The New World: Dimension Era

As a newbie's work, it's surprising. The storyline is compact and able to attract readers. It would be better if the character descriptions and background descriptions could be richer. Although the writing skills are not mature enough in some places, this is inevitable in the growth process of novices. It can be seen that the author has potential and creative enthusiasm, and looks forward to further growth and breakthroughs in the work.

There are quite a lot of funny jokes and the content is quite detailed, but the pace is a bit slow. Come on, update quickly

New coordinates for online games, I like it