[Two male protagonists + book-traveling system + double strong, cool and self-sustained, powerful, forbearing love for the master × silently forbearing, focusing on the overall situation, affectionate apprentice]
As a person who travels to the book to promote the smooth development of the plot, Luo Chen is very clear about his position - an NPC that is not very important but indispensable.
He respected the plot in the original work and worked hard to block harm, give up position, and take the blame for the protagonist. In the early stage, he was a dignified and steady disciple of the Changqing Sect, but in the later stage, he was an evil disciple who killed innocent people indiscriminately. In fact, it didn't matter what his reputation was, the only thing that made him sad was that he had tarnished the person who was like the clear moon in the sky.
Reader comments
Beautiful writing, great characterization
Three correct views
It's difficult to write about my feelings, it really pokes me
I didn't skip a chapter, I read it carefully.
Really, I think this is definitely the best master-disciple story besides Erha (no ky meaning)
I still feel bad after reading it (｡•́•̀｡). The characters are well created and the writing is beautiful. It's a second-hand novel.
I want to ask, is it above or below the year?
I really like it! ! ! ! I really like it, it's the style I've always wanted, but why BE! ! ! ! ! Help, I like this type of novel, the language is really clear, I read it to the end without stopping, but it turned out to be BE? ? ! Master, ahhhhhhhhhhhh, let them be together! ! ! ! Let me be careful about the host of the inner demon, okay? Oh, I really do. I obviously like it very much. I look down on you if you don't change the ending of HE. Please give me a big candy. I like to watch abuse, but nothing that makes me heartbroken. Let me sacrifice and let them marry me! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Is it the beginning of the year or the end of the year? Master, please stand up and be stunned.
It's so in line with my taste, please come on ＾0＾~
It looks good, it looks great, but the updates are too slow, and it's not good enough at all.
It's really good to watch. I hope the author can continue to persevere. The plot is relatively new among Tomatoes. The emotional experiences of the two protagonists are also well portrayed. Come on!
It's not ordinary beautiful, the writing is very good [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]
Is Master accepting it? [What][what]
Please update the author quickly [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
The writing is very good, and the characters of the male protagonist and the master are really interesting to me. They are both very gentle people, but later on they started to abuse, and they gave out some sweets during the abuse. It made me cry and laugh at the same time. Halfway through, I felt that the ending was going to be bad! I kept watching without giving up, and I actually became bewildered at the end [crying] [crying] [crying] I cried to death
It's really well written! I really like Luo Chen's character! ! ! ! So gentle! !
The plot description is particularly good. The author brings his characters to life. But the ending of be is a bit confusing
Good luck to the author, the writing is really good.
It's very interesting (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, the plot is very attractive, and the characters are also great, so keep up the good work! ^ω^!
The writing is so good, I love it [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]
Great reading, looking forward to the next chapter
Very interesting, thank you to the author! ! !
It's beautiful, but it's a bit uncomfortable to be.
A very beautiful book. It's difficult to understand. The characters are very good. I like the gentle and gentle Luo Chen. The master is indifferent but meticulous. The plot is smooth and natural. Every twist and turn is very profound. There is a touch of sadness in the back. I highly recommend it. I hope everyone can read such a good book.
I really like [love][love], please try my best to update [send heart][send heart][send heart]
The writing is very good! And it's to my liking!
It's really good-looking, I really like the gentle ones, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh please keep up the good work, don't give up, I really like it! ! ! [Love][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
It's a good read, I hope they can know that they have each other in their hearts soon
Well written, great author
It's beautiful, but the ending is be.
Why is there no one reading such a beautiful book?
The ending is really heartbreaking
The author has made a side story, but the article is beautiful. The author's writing style is really good.
The writing is very good, it's above the year level, but it's be! Run quickly.
This book is not discontinued, but has been completed.
This book is very nice.
It's been a long time since I've seen such a novel double male majoring in immortal literature. I like it.
Beautiful writing, great characterization Three correct views It's difficult to write about my feelings, it really pokes me I didn't skip a chapter, I read it carefully. Really, I think this is definitely the best master-disciple story besides Erha (no ky meaning) I still feel bad after reading it (｡•́•̀｡). The characters are well created and the writing is beautiful. It's a second-hand novel.
I want to ask, is it above or below the year?
I really like it! ! ! ! I really like it, it's the style I've always wanted, but why BE! ! ! ! ! Help, I like this type of novel, the language is really clear, I read it to the end without stopping, but it turned out to be BE? ? ! Master, ahhhhhhhhhhhh, let them be together! ! ! ! Let me be careful about the host of the inner demon, okay? Oh, I really do. I obviously like it very much. I look down on you if you don't change the ending of HE. Please give me a big candy. I like to watch abuse, but nothing that makes me heartbroken. Let me sacrifice and let them marry me! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Is it the beginning of the year or the end of the year? Master, please stand up and be stunned.
It's so in line with my taste, please come on ＾0＾~
It looks good, it looks great, but the updates are too slow, and it's not good enough at all.
It's really good to watch. I hope the author can continue to persevere. The plot is relatively new among Tomatoes. The emotional experiences of the two protagonists are also well portrayed. Come on!
It's not ordinary beautiful, the writing is very good [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] Is Master accepting it? [What][what] Please update the author quickly [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
The writing is very good, and the characters of the male protagonist and the master are really interesting to me. They are both very gentle people, but later on they started to abuse, and they gave out some sweets during the abuse. It made me cry and laugh at the same time. Halfway through, I felt that the ending was going to be bad! I kept watching without giving up, and I actually became bewildered at the end [crying] [crying] [crying] I cried to death
It's really well written! I really like Luo Chen's character! ! ! ! So gentle! !
The plot description is particularly good. The author brings his characters to life. But the ending of be is a bit confusing
Good luck to the author, the writing is really good.
It's very interesting (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, the plot is very attractive, and the characters are also great, so keep up the good work! ^ω^!
The writing is so good, I love it [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]
Great reading, looking forward to the next chapter
Very interesting, thank you to the author! ! !
It's beautiful, but it's a bit uncomfortable to be.
A very beautiful book. It's difficult to understand. The characters are very good. I like the gentle and gentle Luo Chen. The master is indifferent but meticulous. The plot is smooth and natural. Every twist and turn is very profound. There is a touch of sadness in the back. I highly recommend it. I hope everyone can read such a good book.
I really like [love][love], please try my best to update [send heart][send heart][send heart]
The writing is very good! And it's to my liking!
It's really good-looking, I really like the gentle ones, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh please keep up the good work, don't give up, I really like it! ! ! [Love][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
It's a good read, I hope they can know that they have each other in their hearts soon
Well written, great author
It's beautiful, but the ending is be.
Why is there no one reading such a beautiful book?
The ending is really heartbreaking
The author has made a side story, but the article is beautiful. The author's writing style is really good.
The writing is very good, it's above the year level, but it's be! Run quickly.
This book is not discontinued, but has been completed. This book is very nice.
It's been a long time since I've seen such a novel double male majoring in immortal literature. I like it.