The Journey Home Between Me and My Unfair Roommate [Bump]

The unparalleled, tough and beautiful bond between four people; even if you and I are in a desperate situation, we will never give up; it is each other's strong shield and weakness, the hope that is tightly linked together, and the shining will that is unwilling to drown in the darkness——

I originally thought that writing from multiple perspectives would be poor, but this article really portrays several people from different perspectives! Their characters are full and three-dimensional, and their perspectives on each other are more realistic, making them feel more immersed! The plot doesn't feel like it's dragging at all! Powerful! The differences and changes in the background, identity and personality of each person in the article are logical and full of pictures, allowing readers to understand, accept and like them. They have conflicts, concealments, and selfishness. They love and care for each other, but they have conflicts due to their personalities and experiences. They have not seen each other for many years, and they have a morbid feeling that relies on their obsession with friendship. The experience of changes and growth that led to the lack of integration in the team at the beginning, the anxiety and worry about gains and losses when facing the difference between ideals and reality, and the problems caused by their respective imperfections. Details such as these really portray them vividly. This article is not just about cheating and relaxing, but about being incomplete and not being the strongest, truly struggling to survive from the beginning, and truly experiencing the sense of despair and cruelty. When you look at it, you feel the shock and subtle sadness of watching them desperately trying to survive and go home. The character design of this article is not broken. It is precisely because of the character design that the original characters seem very annoyed and aggrieved. However, in their eyes, who do not understand anything, what they did is right and good. It is reasonable but seems to be true. (But I can't dislike them, except those damn things.) The plot does not blindly follow the original plot. The original content, including the experiences of the protagonists, is reasonable and true, not obtrusive at all, and it is very smooth to read in one sitting. It's playful and deadly at the same time, with full damage points and a peaceful death, I can't help but watch it. Especially this style of writing gives people a strong sense of immersion, and every cut is QAQ Dad, tell me, the ending is serious, right QAQ, once you kill the main character, you are not allowed to kill him again! Please! The child is almost drowned by the knife! ! !

It's super beautiful and truly depicts the real concave and convex world. It's cruel and cold-blooded. If you travel through the past, you won't have a good life experience and you'll just be left to survive.

It's very good-looking. It's rare for the protagonist to have a complete personal survival and growth trajectory in the concave-convex world. In the concave-convex competition, he is more like the original contestant. The writing and description give people a sense of immersion without being inconsistent, unlike some other fan fictions that have a game attitude of checking in for sightseeing. The friendship between the protagonists is also very well described, supporting each other to persevere in the dark and concave world.

Ohhhhhhhhh is my favorite roommate chapter, I take off my pants to the boss (uh no) I love you babies wwwww [sending heart]

The whole story trend is very satisfying to me. I am shouting from the author from afar, one! Certainly! Want! Four come and four go back, don't four come and three go back, four come and one goes back [crying] They must clear up the misunderstanding, strengthen their faith, never change, their faith will light up the way home, they must be safe, and come back well to me! Home! This is the article that I desperately want to read among so many fics. I more or less want to read other fics but I really don't want this one (╥╯╰╥)ง. I just like the idea that they have to go home even if they live in another world. You and I are both Chinese (proud). The author really writes well and don't stop updating. This is the most popular convex fic in history for me. Great support for the author (* ⁰̷̴͈꒨⁰̷̴͈)=͟͟͞͞➳❤ (Already downloaded (∗ᵒ̶̶̷̀ω˂̶́∗)੭₎₎̊₊♡)

The work is very good, but the first part about suspicion, concealment, and not telling the truth made me uncomfortable, but the later parts were quite enjoyable. The previous emotional breakdown is nothing to the aboriginal people, but to ordinary people from outside, it is no different than the discomfort of sudden hostility between comrades on the battlefield. This is very desperate for those who have a poor sense of security. [Thinking], how should I put it? I don't like to watch this kind of depressing movie. I wanted to give it up a few times, but I saw that the author's settings were pretty good, so I wanted to see if it would completely break down in the end, but it turned out to be an unexpected bonus [shy] Also, this is just my personal opinion, don't complain [grievance]

So pretty! ! ! We have been separated for so long and have secrets. I am afraid that if they have a disagreement, they will die because of misunderstanding like Palos [crying] [crying] [crying] The characters are created so well [crying] My heart aches [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's beautiful. At the beginning, I didn't think there was anything wrong with multiple perspectives, but I was shocked when I watched it. One thing is really different in different perspectives. The author wrote the psychology of the four people in great detail. Each of them is doing what they think is right. No one is wrong. They use This extreme method is just to keep their companions. They have experienced one thing after another and become extreme, but they are still them and will never change. Under the promotion of the plot, conflicts and disputes arise, and mysteries surround them. They are alone, with only companions by their side. It is a very good article, it is a sweet little novel. Except for the last sentence, everything else is true.

Super pretty! ! It's just that the more you eat the knife, the more addictive you become... In terms of character plot: The four people traveled to the concave and convex world, and finally reunited in the concave and convex competition after experiencing many hardships. However, under the vague hope of returning home, there are layers of clouds. After all, facing the unknown competition, can they go home... Readers who like knives are in luck, because none of the four people can escape, and they will all "whip the corpse" for you repeatedly in order (oh my heart is a bit painful). In other words, is the current God of Creation capable of sending them back to another world? This should be regarded as breaking the dimensional wall. If a few people's Yuan power seeds are really shattered, the remaining people can really make a wish for everyone to go home together [crying] The characters are really well created, with a strong sense of immersion, which completely satisfied my middle school. In my mind, they are no longer a paragraph of text, but a living life that talks and laughs, telling me the story of their unique "Navigator Team" with a smile. (But how did you come up with the idea of naming it after four navigators? You're so talented, right? [Laughs]) And what I'm worried about is that even if we really go back, after more than ten years of experiencing a life-threatening world, can we really adapt to a new ordinary life without struggle and energy? In other words, can ordinary people really accept people who change themselves in order to adapt to a new world full of crises? [Crying]

I personally think this article is very good, and it can even be said to be one of the most interesting articles I have read. Well, especially the things between the characters really touched my heart. There is bitterness in the sweetness, sweetness in the bitterness, mixed together, and it is evenly matched until now. All in all, it really pokes me, I like it very much. I'm obsessed with this book.

(Some spoiler alert!) I really really like this book... I personally think this one is really novel among the many concave and convex fanfics. Each of the four people has a past that they don't want to reveal. Although there are twists and turns and suspicions in the middle, they still choose to believe in each other in the end, even if the ending is likely to lead to destruction... (It is really rare to encounter a novel where the protagonist insists on "going home" from beginning to end!! Maybe it's because most of the protagonists time-travel after death...?) I think the two contradictions of "the bond in another world" and the "obsession to go home" are handled really brilliantly. Lao Lin and A Tian in the later stage provide a good contrast. They are obviously thinking about each other, but concealing it still intensifies the conflict... (Boss, go give them a good beating, just give them a good beating😭) Many conflicts and suspicions are unexpected and reasonable, but more of it is the tacit understanding and companionship between partners... Group portraits are the best! ! ! ! Different from the slightly opposite contradictions of Lao Lin and A Tian, ​​the contradiction of the boss lies in the huge pressure behind the powerful ability and the entanglement of wanting to bear it alone but also longing for the support of his companions. The personality charm of the boss is really hard to not love... A Qin's confusion and struggle are also very good! As the only character among the four who has watched the anime and understands part of the plot, it is so painful to travel through the novelty of the anime world that I like and the darkness that I actually encounter... It seems that the language is a bit confusing, eh, let's leave it at that, in short, this book is definitely worth reading, and you won't lose money if you invest in it! ! !

The author writes very well. There are four protagonists with different personalities at the beginning. It is written from the first person at the beginning, so it may look a bit messy and there are knives. Moreover, the author has updated less. I hope the author can make more updates in the future.

The writing is very beautiful, but it is also a good knife. However, there is nothing wrong with the knife, but the ending must be sweet. Otherwise, I will really cry to death. I will probably never forget it in this life. I will feel emo when I think about it. I will be overwhelmed by the sad ending. I will want to die when I think of the sad ending. My mentality is really easy to collapse. I can always remember a nightmare when I was a child. If it is too much, I will really dare not watch it. Yes, I really have a lot of novels that I dare not read because they are too cruel. The ending must be good, you must go home happily, and you must not forget the things you have experienced. The ending must be sweet. Big, if it were Be, I would really not dare to read it. I really don't want to scratch my heart. I want to read it but don't dare to read it. The process should not be too harsh. Although small abuse is pleasant, big abuse is harmful to the body. I don't want sadness to flow back into a river. We must let them go home happily. We must remember everything that happened here, and then return home happily. We must all work together. No one of the four can be missing.

The overall structure and ideas are very good. I feel that big things will happen later. I also like the plot very much. The perspectives of each character are also relatively novel. However, there are too few updates now, and some are not enough to watch. I hope you can work hard! [Love]

Dear author: Hello! This is the first convex fan book I read on Tomato. I didn't really like the first-person narrative before, but after reading a few chapters, I admit that I fell in love... Thanks to the author for writing this book. The descriptions of various disputes and psychological processes between the four people who returned home are really delicate and deeply rooted in people's hearts. I put myself into it and read it, and I cried into a puddle of water... What I like and touch the most is the eternal loyalty and trust of the four returning home to their companions. People from the same world rely on each other in a strange world that does not belong to them. The only goal is to go home, but the four of them are involved and bound to the people in the world... Even so, their belief in returning home will not change. This is a vow they have made long ago and will not be broken by anyone! Finally, the author, I'm sorry, I don't plan to read your other books... Probably (unless I can't resist the temptation) because I have been knifed tens of thousands of times in this book. If I go under the knife again, I will be crippled and my young mind will have to calm down... Overall, this is definitely a very good book, and friends who are still hesitant about whether they will be knifed, don't worry too much, because they will definitely be knifed, but the author is kind enough to mix some happiness with the knife, so don't worry and read it! Finally, thank you to the author for your hard work. Don't forget your own life while writing the book. The world in the book is so wonderful. The author is also an interesting person. He should shine in his own small world! Come on! The author is great! Sincerely, Salute! Your loyal reader, Yu Yekong 2024.1.21.

It's a very good book, but I feel like the author has laid a lot of foreshadowings, and I might get stabbed later. I can't stand it anymore because I'm afraid of getting stabbed, but I don't want to abandon this book. In terms of roles, I still like the boss the most. He is very powerful and calm. He is worthy of being the boss of a team. I hope you won't be too harsh on Zhuzi [I'm about to cry]

This is the 6th best book I've read by a fandom [crying], which doesn't mean that other books don't have such tragic life experiences. The perspectives of the four people switch back and forth. In terms of timeline, the first part is a bit confusing, but the second part is okay. It is an alternative way of expressing psychology. The early stage is also written in detail, and I know how they get such strong power. And they buried a particularly obvious knife. After several years of becoming stronger, their thoughts and practices have changed greatly from their previous lives. When I see the end, my instinct will be very sharp [crying]

This book is great. Boss, Lao Lin, A Tian, ​​and A Qin each have their own character traits. Their relationship is very good, which makes me feel that they are real people... But I think there may be a knife in the back, but the author said that they will return to their original world in the end. I am looking forward to it! I hope there will be no eunuchs or bad endings. Finally, come on, the author! I want to see them reach the end of this journey! [Love][love][love]

Thank you, thank you, the author. This is a high-quality article. It is really quite real. It reflects the panic of a normal person traveling into an unknown world, and the mental state of being on the verge of collapse. It is not as cheerful as most concave and convex system articles, nor is it the kind of person who is invincible and invincible. The four protagonists are all quite miserable. Xiaodao article, I like it (⑉°з°)-♡ I hope the author can continue to persevere. I highly recommend reading this book because it has multiple perspectives. If you find it troublesome, you can draw a character relationship diagram by yourself. It is precisely because it has multiple perspectives that he is very clear in this article. Many things are very clear and there is no need for people to guess. However, there is also a certain degree of mystery, and there are knives buried everywhere, hehe.

The author's writing is very realistic. This is a very real and cruel world. It is more sharp than other humorous and funny healing articles. However, I would like to complain about the first person first. If you can't wrap your head around it, you will definitely be dizzy by the visuals. There are four protagonists in total. It is a group portrait story. It is about brotherhood and a team. Or you can use the first person name, such as Arin, don't call it "I", it's a bit uncomfortable to watch. In the middle of the first volume, the protagonists are suspicious of each other because of the boss's words "Don't get too close to the protagonist group". What the author wrote is very good. Please support it first.

It is very different from other concave and convex articles. Of course, it may be that other concave and convex articles I have read are worse. The logic is more reasonable, the plot is not static, it has a butterfly effect, and it is reasonable. This is very important. The narrative method is very novel. From the first-person perspective of four people, the same incident can understand the thoughts and inner thoughts of different characters, and can also explain the behavior of more characters. Moreover, this interweaving of multiple perspectives will also make people notice details that have not been seen before. I quite like it. In the early stage, I might not be able to recognize people clearly. This is a pain point. I can't fully recognize them until now. The writing and narration are very good, but when I see something that is the same as the original work, I still skip this section. This should be considered normal. Fan fiction is like this, but this only happens once or twice, not too many. It is basically told from the perspective of the four protagonists. It feels the same as reading comprehension, but this is indeed my true thought, that's all for now I'm only commenting after seeing the latest chapter, hahahahahahaha I'm so sorry

Wow wow wow, I really love it. The relationship between the four of them has changed from an ordinary friendship to a yandere who will die together. I really love it so much. As the saying goes, the more you eat, the better you feel. I hope the author will work hard to update it. Come on.

This is the most immersive fanfic I have ever read! I don't think my ability to empathize is very strong, but when I read this novel, I was completely immersed in it! I was completely empathetic! Especially in the section after Aqin lifted the ban and was teleported to the hall, I really couldn't help but feel like Atian, and I couldn't suppress my anger for a long time. The author writes beautifully!!

Let's review this book in general. In terms of plot, this book is quite good. Although it can cut into the hearts of the audience, it is indeed exciting. Writing from the first-person perspective can better highlight the psychological journey of the protagonists. However, judging from the extreme personalities and shortcomings of the protagonist group, there is probably a big knife in the back. In terms of characters, each character has its own highlights. The boss is extremely responsible, plus a little bit of the arrogance that every boss in the concave and convex world (Garderros, Lei Shi, etc.) Has. Although he is Garderros's brother and has met Red, he doesn't have much affection for them. He cares most about his own members. Lao Lin, after experiencing a sad past, has a bit of Paros's hypocrisy, but he is not annoying. He cares about his younger brother Camille very much and hates nobles. If he meets Lei Shi alone later, he may have a knife. Ah Tian, ​​who also experienced a painful past, split into a second personality. The main shortcoming is that she is extremely xenophobic and has a little bit of a yandere attribute (?). It can be said that she is the one who breaks the bond most cleanly among the four. Aqin was the safest one when he first traveled through time in the early stage, but he had a low self-esteem and was afraid of being abandoned by the team. Although he had some affection for Zi Tanghuan, his cousin, it was not much. But he would hide it when something happened, but luckily he was discovered by the boss, otherwise this would become a rift between the foursome.

The author writes great! The characters have distinct personalities and are very immersive. Keep up the good work!

The author writes so well. I think this book is my top 0p in the book. But the author, please come back and update more. Now I want to know the plot behind it. It's so exciting. Please, please update more [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Now that I have seen more than 40 pictures, it turns out that you, the author, are not finished. To be honest, I was shocked. Fortunately, the author, you still update. As long as the author is great, you will definitely read it. Now I feel that I don't need Konjac anymore. I am very happy. Author, you have updated more. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Ahhh! It's so beautiful. I have never loved a book so much. I would like to call it a masterpiece of fan fiction in the concave and convex world. No, I am still reading it several times.

I still feel a little guilty for posting a book review now. The characters in the book have distinct personalities, the sugar is fragrant, and the knife is extremely painful. . . . I have almost reprinted it several times now. It is very delicious. People who are not good at English love it very much. I also drew a fan on the old Ford. Among them, I think Lao Lin's character is extremely contradictory. He wants to go home but can't let go of Camille. A Tian has become a legendary patriarchal man before I realized that there is something wrong with A Tian. The boss is also the same. A Qin is also the same. The relationship between the characters is very delicious. People who are poor in Chinese cannot describe it in detail. Summary: I will talk about it after reading it, and the soul of the boss returns. . . . Miss you

Very good, I have read both books. But. Although there are no very sharp scenes now. I guess a big one will come later. They all have their own little secrets, so what are they doing? Really cried to death. Don't kill me. Please

It's very exciting. It's rare to see a novel like this that writes from the perspective of multiple protagonists, and it can be so clearly adjusted. The supplementary settings for the plot are also very interesting. I really look forward to the subsequent development. There are not many delicious foods in the concave and convex world. I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep producing foods. [You taste it carefully][Like]