Pirate: Bai Tuan Heard My Voice

The plot in it is really connected one after another, but I particularly like Marco's plot and the plot with Ace, which I kind of miss. There is also a place where Ace the cat squats. It's very cute when you think about it. It's really super pretty! ! !

The girl is very cute! Very immersive! And the emotions are handled very delicately! In the latest episode, the younger sister goes to rescue someone who was kidnapped by human traffickers. Some people comment on this, saying that she protects herself and puts herself first, but I think the younger sister is the protagonist, and one of the protagonist's characteristics is that she can do whatever she wants. Just like Ace, he knew that he might not be able to defeat Whitebeard, but he still went. How to say it? There are always some things that are more important than life, not to mention that she is the protagonist. My sister is a child in a peaceful era. For the darkness that is directly spread out in front of her, compassion is inevitable. She saw the suffering in front of her and chose to try to save it. I think she is great. The method may be a little inappropriate, but the idea is good. If my sister really lets it go, I think it will be OC. My sister's personality has always been gentle and cute but she never lacks courage.

Like it very much. Very detailed description

It's very interesting to watch. It's the first time you can watch the mind-reading flow. The psychological activities are logical and not verbose, and the emotional scenes are natural. I wonder if there will be an emotional scene between the Straw Hat Pirates and Sabo in the future TT

It's very interesting. How can I put it this way? It really fits my understanding of a normal girl who travels to the world of One Piece without a golden finger. The character of the heroine was well created. At the end, it felt like the heroine didn't really accept it but really had no choice. The plot was very well written. There were no pitfalls and all the pitfalls that needed to be filled were filled. It's just that the heroine is so well portrayed. When the abuse gets to the point, I really can't help but worry. What is the difference between this kind of time travel and a human trafficker? I feel like my acceptance of feelings is still a bit hasty? (Maybe there's really no other way to go) (Close eyes)

It's a very good article. The protagonist integrates very naturally. There is no cheat except being able to communicate freely and understand the text. The protagonist does things that every Haimi can do. Such an ordinary person is on this ship, and there is no sense of disobedience. The inner story of the protagonist is also well written, not as verbose as the same type of "listen to the heart" articles. None of the crew members of the Whitebeard Group are seriously OOC. The author's writing is very good, but it is too little to fatten up before reading. I recommend it.

This is the first One Piece fan novel I have read. It is very good. There is no system and it changes yourself a little. It is good. There are also extras besides the independent main text, which can satisfy CP fans. As a reader of the original plot, I was satisfied with Ace's emotional regret for his parents who loved him until his death, which was really good. When I watched the drama, I felt very sorry for him. It is clear that the child who is expected to be born by his parents is loved, but although he is cheerful, he always doubts his own existence. This is really good.

My family members listened to me and even Haimi read this book. This book is amazing. Not only are the characters real and there is no OOC, but the daily life is also warm and funny. In the end, when Ace meets his father, that part is interlocking and echoes back and forth. All the holes that need to be filled are filled in, forming a direct relationship. It's a closed loop. It's absolutely amazing. I really cried to death. This kind of novel should be above 9.0. Listen to me and read this book. It comes from a strong recommendation from a ten-year-old Haimi. I guarantee that you will regret it for the rest of your life if you don't read it. [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] [Learned]

The author's writing is very detailed, especially the depiction of Yaoyao's entire growth psychology. It feels like Yaoyao's integration is very natural. I like it very much! Everyone can jump in. I haven't watched One Piece and it looks very comfortable!

I like it. I feel that Yaoyao is very gentle and spicy. Of course, the guy with white beard is also very gentle to Yaoyao. Very warm words.

The plot is reasonable, the heroine grows up in a reasonable way, and the emotional line is not sticky and dark. I hope the author will work hard on the road to perseverance. The inspiration is unique. The connection between the characters can be grasped more and the key details can be locked to write in detail [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Finally updated, the writing is very good, I hope the author will work harder When can I meet Bai Tuan and the others? I can't wait to see it [Send Heart]

It is a very heart-warming fan novel. You can clearly feel the author's love for all the characters, and the portrayal of the characters is very consistent with the personality. Sure enough, the best thing about fan fiction is making up for regrets. Among so many fanfics, this is the first time I saw that Ace blocked Akainu's fist, saved himself and Luffy. In other articles, I was very moved when I saw the protagonist saving Ace, and Ace survived again, but this article completely made up for it. I wanted Ace to defeat Akainu, save Luffy, and smile freely in the sea with Whitebeard's will on his back. No one can resist Ace's smile. I really like one comment: becoming the Yonko was Ace's original destiny.

Such a beautiful novel is still being updated. I cried [crying] Come on, please [please update] [love]. In the end, I probably won't be able to hear the heroine's voice. Otherwise, if the heroine finds out, she will run away far away. She and Ace are so cute, I'll kill them [laughing]

I like the ups and downs of the heroine's heart. If she really dares to kill someone for the first time with a knife, I would find it very strange. It would feel like the heroine is just a tool to advance the plot. I have also read some novels about the protagonist's inner transformation. So far, the author has handled it very well. The heroine is a living person, and I don't think any of the characters are OOC. Good luck to the author! I'm optimistic about you [like] [like] [please give me more updates] [please give me more updates] [love] [love]

I really like it. I have been reading for a long time. This is the only one that I have been following for updates for so long. Come on, the author. I feel that the heroine's mission is very three-dimensional. It has been so long since the heroine became a pirate. I feel that the heroine is alive with flesh and blood. All the emotions are progressing layer by layer. There is also a series of things that happened when she and Ace traveled to Roger's ship more than 20 years ago. It is the first time I have read this kind of content. It is very novel, including Ace, Thatch, and Dad. They did not die, which makes up for the regret of me or many pirate fans. It also makes our little brother equivalent to "rebirth". That was the last straw for Tikki, but the heroine was still very conscious. Now on the airship, the first thing the heroine asked was who governed this island. When Luffy and the others asked for the name, she said it's up to you. I really feel sorry for her. Finally, I want to say that I will continue to chase her. [Laugh]

I read the author's book overnight, and the plot is very good. I have never read One Piece, and I was immediately hooked after reading it. The author fills in the holes and it is very interesting. I hope that our heroine Yaoyao can return to her home in the end. After all, it is her only dream. (Some passages made me cry.) The writing is very good and the plot is smooth. I want to say the last thing! I stand by Marco! ! ! Who doesn't like mature men? There is also the joy of consuming CP, and there are also touching plots, growth, comedy, and promises. It is all there. I give it a big five stars. It deserves a 9.0

It's okay, it's not bad, it's very sweet, and overall it's very good. It's a little embarrassing in some places. The heroine's character is good, but there is a little flaw, that is, she is too kind, but that's normal. After all, he was pampered in a peaceful place before. The plot is very good. Also, can the author update it quickly? Love to watch

The character design is not broken, it's very special and beautiful. Dear author, I have reread it more than 5 times, please update it quickly! I can't live without you [crying]

This book is okay, a sweet short novel. Yaoyao, Ace, Marco, and Red Hair are all delicious. In the early stage, Ace and I were childhood sweethearts who had a rough and tumble fight, but when you play straight ball, you know that this guy is completely stupid! He and the captain are very tolerant, with a faint adult desire for control, and the interaction between the two is also very cute. There are too few red hair!! But there are some bumps, like the first kiss? This article is really painful to write about the feelings after the truth is revealed. It makes people feel the pain in their bones. It's so unfair. Why am I the only one who doesn't know? The loneliness and growth of the protagonist in a foreign land are also well portrayed, except that Yaoyao cannot return home. All in all, this is a recommendation

I want to see a spin-off of Shanks, although Ace and Marco are also very cool, but it is Shanks who has been waiting for 23 years that makes me feel the most distressed😭Ace and the others knew about Yao Yao's time travel but kept it secret. Only Shanks, only Shanks was so good from the beginning to the end😭😭😭It's a pity that there is no spin-off of Shanks😢

Finished reading! It's not a loss if you enter the trap! Marco's party is satisfying! Like Yaoyao, I have no resistance to gentle and reliable men! My wife's writing style and imagination are superb. I thought that reading mind books would be awkward, but my wife grasped it very well and it was super smooth to read, without any embarrassment of toes grabbing the ground. Thank you, madam, you are a great pirate fan.

To be honest, it's very immersive. I always thought that the heroine would be with Ace, but the heroine also understands that Ace prefers freedom, which is not a better choice. Ordinary people have ordinary lives and adventures. If you have bonds, you can't look back. The setting of "family" is very good. The Whitebeard Pirates are home, Roger and Ace are family members, Luffy and Ace are family members, the Whitebeard Pirates are a family, and they are also family. It's just that I feel very painful when I look at it later. The heroine is not free. She gave her the ending she once wanted, an independent life, but she sacrificed her "home". She is free, but she is not free. It is a very compact plot and a perfect ending. Ordinary people are like this, training step by step. In fact, most of them rely on talent. I am so envious. I am so envious of things like talent. I have a lot to say, but the author's writing is so great that I really entered Yaoyao's adventure.

Super high quality! Yaoyao (Yao Yao) is the most gentle girl! [Laughs] Yaoyao has also grown up little by little from the peaceful era to this sea, but she cried to death in the later period, almost crying after watching it with tears in her eyes [crying]

A hundred faints! ! ! The heroine is super cute! I didn't read it for a long time after I added it to the bookshelf because I saw that the introduction was a bit all-encompassing. I was afraid it might be something like Shura Field, but it wasn't at all! The author's descriptions are very restrained. Basically, the relationship with the heroine is more affectionate, and he also likes the heroine because the younger sister is a very good person. Many of the descriptions really make watching another episode of the anime not embarrassing at all.

After reading it, I was really energized and made my aunt laugh all the time! ! It really restores the character! ! It doesn't work anymore, I still hope to try it again. The little brother Ma and Ace in it are really so charming, screaming——! ! Everyone has their own personality and characteristics, and the author writes it really well!

The different One Piece is not following the protagonist, nor is he dominating the world of pirates by himself. The different perspective makes up for a lot of frustration. At first, I felt that the heroine was weak, but the more I watched, the more I felt that the character was alive and real. She should be like this. It is also very heartbreaking and beautiful. Recommended

Super super super beautiful! ! ! The various psychological activities of the heroine are also very real, and it is a rare fanfic that I can fully understand. I especially love the interaction between the heroine and Marco! ! ! ! Please update please update [crying]

Nice! I never thought flow reading could be so beautiful! I thought it would be a step-by-step routine, but the first surprise was taking Ace to travel through the past to get along with Roger, and the second surprise was taking everyone to participate in the war on top. Although the heroine's personality change is a bit extreme, overall I really like this book, recommended!

Sure enough, it makes sense that it has such a high rating among the many One Piece fanfics on Tomato. The writing is really good. When I first read the introduction and it said about mind-reading, I hesitated for a long time. I felt it would be very embarrassing. I didn't expect that after reading one or two chapters patiently, I found that my worries were unnecessary. The author really grasped the degree of mind-reading in a special way. Well, it doesn't make people feel uncomfortable at all, and the writing is very good. The emotional lines are very smooth and delicate, and there is no overly gorgeous writing. It is this plain and natural writing that attracted me. I feel like a vivid "Yao Yao" is displayed in front of me. It is very attractive. It is really a super article!