Comprehensive Comics************

Wow~ Judging from my more than ten years of reading experience, this book is really the author's painstaking work! (Stick reading)

Not bad, not bad, really good. I hope the author can learn from the lessons of the previous book and not write any poisonous points while grasping the strength of the book.

I'll give it 4 stars first, and let me tell you my opinion, because I have only read Chapter 28, which is the third copy, and there are still about 10 chapters that I haven't read, so I won't comment specifically. Let me just say the one thing that I feel is most problematic is that there are too few realistic plots! ! Why do you say that? Because this is a dungeon novel based on the second dimension and animation, and the talent of the protagonist also shows that the dungeon of this novel is not that kind of wits, so it is decided that there may be plots (meeting various anime heroines or female supporting characters), but most of the situations are still reckless (such as fighting a butcher, which is reckless). The theme of your novel is determined to be based on the second dimension, so you shouldn't go to the dungeon so frequently. The reality is just brushed aside? ? So what's the point of reading your novel? Why not read more interesting "fighting of wits" type novels? That kind of plot links are linked one after another, and the routines are endless? Of course, the writing of this novel is also very good, otherwise I would not be too lazy to comment. After all, each novel has its own style. In my opinion, the plot of this novel, at least so far, is pretty good, but there are too few realistic plots, which makes the theme of this novel a bit off-kilter and a bit boring, because most readers of this novel are mainly based on the second dimension, followed by copies, a type that is relatively rare in the second dimension. So I still hope that the author can make improvements and get better and better in the future.

The rating has increased, the writing is quite appetizing, some readers may not accept the humorous language, but I think it is quite good. Can the protagonist's combat power be shown in more detail [making a face]? The protagonist is very strong now, but he keeps fighting BOSSs that are stronger than him. You can write some scenes where the protagonist abuses other people, but it is best not to drag out the prelude too long. Just write that the protagonist's territory expands and other people are sweating, or the protagonist becomes a fool who makes jokes and understates it. Can the protagonist's profession evolve into [Tyrant]? This sounds more exciting than [Butcher]. I hope that the protagonist can be more "elegant" when facing enemies in the future, and feel a bit neurotic [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It was okay, but the part where the main character was boasting was a bit difficult. But if you don't think about it, you will think so if you have multiple systems (probably), and it is unlikely to be possible if you want to see a quick payout (I think). If you finish it quickly, those characters are already there after all, with good depictions (or bad ones, don't comment on your personal opinions, if you have different opinions, you are right). I read in the comments that some people said that they always bring rookies, and I can't stand it anymore. If you want to accept it, you have to get to know it first, although it is a bit classic. All in all, it has flaws but is still watchable.

The death of a beautiful female character in a beautiful urban post-apocalyptic novel, no matter how carefully it is described, I don't feel much about it, but if the heroine dies in it, I feel uncomfortable [I almost cry]

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Overall it looks okay.

It's okay so far

Why choose Japan? The story is very good The author's story logic settings are very novel and very good

Looks good, five stars for encouragement

Inexplicably, it feels like seeing Samsara Paradise again.

So far overall good. It's just that the benefits and dangers in the dungeon do not match, and the protagonist's new dungeon is the most dangerous. The third screening dungeon is said to be an elimination dungeon. As a result, the zombies are too weak and there is a safe house in the survivor camp. Strengthening potions can be picked up through airdrops and can also produce special abilities. It makes sense that zombies are generally regarded as newcomer dungeons. The author also added strengthening potions. The profits are huge but the danger is not enough. The existence of the newbie Xiaotiao Youshihua makes the previous dungeons and the old people become a joke.

It's okay so far. I would like to give my personal opinion. I hope there will be more battle scenes, and some realistic wild monsters and Japanese-style monsters can be written. I personally hope that there will be less descriptions of love. I feel that there are too many youth romances written now.

It's pretty good. Let's add a ranking list when the time comes. When everyone enters the nightmare, it will be considered the first wave. There will also be characters who can be added as practical teachers.

This kind of subject matter is quite rare, but it is good-looking

It's very interesting, good luck to the author

Well, the plot is good, that's it.

Tomato really lacks this kind of book, come on

Not bad. It feels like an infinite flow.

Author, if you write about game dungeons, one dungeon shouldn't take too long.

By the way, have you heard about the recent biochemical mother body killing the national uniform mirror [laughing]

Good looking, come on author

If nothing else, I recognize your driver's license. Score your driver's license

This book made my eyes shine. The author is very creative. If you like variety comics, you can try reading it. It's very good [laughing] but it's too short. Author

Good unlimited streaming, only nominal anime characters and personalities, original plot

A good comprehensive comic novel [Blowing Kiss]

Okay, now it seems there is nothing poisonous. Please update the author quickly, otherwise I will elbow you😡😡😡😡😡

Overall, it's pretty good, but the third dungeon is too long, and there aren't many interesting plots in the third dungeon, and the feeling of fragmentation is a bit serious.

Personally, I think it's pretty good, but it's still too little now. And the plot development is a bit slow? I hope there will be more. There is still potential.