with the character's narration to trigger the following to advance the plot) but it required a high level of authorship. In my opinion, this routine did not achieve the expected results. But it won't turn into a poison point (maybe I have high poison resistance and am immune to this). Only then did I remember that the author stacked armor at the beginning, but did not use this armor. Since there is A, I shouldn't lower the rating (if there are no big problems later) In this Sichuan City Guard Battle 666, it means that you, the author, started with stacked armor, otherwise it would have been changed to 2 stars by now. Okay, delete the book

This author is a master, the plot is exciting, the plot is very attractive, and the content is something I have never seen before. It is very enjoyable.

Come on, author, believe in yourself, your writing is beautiful! ! !

The setting is very good, the content is very interesting, and there are a lot of funny jokes [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] The actions of the top human beings are disgusting. When they see the male protagonist having SS weapons, they want to grab them. The male protagonist's not-so-awesome father will probably be forced to rebel. I still really like watching content where the male protagonist is forced by such high-level officials to run against the human race [face-covering][face-covering]

It looks good, the subject matter is quite novel, I can't stand drawing cards, and the characters are well developed.

The content is good, the setting is okay, the plot is well-organized and pretty good, the characters only have a lot of physical descriptions, and the character autobiographies are not bad, but nothing impressive, the characters are distinct, there is a harem plot, it is still boring, you can read it, as long as it keeps getting updated, it will be a good book.

The author is already called foster father, so it's not enough if I don't give it five stars!

To give an objective evaluation, I think it's pretty good-looking. Maybe it's because I've read too many cool articles. I don't understand why the rating is only 7.8, Which is a bit low. [Sending my heart to you]

Don't take a break, even the production team's donkeys can't give you a break... I'll update it with the scriptures (¯―¯٥)

Not bad, come on, I hope you won't rush into it

This, you call me foster father, give me five stars

Is the author playing with eternal calamity [Thinking]

Cut off water and power, clean equipment, clean raw materials, clean the site

Some chapters were mediocre, and I almost gave up on the article. Unexpectedly, the author saved all the highlights for the later stages, so I decided to continue reading.

The writing style is excellent, and every sentence can quietly arouse the reader's interest in reading, and it is quite immersive.

Rating: good He's a pretty good author

After reading it for a few days, the child liked it very much. I hope the author will update it four times a day.

Bibo Ran, but the author is too weak

Many female protagonists are colorful and beautiful

The author is very nice and the book is also good

It's okay, come on

It made my blood boil, but it was too short and disappeared at the most exciting moment [face covering] The author is a novice, writing for the first time. The beginning is good, but the rest is quite satisfactory.

Oh oh, damn shit yellow button~

I was almost dissuaded by some book reviews, but after reading a few chapters, except for a few awkward places, the rest of the book was pretty good.

The author is really good, very kind, and I must give it five stars.

The content is organized and substantial, not too watery. The protagonist still has a brain, at least he won't kill irrelevant people indiscriminately.

It's not bad, the plot is rich, the setting is a little novel, and the look and feel is strong, but it's a bit short. I hope the author will update it soon. [Praise]

Okay, but the male protagonist is not single-minded.

Very nice (little vocabulary)

I checked my eyes, you are from MapleStory