The Fate of the Country Is in Danger: I Am Immortal and Will Be Exposed by the Heavenly List

Why hasn't the other protagonist come out yet? [Rolls eyes]

Behind the scenes, as long as there are a few chapters without text, there will definitely be more people coming. What about the newsletter?

80,000 Words... And it hasn't appeared yet...

Can you believe that the protagonist didn't appear in more than 30 chapters [Read carefully]

Five-star water-filling king, 120,000 words ~ the protagonist makes a decent appearance...

It's chapter 34. Why doesn't the protagonist come out? He's dead in a coffin? ? ?

Emm, why hasn't the other protagonist come out yet? Let's raise it first. It depends on luck if you can find it.

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

The plot is quite good. Many people think that the main character appears late. This is true. However, I personally don't think this is a big problem because the plot does not advance abruptly and the gradual process will be slower. Maybe I haven't read a similar setting, so so far I think the writing is quite good and quite attractive. I hope the author can update more. There are few chapters in the new book, which makes it a bit unsatisfactory. If you update more, I won't want to read it again. The main point is that I am an impatient [facepalm]

Just read Chapter 38 as Chapter 1

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Um, how do you say this book is a combination of Western and Eastern elements? I think it has a Japanese comic style, especially the Loli part. Well, it seems that many people like to read it, but I think it is a bit ridiculous. If it is an anime, I think it is quite good, but the novel has not written too many chapters, so I can't relate to it. And then there is the character of Chen Fen. To be honest, I am not good at it, but to be honest, the writing is okay, although many people think it is verbose. But in fact, this kind of detailed description was still very common in the past. Maybe it was too impetuous. Everyone just wanted to eat it quickly. I feel like it would be better for the author to write articles that require a lot of knowledge to foreshadow. Otherwise, I read in the comments that you are a character from a previous anime, right? Many of your words are used to describe the background and experience of this character. Maybe you want people to understand and then pave the way for the following. But your pace is very slow and I can't extract effective information. I can't read it carefully. Generally speaking, it's not bad. It would be much better if you have more chapters and more words. If you want more views, you can only update a lot of chapters. After all, I haven't seen anything that can keep what I read every day. And I don't see what the author wants to highlight. Is it the unity of the country, the friendship of brothers, the love of Shuangnan, or something else. If you write in a balanced way, it will depend on the volume. Anyway, at the moment, I may occasionally think of it and check how many updates there are, and then read more like this.

My educational level is relatively low, or it may be that I have an impatient personality and cannot read this kind of book.

"Where is the missing protagonist"

First of all, the preamble is too long and the protagonist only appears in chapter 30. There is too much nonsense. I suggest that if I write the next book, I should write the protagonist in the second chapter.

It's very interesting. You can try a few chapters. It's rigorous.

It looks pretty good, but the foreshadowing is too long.

The theme is very good, the plot is novel, but the protagonist appears too late. In fact, you can introduce the protagonist in more than 20 chapters, but this is your book, the author. I only make relevant suggestions and continue to work hard. I give you a thumbs up.

I think this book is quite good, but it is a slow-moving one. If you don't have the patience, don't read it. When writing this book, the author wrote a lot about the country, thereby neglecting the protagonist. I hope the author's writing style can improve greatly. Five stars is a great recognition for the author. Keep writing! Come on! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Yes, it's just that the other male lead came out too late [face covering]

The plot was very good because there was too much foreshadowing, which made me want to jump while watching it, but it turned out that it didn't get in the way. The main character didn't appear until almost 30 chapters, and I felt tired. I also hope that the more I write, the better.

I think it's okay, except that the protagonist appears a little late, but all the characters' personality descriptions are very good and feel very relevant. If you are impatient and can read the first few chapters, you can jump directly to the third and third chapters. It should not affect the overall content of the article.

I like that there is no female protagonist, and it's best if there is a little ambiguity between the male protagonists.

I understand, Chen Fan is the male protagonist and Jiang Chen is the female protagonist

Awesome, the progress at the beginning is a little slow, I skipped to read it, but the protagonist's identity is revealed later, which is okay, and finally reveals the world view, and then the characters that appear later are also very good, finally it is not a story about the protagonist crushing the world.

Very well written, I lost one point because of the name. Why don't you change it to Uncle A's original name? Is it because Jiang Chen sounds nice or something [smile]

This is one of the more exciting books I have ever read, and it has two male protagonists.

After more than 40 photos, someone from the coffin jumped out.

Who is the protagonist? Chen Fen or Jiang Chen?

It's okay, I can bear to watch it from the front. It's only about twenty chapters and the protagonist hasn't appeared yet. But I feel that the one named Chen may also be a protagonist. After all, they are two male protagonists. It's okay, I can bear to watch it from the front. It's just that the male protagonist hasn't appeared in more than 20 chapters, but I feel that the one named Chen may also be a male protagonist. After all, there are two male protagonists. (Why wasn't the comment posted just now? I did it again)