I'm Already a Swordsman, Why Are You Still Calling Me a Diaosi?

[Laughing evilly][laughing evilly] It's okay, come on. The style of this article is a bit like gossiping, but if you like this style, you can read it

This book should be a very realistic book. The positive and negative sides of this society, the real side. The contradictions in human nature, reflection and compromise in real life, as well as the stubbornness of mortals and the cowardice in the bones of little people are all very good. A certain type of people appears in the war, but in reality there are many, many more! If a fight really breaks out, I believe there will be many people like that! While reading, my back felt cold and I was very worried. If you see this comment, you might as well read the last dozen chapters. Of course I still recommend this book [ stare ]

What can I say before? Well~, it's very immersive and the protagonist is well portrayed. You can watch it.

The perspective is unique, the imagination is wide open, the refreshment is moderate, and there is a sense of immersion.

It's written normally, and it's really good after reading it. It's too little at the moment, but it will become popular later.

The author said that it is the first time he has written a book. I think it is already very good. I have been a bookworm for more than ten years. Maybe many people who are used to reading cool articles think it is average, but I think it is very good. Just like the author said, "Regret is the normal state of life." In fact, there are many details in the book that are worth writing in detail. This way, the number of words will be more and it will be more in line with reality. I remember reading a first-person book called "My Monastic Life" many years ago. It was a bit similar to yours. The writing style was not bad. The author can learn from it! Last but not least, the metaphors in the article don't need to be so long [I understand]

So far the writing is pretty good, the plot is bland but engaging. Makes people want to watch it. However, I don't give it full marks because maybe the author hasn't written many books. Some of the plots feel inexplicable, and it wouldn't hurt even if they were deleted. So give it 4 points

Come on, author, your writing is good [eating melon]

So far, the protagonist is still a bit of a doormat, not too cool, but the logic is much better than other brainless pretenders, and the logic is stronger (the character's growth mentality is more realistic). Now the character's growth is relatively in place, and I hope that the coolness will change in the future.

Looking inside, it gives people a novel feeling in the same tomato pit. Come on, it's over 80%

Personally I feel the writing is not bad. Good aspects: The logic is smooth, there are many foreshadowings, and there is a strong desire for expression. It gives people a bright feeling. The bad part: around the last 40 chapters, I felt like the author didn't want to write anymore, and the writing just took a turn and wanted to force the ending. What I like most is that the author digs a lot of holes, but in the end fills them indiscriminately, or even doesn't fill them at all. But these pits are quite nice. Personally I think it's worth watching

The perspective described in this book is both very real and very unreal. The truth is that his character is really a loser, and we are all losers. What's unreal is that he can figure it out and refuse when faced with temptation. But it also depicts the balance in my heart. The book is good, but the difference is wrong. Hope to see your book break the nine point zero mark

This is the only novel about immortality that I have read, and it is very well written. Unlike some novels about cultivating immortals, you are invincible at the beginning.

The protagonist is very realistic, and there are very few cookie-cutter clichés. There are very few of the outrageous poisonous points like Tomato. I just read too many cool stories, and I feel that the pace is a bit slow. There is too little promotion in one chapter. Come on, author.

The author's autobiography from another world [laughing] It's pretty good-looking, but I don't think there's anything sinister about it. I hope it's a single heroine. The harem is so disgusting. Who on earth would watch a harem?

The word "xia" has countless interpretations. Ma Liang is not perfect. Just like us. It is because it is imperfect that it is more real. So does the author. As a first book. Jumping through timelines and faults are handled in a non-obtrusive way. Good book. A rare good book. The combination of reality and reality is very harmonious. This book is well written, but it is natural that it will not be popular. This book would have been a hit ten years ago, at least it was moderately popular. But the environment didn't allow it. There is only one ending for this book's popularity - add three spoons of sugar

Humane and very objective. Very real! An ordinary citizen. Suddenly I got this opportunity. The description of the mentality is in place, it should be more than 9 points. Why does it stop updating after writing it? Sure enough, good books make people jealous.

After reading it, I was basically satisfied. It's not about how well written it was, but how durable it was. I finished reading it in the early morning of the next day after 25 years. The author worked hard and wrote it in an ordinary way. I like to read it...

Maybe there are some flaws in this book, But that doesn't stop it from being to my liking at all. This is a rare tomato novel to finish reading! The greatest advantage of this book is that it is unconventional; Even going to the jade farm seems very novel. More logical, Not too brainless! Maybe not all old bookworms will like this book, But mindless books are even more annoying to old bookworms. Maybe it's because mindless cool articles are more profitable. So there is a reason why I can never find a book I like to read in Tomato. Also: The three views of this book are very correct! This is very, very important! ! !

It's so well written, I must continue to read it.

The author must be a very special person and he is making rapid progress. Come on

The score of 6.6 Is low and should be at the level of 8 points. The characters are well drawn and fit the theme well

The language in the first few chapters is simple but very relevant. The middle part is a bit long-winded, but the plot is watchable It gets a little messy later on. This book has a good idea, about diaosi cultivating immortality. The protagonist has always been true to his heart, but is limited by his own vision and information channels. He thinks that the country is powerful, so he wants to keep a low profile, but he doesn't know that he is already invincible. I have been following this idea, writing slowly and slowly, adding more training and mission plots, and Xiaobai, as the number one in combat power, also participating in some battles, and recruiting some beauties from around the world or recruiting some followers, etc., Which can greatly expand the story and increase readability. Considering the author is writing a book for the first time, encouragement! I really like reading urban immortality novels. In the past, urban immortality was all about the Dragon King with his crooked mouth and killing everyone. I got tired of reading this. This book is still innovative, but the author's control of the plot needs to be improved [laughing]

After raising it for a while (I was fascinated by the plot of the protagonist in a small country, so I put it down for the time being. Now that I have returned to China, it feels like the normal plot has begun. Then it will be a leisurely daily routine that I love to watch. It seems that I will tell the plot of the 749 game in detail. I am starting to be interested. I urge you to update [Breaking news]

How to say it? In fact, there are some poisonous points, but they are very slight (in fact, as long as these poisonous points are not too critical), compared with other novels, this book should be considered a little above average. Moreover, this novel has relatively few words and chapters, so it is not easy to evaluate. I will give four stars to encourage the author first [smile]

This book was very frustrating to read. It's not that the author didn't write well, but that the protagonist was really miserable. But this may be something that a normal person will encounter after suddenly encountering immortality. The cruelty of reality is far beyond your imagination. Gou Dao is the kingly way. If you are not invincible, don't waste your time. . .

The plot is compact, not draggy, and the descriptions are wonderful! Come on come on

It's well written, but it's a pity that it's still the framework of an old-fashioned fairy tale, but it captures the real thoughts of people at the bottom.

After watching it for a while, it was pretty good. It whetted my appetite. I'd like to encourage you first and don't stop updating. Delete the soul control technique. It's too unreasonable. Many things can be solved by soul control technique, but there are no specific settings. It's better to delete it.

An urban cultivator not to be missed. Single-person cultivating without all kinds of weird and powerful figures, only simple personal cultivating.