Yushou: so They Are the Protagonists?

Projection! Reminds me of Emiya's projection magic and infinite sword system

The God of Death is an old author, and he mainly focuses on a god who is famous on the list.

Good looking, quick update, the score is a bit too low, it will slowly rise later

Yours is the most satisfying novel I have seen on Tomato. The protagonist is very similar to my character. He is very immersive. He has a desire for sex but has no courage and the ability to collect a harem. But he can stick to his heart and don't listen to others. Believe in yourself. This book is very good

Everyone knows the name of the Supreme Being. No more to say.

After watching it, I think it's okay. It's a classic wind-type canine villain from the early stage. The problem is that the description of fights is not as good as before and needs to be improved. The characters are okay, but I hope the plot is a little more innovative than the previous books.

I love reading it. Come on, the author. I look forward to seeing the ending.

The more I watch, the better it gets. Although I feel that the plot in the early and middle stages is too depressing, and the time is very tight, which gives me a strong sense of powerlessness. It is obviously okay to hang up, but why is it so frustrating, but the later period is much better. Although Shen Miao has to pull back and forth again, it is still a highlight. I just want to finish it faster (manual dog head) and write more about daily life. It feels good, not so depressing. Summary: good-looking

Make up for the book review! ! Produced by the God of Death, it must be a high-quality product ~ I feel that God of Death is very talented in writing beast-controlling novels. The plot is much better than other beast-controlling novels, and the harem is more reasonable. Although I often drive, there are no details (the six seals of the God of War are not a joke)... Wei Qi's image is still very full, and Liang Xue's image is also good. Some readers said that Liang Xue is not invincible after rebirth and is always anxious. This is normal. In her previous life, she was just a little white fox that could not transform. Wei Qi is not the male protagonist in the script. It is inevitable that she will worry that her master will follow in the footsteps of her previous life and eventually leave her. Long Yan's dead tsundere is also very cute, as well as Bai Rong and Bai Ping. Their respective characters are relatively complete. I don't want some beast-control stories to be full of harem characters. The plot also has a lot of foreshadowing, but it's basically all filled out so far. There's nothing sinister about it, and it's not mindless and fun. I feel that it is the best among the beast-controlling novels I have read, with a rating of about 9.0, So are book lovers trying to score points...[][] The main character of the God of Killing is to listen to advice and follow one's heart, @him, he really responded, but he is too lazy to change (hey) ~ @ [Top post][Top post]

Hahaha, brother, I have read at least two of your books. The last time I read was Angel and Succubus a long time ago. I felt a little bit numb because of the blockade. After reading a short section of this book, I felt the same as when I read the book Angel. Sometimes you may still want to write too much content. You can't make the protagonist too strong or too weak. , In the end, it will affect the reader's first feeling to some extent. Sometimes, if there is no short-term reward mechanism for the protagonist, it still seems a bit depressing. The foreshadowing content may give me a feeling of prolonging the story. Haha, don't be offended by some personal opinions. See you in the next book, brother. Come on.

To be honest, this novel is actually quite well written. The 8.7 Rating is the best proof of this. In the later period, the author's "persecution" mentality collapsed [face covering], but he still persisted until the end, at least he did not leave any regrets to the readers. Let's give a brief evaluation: This article is a western fantasy harem novel about spiritual pets, which mainly focuses on fighting and escalating, supplemented by daily relationships; the language is humorous, and there is no cliche plot of pretending to be cool or slap in the face; it is neither pedantic nor procrastinating; the male protagonist is neither romantic nor flirtatious, and the female protagonist has a distinct and different personality. Overall, this is a very good harem novel, and I give it a five-star rating. I also wish the author's novels will get better and better, and the profits will increase!

The writing is quite good, but the main character was too difficult at first. I haven't read it since. I like the style and the characterization is good. Even the protagonist is too difficult. The necklace given by his mother was snatched from level 0 to level 9. His father was probably taken away from him, so he barely managed to fight it off (actually, it's quite ridiculous that he was able to fight back). Then immediately after participating in the trial, he was discovered by a big boss. He wanted to kill the male protagonist and steal his things, but he had to fight back with a narrow escape. This was a little difficult, it wasn't even difficult for him in the early days of the famine [awkward laugh]

It looks good, I also like multiple female protagonists, @ can the author tell me the specific location if he publishes illustrations in the future?

Those who complain about the complexity of the article in the paragraph comments, we are reading novels, don't always give people the feeling that everyone is reading kindergarten stories. No matter how simple the novel is, it cannot be like this, and nine years of obligation cannot be in vain. After reading some people's comments, it really affects the smoothness of reading. I have read less than 50 chapters so far and I feel good. The only thing I feel is insufficient is the first 50 chapters. Emmm, the author wants to write something different, but the expression is not very obvious. It feels like it is not clear. But it may be more enjoyable to read. After all, it is relaxing. Reading is so tiring and it is not a postgraduate entrance examination. For those who have just come to study, I think you can read it with confidence for the time being. There is no big problem now. I have to say that the heroine came back to save the hero. This is actually the first time I have seen the heroine. The heroine is still a fox [smile] [smile] [smile] Hey, it's very curious, but I still prefer vampires. I think readers can add a single chapter to the front, directly write the scene of the male protagonist before he dies, and then pick up the male protagonist's awakening and the fox's rebirth. This will be more attractive. The scene before the death is better written, let's do a nine-dragon coffin [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh], mainly to write about the sadness of the male protagonist's death. In this way, the fox's love is not abrupt and smoother.

It turns out that it has not been taken off the shelves. It is very good. I couldn't find it after searching for a long time. This book is really a masterpiece. The emotions are relatively delicate, and it is accepted as it should be. I will never be a eunuch. But why did the score drop so much later? Forget it, it's all OK, I hope the author will work hard Is it over yet? It's a bit fast. Being in the series of Beast Control makes me feel perfect. It's almost impossible to find. When I read it later, I felt a little bitter and resentful. I felt a little tired. I hope the next one won't be like this. It's a pity that I haven't bought any gifts yet. I forgot. I will make up for it slowly. I hope the next one will be better and more popular. Come on.

It's good. People will not be punished for themselves. Just don't play shadow clones when you take a girl. Don't be a selfish man. I was really panicked when you wrote about having this skill. You really shouldn't write like this. Please give the author a big [love] [love] Would you like the progress to be faster? I've only accepted one until now. It seems like, let's just accept it when it's time, okay? Otherwise, a bunch of people would be scolding the eunuch [][]

Not bad, especially when bargaining, the protagonist is really 6

There is a bit of poison, but not much. It is that the relationship between Shen Miao and the protagonist feels that it progresses too fast. From the separation to the second meeting, it gives people a very abrupt feeling. It may be that the description is not detailed enough, but to be honest, it is well written like this. Many people cannot write this book. As for the book, I feel it should be above 9 points. The main reason is that a lot of setting improvements will give people a rough feeling. I can find ways to integrate the settings into the text (although I don't know how to change it). Overall, it feels like a roadside stall eating Michelin. The flaws are not concealed, but it can be done better. . . . In fact, I think if I change it and write it more carefully, I can use it as the pet charm of a low-end HE. I wrote it too hastily.

It was quite interesting to watch the Ice Fox of God of Death in 2021, but it ended a bit too badly. I hope this one will have a good ending.

The writing is smooth, the narrative is smooth, and the plot is acceptable. However, the writing style is a little immature, and there are a lot of exchanges of lines during the plot. It is too lengthy and can easily cause drama. It can be seen that the author wants to use the protagonist to express some of his own views on love and hatred. Although he is trying hard to demonstrate, his views are a bit one-sided and it is difficult to effectively convince readers. It is recommended to write less literary dramas. Overall it is still a work worth recommending.

I think the author's writing is quite good. I didn't feel that the male protagonist was a virgin. I felt that this was a normal performance. I especially don't like novels where people kill people casually and the male protagonist doesn't care. Five-star review.

This book is very good. It is not the kind of pure invincibility. It is relaxed and relaxed. Although there are some poisonous points, it is still acceptable overall. I hope the author can continue to write in this style. What else can I write if I don't have my own style? I'll just copy and paste.

It's so uncomfortable. I want to read this book again, but this author has been banned 6 times. It's really hard. I want to add him to my bookshelf, but I'm not afraid of being blocked again. Ah, at the end of my rant, this book is basically the kind of book where all the time travel buffs are fully loaded. The theme is good and the car is very fast. One more thing, the author's book should not be banned again.

It looks so good, why is it only 8.8? Why? This book has a main line, plot, and foreshadowing. I think it is really good, or even though I wrote a harem novel, it made me feel some warm feelings.

Only now I realize that I haven't given it five stars yet. I have to give five stars to all the other God of Death books I've read. This one is also worth reading. I just hope it's more stable this time and not forced to finish it again, so I don't even dare to save it [laughter] [laughter]

I like your book very much. I really like the emotional interaction between the protagonist and the heroine. Unlike other novels where the heroine is so naive, I hope to continue to work hard. [Cool][Cool][Like][Like]

Well, I've been reading this article for a long time. The author's writing skills are quite good, but there are too many holes dug. I hope these holes can be closed slowly in the future. When will the author we want to see write it?

The writing is very good, but there are too many settings, including cities, beast control, alchemy, churches, goddesses, demons, kingdoms, character levels, animal pet levels, time travel, rebirth, 10 artifacts, heavenly beings, demonic beings, mysterious beings, and luck. I have only read about Chapter 111. If there are no new settings in the follow-up, it will be a very interesting world view.

The more I watch it, the more enjoyable it becomes. Sometimes I am already involved in it. I have to say that the God of Death drives really fast and the characters are very vivid. I really like the current style. I hope that God of Death can continue to work hard.

The book is very interesting and the story line is very clear. The author is relatively active among the many books I have read. If you really don't understand the book, you can read it in the comment area. Some "class representatives" will make some summaries. Finally, there is still the problem that the author may not be able to complete the entire book. Therefore, you must be mentally prepared to lose the book halfway through reading. Come on, author.