Supernatural Crossover: From the Start, Yukino Makes Me Turn Myself In

Wow~ Judging from my more than ten years of reading experience, this book is really the author's painstaking work! (Stick reading)

Not bad, not bad, really good. I hope the author can learn from the lessons of the previous book and not write any poisonous points while grasping the strength of the book.

I'll give it 4 stars first, and let me tell you my opinion, because I have only read Chapter 28, which is the third copy, and there are still about 10 chapters that I haven't read, so I won't comment specifically. Let me just say the one thing that I feel is most problematic is that there are too few realistic plots! ! Why do you say that? Because this is a dungeon novel based on the second dimension and animation, and the talent of the protagonist also shows that the dungeon of this novel is not that kind of wits, so it is decided that there may be plots (meeting various anime heroines or female supporting characters), but most of the situations are still reckless (such as fighting a butcher, which is reckless). The theme of your novel is determined to be based on the second dimension, so you shouldn't go to the dungeon so frequently. The reality is just brushed aside? ? So what's the point of reading your novel? Why not read more interesting "fighting of wits" type novels? That kind of plot links are linked one after another, and the routines are endless? Of course, the writing of this novel is also very good, otherwise I would not be too lazy to comment. After all, each novel has its own style. In my opinion, the plot of this novel, at least so far, is pretty good, but there are too few realistic plots, which makes the theme of this novel a bit off-kilter and a bit boring, because most readers of this novel are mainly based on the second dimension, followed by copies, a type that is relatively rare in the second dimension. So I still hope that the author can make improvements and get better and better in the future.

The rating has increased, the writing is quite appetizing, some readers may not accept the humorous language, but I think it is quite good. Can the protagonist's combat power be shown in more detail [making a face]? The protagonist is very strong now, but he keeps fighting BOSSs that are stronger than him. You can write some scenes where the protagonist abuses other people, but it is best not to drag out the prelude too long. Just write that the protagonist's territory expands and other people are sweating, or the protagonist becomes a fool who makes jokes and understates it. Can the protagonist's profession evolve into [Tyrant]? This sounds more exciting than [Butcher]. I hope that the protagonist can be more "elegant" when facing enemies in the future, and feel a bit neurotic 😘[Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It was okay, but the part where the main character was boasting was a bit difficult. But if you don't think about it, you will think so if you have multiple systems (probably), and it is unlikely to be possible if you want to see a quick payout (I think). If you finish it quickly, those characters are already there after all, with good depictions (or bad ones, don't comment on your personal opinions, if you have different opinions, you are right). I read in the comments that some people said that they always bring rookies, and I can't stand it anymore. If you want to accept it, you have to get to know it first, although it is a bit classic. All in all, it has flaws but is still watchable.

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The death of a beautiful female character in a beautiful urban post-apocalyptic novel, no matter how carefully it is described, I don't feel much about it, but if the heroine dies in it, I feel uncomfortable [I almost cry]

Overall it looks okay.

Why choose Japan? The story is very good The author's story logic settings are very novel and very good

It's okay so far