Immortality, Old People, Old Scenery, Old Mountains and Rivers

Really good fairy grass, I haven't seen such a beautiful fantasy in a long time, the last one was still bad, author, please come on!

To be honest, I have found this book to be very good so far. The plot and characterization are all very good, but I don't know why the rating is so low. I also read the reviews of the author's two previous books and it was beyond my expectation. Many people said it was not well written. But here I really hope that the author can write this book better, and then I saw the author said that in the future he will be a knife apprentice, I really want to say, can I not have a knife apprentice? Really, I beg the author not to kill my little apprentice, she is really having a bad life, I really hope the author can give her a good ending [crying] I decisively abandoned the book, and the poisonous spots began to appear.

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day. This is true every night.

This is true immortality. Rather than the boring extra points

The writing is very good. I read through the comments, and they all mentioned toxic points. The character is broken. Let's talk about the part about the voice transmission technique for the apprentice. How many eras have the protagonist met for? So what if this era is ruined for his apprentice? There is also the art of meeting and sending the emperor. No one will think that these are very important to the protagonist. Everyone wants to bring in the character of the protagonist. An immortal who has lived for an unknown amount of time. Basically, if you look carefully at these questions, there are traces to follow. It's just that some people have read too many cool articles and are unwilling to use their brains to see the logic. Don't be stubborn with me. Those who are stubborn can go back and read your mindless cool articles.

I have read many longevity books, and this one is the best. There is also a book called "Eternal Life in the World of Martial Arts" written by a crazy demon that is also very good. This book really has the feeling of an immortal

When I read about Chapter 4 of Volume 2, I felt that it was a good one among longevity novels. Now that I have read it, I feel good. I hope that the author will continue to work hard and not collapse the plot in the later period (Personal humble opinion: I feel that the plot is a bit high, I hope it can come back round)

The potential for a masterpiece, except for the minor flaws in the language, is very good. The plot is innovative and fascinating. At the end of the day, I hope there will be a female protagonist [smile][smile][smile][smile]

Now that I have read the second volume, I feel that the writing is good. Many of the places have good intentions. The only thing is that millions of residual thoughts are gone. I feel really sad. Maybe there are too few people who treat each other sincerely. Millions of residual thoughts have passed away for you. I am really moved by the affection in it. , Both have good definitions of justice. Jiutian is for immortality, and the protagonist is for liberation from what is right and wrong. There is indeed a lot of evil in the world and one does not know its evil. Most of them are in the world of mortals, so they just follow the waves. I think the companionship of the little apprentice is very cute, but the protagonist has probably seen it too many times, and looks at everyone. I was born as a fool and have become numb over the years. In fact, I think the young apprentice is relatively lucky. When I have seen the protagonist have feelings, the other four million immortal emperors are even worse. They will never melt after a lifetime, so I feel that the emotional writing is still very good. If you can feel something after reading this book, it is a good book for me, hahaha.

After reading it, I felt a lot. I think it's enough for this kind of book to be well written. I just want to see the logic. As for the setting, I don't care much about the plot.

I don't know why the rating is low, but this book is really good. It is suitable for old bookworms who have read a lot of books. This is a good book that can only be read if you know how to taste it. Not someone who just likes to fight and kill.

After reading this book so far, what impressed me the most was Bingfeng's sentence: 'I tempered my body with the extremely cold air in the world, and I have never felt cold in several lifetimes'. She spent hundreds of millions of years of companionship in exchange for everything, and to the immortal, these hundreds of millions of years are just a fraction of the time he has experienced. When I saw the conversation in that memory, I really felt sad for Bingfeng, and because of this I am looking forward to the follow-up of this book.

Excellent work. If the follow-up can maintain the level of the first volume, it will be a masterpiece! But this kind of immortality article is really difficult to write in a long way. I look forward to the author's follow-up performance and whether he can avoid falling into clichés.

3.5 Stars, 1.5 In terms of character design, the protagonist's personality is in conflict, and the beginning is a bit dissuasive, but the plot in the back is excellent, a kind of alternative immortality, but it's a pity that this book cannot last long [I understand] There is also the fact that the author's plots are not connected smoothly, and there are many things to express, but there is no reasonable arrangement, which makes it a bit abrupt. But all in all, it's still worth watching. PS: The author's last novel seems to be a short story as well [laughing]

This is the second way to transcend the way of heaven besides the system. This book amazed me

It's beautiful, and the concept is weird and magical, no matter which angle you analyze it from. The immortals are very consistent with the characteristics of the immortals, and it is suspected that the author is the immortal. Everyone wants to live forever, including me. Eternal life and my pursuit, thank you for giving me a different perspective.

Hello author, I just read Chapter 24 and couldn't help but come here to review. This book is very good. It speaks directly to my heart. I have read several good books, but this book stands out among the good books.

It's awesome. It's the only novel in the same genre of Tomato that doesn't skip a chapter and has unfinished meaning. The author really writes it in, instead of just talking on the surface. It's really rare to feel something after reading a novel.

After a brief evaluation, I personally feel that it is a food and grass book, but the content is relatively small and needs to be laid out slowly in the future. 1. I personally feel that the main content and setting of the article are good, and the protagonist is very similar to an immortal and a cultivator. 2. In terms of plot logic, because the author has his own outline, I can only evaluate it subjectively ヽ(*ﾟｰﾟ*)ﾉI feel that the plot likes to use a set of logic and concepts to drive the world view.

The rhythm and plot are steady but not chaotic, the characters are distinct and three-dimensional, the descriptions are delicate and easy to understand, and the content is novel. It can make people calm down and think, unlike some novels that sacrifice the understanding of the ordinary in pursuit of a fast pace. It has both ordinary people's extraordinary understanding of cultivating immortals and the love that belongs to ordinary people [Like]

I like this type of writing very much, but there seems to be an indescribable difference from other longevity articles [Thoughts]

I have been a fan of entrance halls for more than 10 years. This book has great macro-ideas. I don't know why I felt calm after reading this book. It can make my unhappiness disappear. I haven't updated for a few days. I hope it won't be a mess. Keep writing, you are better than Ergen👍

It's really good. It captures the loneliness of eternal life. I feel good about the first few pictures so far. I don't know if the later ones will be boring. Many novels are good at the beginning but not so good in the middle.

Immortality novel, this is the true mentality of an immortal person, the plot is definitely top notch

This kind of book is relatively rare, especially in Tomato. When I read this book, I always think of the scene in Immortal Ni where Wang Lin transforms into a mortal. Maybe this book is also a reference. If you want to transform into a god, you must first transform into a mortal. The description of the cause and effect of the cycle of life and death is really similar, but some of the wording can still be improved. Overall, it is eye-catching.

It's good-looking and very different from the longevity novels I've read before. The author is also very thoughtful, especially for the setting of the characters. Time has passed in the blink of an eye and thousands of years have passed. This is the pattern of the longevity novel [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Another Li Qiye, another beginning of Emperor's Domination [Adoration] It feels the same as Emperor Domination

I don't read many novels, but I think this one is pretty good.

The author is back to update! Please, please, please It's almost over As long as you are not invincible, you can have enemies from heaven.

I just finished reading the first volume. It's very good and to my liking. The rating is a bit low.