Little Hermione, Join Me in Becoming the Demon King!

First! Come on, don't end it like other Hermione fan novels after just a few dozen chapters. Yeah, yeah, it's well written [Like]

After Swinging the Great Sword and Professor Dark Lord, this is another Harry Potter fanfic that suits my heart very well. There are no serious inconsistencies in the characters' personalities, and the plot arrangement is reasonable and very innovative, which is great. The Hermione in this book is the most lovable among the books I have read. She has quite a lot of scenes. She is not a flower vase. She is very, very sweet with the protagonist. It makes me so sweet [laughing and crying]. The protagonist is also very, very powerful, gifted and very strong. It's really good-looking, highly recommended. After reading it, the ending was unexpected and perfect! Elias, congratulations🎉🎊

It's very interesting. As for the four stars... Because most readers have read Harry Potter and have a God's perspective, the behavior of Elias (who has not read the original work) feels a bit awkward and stiff. Fortunately, it only has a few chapters. Overall, it is very interesting. Back in time... The book fell apart a bit

Overall, the structure is very clear, especially in describing the emotional line between Hermione and the protagonist, the author's writing is very delicate. It can be found that the author is a person who likes to write emotional dramas very much. However, through some small details, we can find that the author did not read the original work very carefully. In the whole novel, there may be some discrepancies with the original work, but I think this is understandable. Overall, it is a very good Harry Potter and fan-like novel. It is highly recommended to read. Overall, the framework is closer than the original Harry Potter. (After all, Harry Potter fans know that Rowling can only write Harry Potter, but does not understand Harry Potter) Don't comment if you don't like it, it's just my personal opinion [laughter][laughter]

1. In terms of character design: there is nothing inconsistent with the character design. 2. The plot is still readable to a certain extent, even if you have not read the original work. 3. In terms of writing style, you can substitute it. There is no primary school student writing style. 4 People feel that I am currently halfway through reading. The romance plot with the heroine is a bit lacking. I don't really love Harry Potter, but I just like seeing Hermione fall in love, so I reluctantly continued reading.

It can be regarded as a masterpiece of HP fanfiction. The writing style is very simple and the writing is delicate. The characterization of the characters is mainly for the protagonist group. However, the timeline of the plot is a bit messy, especially about the relationship between the protagonist and Slytherin. This hole has not been filled yet. It seems that it was mentioned to half a student, waiting for the author's response.

It is a very sweet book. The protagonist and Hermione are very close to each other in their daily life. The whole story is also reasonable and does not demonize any supporting character in particular. Voldemort is a mascot. Although he caused a lot of trouble for the protagonist, he was not the boss in the end! But someone you wouldn't expect. A more exciting fanfic, recommended!

It was very comfortable to watch, and the description between the protagonist and Hermione was very spot-on and sweet. Anyway, I laughed through the whole movie, but it was a bit fast at the end, and there were still a lot of holes left unfilled, so it was slightly flawed, but overall it was good.

In this book, the author really wrote his own thing. It is not sweet and greasy for the sake of love, nor is it cold and robot-like for the sake of strength. Instead, it is an ordinary person with seven emotions and six desires like normal people. He likes to sleep in and eat delicious food. He has a vivid character and just hopes to tear Quirrell into pieces and destroy him.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, there are very few people who can watch Hermione as the heroine. If you like Hermione, don't miss it. The plot, the strength of the protagonist, and the sweetness of the emotional scenes are all worth watching.

A great book, not so much a formula for coming to the magical world and wanting to do something big, but more like an experience in the magical world full of warmth and adventure. The interaction with Hermione is also very nice, and there are some little cars

My favorite line from Elias: "The courage of Gryffindor is noticed by all, but the courage of Slytherin is silent." It is simply a perfect portrayal of Professor Snape. I love this understanding [blowing kiss] Well, and Regulus

This daily routine of sprinkling sugar all the time is very natural, comfortable, and won't make you feel tired. It's so sweet! ! The couple's daily life is very natural, unobtrusive and coordinated. For example, emotions and small interactions are slowly added to the daily life. The sprinkles are just right, not the kind of sugar that is deliberately written. The daily life is also very detailed. For example, they don't care about the thing itself but care about each other first. You can see the other person's faults or emotional changes from some small details. Hermione does not have OOC. She retains the image in the original work and her mind is also desperate for love, which is exactly the same as my ideal lover image! ! ! (It looks very comfortable) By the way, I picked it up on my second brush, because I saw so many good authors writing about Hermione. ————Support support

Personally I think this is the best HP article, but why is the wind so low? [What][What][What][What][What]

Personally I feel pretty good. Fighting is fun. What is rare is that the author did not just follow the plot, but brought some new tricks. It can be said to be a very innovative work in HP novels. Needless to say, the protagonist is great, and the villains have also been strengthened. There are many good foreshadowings in the plot arrangement, which become more exciting the more you look at them. And with Hermione... It's pretty sweet so far. As for whether there will be a knife in the future, ahem, author, you will know what to do [smile], otherwise... [You take a closer look] And, update soon!

It's good-looking, better than most fanfics. Although there are not many poisonous points, the "Devil King" Goldfinger disappears after traveling through time. It can be said that the ultimate emotions are mentioned later, but it does not greatly improve the protagonist's combat power. What's more, I haven't seen the appearance of the Demon King's form category until now. It is said to be the love seal with Hermione. That's it, so I will give it four stars~ The overall content is still very good.

Super awesome, really. I rarely use words like super. Although I have only read about 1/6 of it, it can be seen that it is an excellent fanfic. I haven't finished it yet, so I won't go into details. I really recommend watching it. After reading it, I feel that I regretted adding it to the previous review. I have restrained my praise. I highly recommend it to Hermione. There are many interactions. Other aspects such as the plot and the expansion of the power system are also very smooth, especially the history of wizards. It uses not many words to reveal the tragic history of wizards. Hermione is definitely in the first echelon of heroines. I can't prove it because I don't want to spoil it. I really hope everyone can read it.

Harry Potter was re-released recently, but I felt a little unsatisfied after watching it, so I came to Tomato to read Harry Potter fan fiction, and by chance I came across this novel. This novel is really good and worth reading.

There's nothing to be picky about. It's an excellent work in a fan article. It doesn't follow the plot like other works, but it doesn't deviate too much from the original work. It's great. (As for some people who may say OOC, I can only say that this is a fan article. Different experiences will inevitably make the characters develop different personalities. There is nothing to argue with. Hermione, who is different from the original work, is very likeable [shy])

The early and middle stages are good, but the pace obviously speeds up in the later period. I still like this book quite a lot. The description of events is very graphic. I hope the author can write an extra chapter as soon as possible to finish the events after the end, such as the life of the protagonist and Hermione, the shop of the Weasley twins, what happened to Filch, etc.

A super cool Harry Potter fanfic. The heroine is Hermione, and the daily life with the protagonist is really sweet. The protagonist is very awesome, a super academic, and has very few roles in the system. Is it actually a seal that the protagonist left for himself hundreds of years ago? The plot of the whole book does not develop completely according to the original work (although I have only read the first few parts of the original work). There are also many laughs in the story. Voldemort can be regarded as being pressed and beaten by the protagonist throughout the whole process. In the end, the boss did not expect that Slytherin was resurrected. The ending is also perfect, and Dumbledore is not dead. The author writes beautifully!

The difference between this book and other novels is that in the early stage, the main character is Dumbledore (much larger than) Voldemort (slightly larger than). The protagonist grows up very quickly but still has many shortcomings in the beginning. Most people say that the poisonous point in chapter 22 is basically over as soon as it appears. The only point is that it made Hermione sad for a week, which made me a little angry. There is also a very reasonable explanation behind the male protagonist's golden finger. Apart from the inexplicable appearance of the panel, the protagonist's abilities have roots.

This book is very good. I have read a lot of Harry Potter fanfics, not to mention a lot. In my opinion this one is the best among them. But there is a little flaw, but it's nothing serious. Then I want to ask why such a beautiful book has such a low rating? Author, you can encourage us to push it in the book wasteland at the end of the chapter.

An excellent second creation. Things that are different from other novels are described in more detail in the book. Some of the textual expressions are a bit lacking. The relationship between Hermione and Elias is not delicate enough. There could be more of that! The plot is relatively compact and innovative. The content is novel and has the plot development and psychological activities of the characters in a novel. It is a major feature of the book that it brings people to life. Dumbledore's human choices are also very good! Great work, the disadvantage is that the update is a bit slow! ! ! !

It's quite ok. The plot is a bit modified, but I basically respect the original work and add a lot of my own settings. The modification is also in a good-looking direction. The writing is mainly from the perspective of the protagonist. I watched it for a long time. It's very interesting. I recommend it.

To be honest, this is the most comfortable novel I have read in my 7 years of reading novels. It's really good-looking, the pace is not fast, not brainless, the style is very good, can you update it more quickly? I finished it in two days

No system, no bugs. As a person who has never read the original work, and whose memory of Harry Potter is stuck in the movie more than ten years ago, it does not affect my viewing experience. It's a good story just following the author's plot. Although the male protagonist and Hermione are childhood sweethearts, they didn't have a car during the whole journey, which wasn't sweet enough. I won't miss you for this candy either [rolls eyes]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! The plot is great and not too abrupt, and Hermione and our Yishen are also very sweet! Please be sure to update Tiantian's extra story, they can do anything [cry][cry][cry]

It's very interesting. I gave it 5 stars for reading all the chapters in one go. The sweetness of the heroine Hermione has gradually begun to increase, but now it is only the second part of the plot. They are in second grade and they seem to be only 13 or 14 years old. No wonder the sweetness does not increase much. However, the plot of the second part feels very advanced compared to the original work. Maybe it won't be as late as The Relic of Death? But the protagonist needs to grow up, otherwise the images in his mind will still look like a child's Hermione [face covering]

It's very interesting, especially a fanfic that is not OOC and will not be disliked. It will develop a plot that is different from the original plot and will not break away from the world of Harry Potter. So far, it seems to be reasonable and interesting. It is a rare fanfic that is not OOC and has a new plot and a taste of the Harry Potter world!