Genshin Impact: Yae and Kage? Already Captured!

It would be bad if there was no harem

If my brother has such an attitude, it would be better not to update it at all. It would appear that I am being unreasonable and making trouble... That's all. My brother is usually so free and easy, but it's just a pain for my sister-in-law. I should be satisfied with one chapter in a few days, lest my brother say that I am a little bit angry again.

It's quite normal. For this protagonist, some things should not be too obvious, otherwise it is easy to be blocked. You can write a little bit funny, but don't be too funny, otherwise it will not be true.

It's not bad, keep it up. To be honest, your book needs to be refined in other directions. There are still many ways to write fan fiction. Being too restrictive will reduce the beauty, but you can jump out appropriately. To be honest, I have read quite a lot of Genshin Impact fan fiction, but I have been looking to marry Ellie. Alice's text, but it's a pity that I only found two of them, which is a pity (Alice is my personal favorite [shy], don't mind, wouldn't it be nice to turn Keli into a biological daughter? Isn't there really a beast who has thoughts about Keli [awkward laugh] If so, then it's really not about martial ethics)

I keep talking about the plot, what about it?

In my personal opinion, if you remove the "ah" in the narration, it will feel better when listening to the book. Otherwise, it will be very strange. The tone of a declarative sentence rises inexplicably. Of course, it may be my personal reason, but the book is still good [full]

There is too little written now, so I need to keep my mentality stable. I think the author's mentality is not very good. Anyway, keep working hard. I hope it won't stop updating. The writing is okay, but the original plot is maintained. There may be a point in not making changes. There is also a protagonist who is clearly said to be powerful, but it is hard to see where he is strong.

I can read it, the writing is okay, generally better

Does the heroine have Beidou?

? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ! ! ? ? . ,,,,. ? ! ! ? ,? When I was,? How many people are there in our class? You stopped sending me a message? ,,! . , I don't believe I can't even stand eating? I don't believe it. That's why I don't know if I can find a job. ,! We are different

Just help the author directly. How can such a beautiful book be buried under @each other's wings?

The article is quite exciting and worth reading [laughing evilly]

Support, come on author＾0＾~

I want to see Hutao hehehe

Take it easy, don't get locked up

Not bad, worth a look

Awesome, come on, don't let it down

After reading it a few times, I have to admit that being blocked is indeed a golden sign, but this one is too careful.

Personally, I think it's okay, so go for it.

This is a very good write-up. Although the current data is not good, I believe it will get better. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The writing is good, and books are my favorite type.

Give it a five-star rating and support it.

Five-star praise support

Hey hey hey hey hey

Personally I think it looks good

Keep on don't stop

Very nice looking

It's good-looking, but it's a bit sparse. It looks a bit like a eunuch [face covering]

Very well written, keep it up.

I hope the punctuation marks can be well marked