Pirate: I Refined My Body with Domineering Power and Became the King of Fruits

I turned a blind eye when the Celestial Dragons destroyed the country, and when the pirates killed the Celestial Dragons, I struck hard, and my main focus was to bully the weak and fear the strong.

This is a good book. Not bad, very nice. It's just to my liking. Of course, it would be better if there were more women. After all, in addition to good books, what attracts me is beautiful women [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Author, tell me honestly, have you ever checked the information? Why are there so many loopholes in the plot, whether it's shipbuilding or Ba Jin. An ordinary warship requires 1 billion beli, but the super large one built by the protagonist only costs a little over 200 million? Also, Stussy didn't exist at that time, Stussy was Bar Jin's clone.

You're right, Roger is the clown, and people like Kapuzefa are accomplices

The pinnacle of pirate fan fiction Detailed characterization The plot design is hearty and hearty Kuanggu Shuojin [Like] [Sneaky smile]

Locks is described in great detail, and the protagonist, as the successor of Locks, has no loss of ambition and domineering, and it feels very good. It's just right for me as a middle school boy

The third devil fruit requires one who can live forever. No matter how strong the protagonist is, he will grow old. The life fruit, the vampire fruit, and the forest fruit. These three fruits can live forever and can also heal his subordinates.

Well written, keep up the good work and look forward to the third natural fruit.

For the time being, I have only read the first 47 chapters. I don't know if the rest are good or not, but this five-star award is for Rocks. Rocks in this novel perfectly realized my imagination of Rocks. His character is very cool and his portrayal is very good.

The only one that made me read a passionate pirate novel

I can give this book four stars, why not five stars? Because I don't really like multi-fruit abilities. I prefer single-fruit abilities and rely on domineering. But I have to admit that this book is really well written. From the early stage to the later chapters, every chapter is logical. The first 30 chapters have been about the fight in the Valley of the Gods. Dou, the writing is very detailed, the writing is very good, and the writing style is also very good. I just personally don't like the multi-fruit ability, so I gave it a four-star rating. Personally, I think this book can be rated at 9:0. Ah, it shouldn't be able to go up any higher. 9.0 Is about right.

Since we are waiting for the savior, why can't it be me [cool][cool][cool][cool]

The writing feels very much like One Piece, really, especially the Valley of the Gods, which has more than 40 chapters, reminds me of the days when I watched the War on the Top... It's really ink...

This rating is not scientific, it is well written. Many people are dissatisfied with the fact that many chapters have been written since the beginning of the battle. Nima Locks, Sora, Five Old Stars, Garp, Roger, Whitebeard, Golden Lion, Rayleigh, Warring States, Zefa, John, Wang Zhi, Pansy, Pig's Feet, etc. Everyone has their own characteristics. At their peak, they are awesome and bombarding. It is reasonable to write dozens of chapters for melee.

Maybe I can't read those brain-burning novels, but this novel is the only one I have been reading, because this novel made me feel a little excited and I couldn't keep it up. I read it as soon as it was updated. I read some comments and found that they only wanted to read pure invincible novels, always thinking that if they had a system, they would be able to soar to the sky. Little did they know that when they had such thoughts, they had already withdrawn from the world stage, and the aura of the protagonist that originally shined on them had dimmed. They retreated from the stage and were jealous of the people on stage: If I were like them, I would definitely be better than them, and they must be cheating. But I never think about trying to improve myself

From the beginning to the end, it's Ta Ta Ta, Ta Ta Ta, Ta Ta Ta Tao, and Mo Ta Ta Tao. There are a lot of battle plots. The battles never stop, and they basically don't happen in daily life.

It's pretty good, a passionate drama with a strong sense of substitution.

Among the pirate novels I have read, it is one of the few good ones, with no heroine + decisive killing + online IQ + no Madonna + little invincibility. Every character in the novel is well-shaped, and it is obvious that the author has put a lot of effort into it in terms of language and behavior. The adventures along the way add to the description of the characters, making them more perfect. It's a pity that I didn't pursue it from the beginning. I sincerely recommend this novel, and I also hope that the quality of the new book will be equal to or even surpass it. Finally, I also hope that all readers will give the author a big thumbs up and pay attention!

After reading so many pirate novels, this one is a rare masterpiece. However, the battle plot is too compact and makes the eyes a little tired. The biggest idea in this book is the development of the Tunton Fruit and the Meatball Fruit and the use of Haki for physical training, especially Haki for physical training. To be honest, I was really shocked when I first saw the protagonist using Haki to use his arm to make a black sword. What were the previous novels about? Why is the physical talent invincible? What kind of physical body has broken through the emperor level? How powerful is it? Although it is awesome, it is always empty. What lacks substance is always a bit false. Since the sword can be trained into a black sword, can the body also be trained to have the same effect as the black sword? Just like a fantasy novel, you can cultivate various special physiques on your own and train the body into a black sword! ! ! There is a comparison between the black sword and the body. To be honest, this simply points out a clear path to improvement for the physical body. To put it bluntly, reading the novel is about upgrading and fighting monsters. The process of practicing the black sword is the process of upgrading. Looking at other fanfics, swordsman style must practice the black sword. It turns out that the swordsman style can practice the black sword, and the taijutsu style can also practice the black body! ! ! The upgrade path is simple and clear. You need 5-star Swallowing Fruit to devour everything to restore physical strength and synthesize attacks or substances. For Meat Ball Fruit, you can pop up memory, move at high speed, air cannon, exhaustion, and soul in the later stage.

It's top-notch. It gave me the feeling that the plot was originally like this. This book was really comfortable to read.

The writing is too detailed, and Locks is written vividly. Every battle scene will make you feel thrilling. It is the best pirate novel I have ever seen [Like] [Like] [Like]

It was so enjoyable to watch, it felt even more burning than the original work. Every fight to the death, every breakthrough, although there were failures, it was never easy. He did not hide his ambitions from anyone, and the enemies also tried their best. It makes people feel that this kind of person should have the domineering look.

This book is so good. The author awakens his armed domineering energy in 26 chapters. I must show my new friends how deep the water is

A hot-blooded episode, fighting from the beginning to the end! Especially at the beginning of the battle in the Valley of Gods, some of the details of the battle describing Rocks' explosion of Dark Fruit + Sweet Fruit + Surgical Fruit are really very delicate.

The wild imagination fits my guess about Devil Fruit very well. For books like One Piece, this one has a more colorful imagination. It's beautiful to watch, and the combat descriptions are also very exciting. The character of the protagonist is also very vivid. A very good book to read.

You can also write a lot of novels, leave the line, and slowly improve your strength. Write about battles and feel excited when reading them.

Good, good, good, good, good, good I have already helped the author think of the title of the protagonist, which is called Ten Thousand Beasts, and Kaido is called Hundred Beasts [laughing]

Why is the rating so low? I've read a lot of fan fiction, and this book is really good, and the author has some ideas! !

Personally, I think it's pretty good, and the ending arrangement is a bit interesting. The only thing that imprisons human beings is thoughts and will. As long as there are still thoughts, the world will one day change because of this. If you don't even think about it, it's no different than a piece of pork.

This book is really well written, but it's so great if it doesn't have multiple female protagonists.

Personally, I think it's okay. The character descriptions in the first 40 chapters are okay, especially the inheritance of will between Rocks and the protagonist. I recognize your ambition