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One of the few good martial arts articles. There are no cerebral palsy poisonous points. The system is just a pendant, which may or may not be the same. It is much more readable than those cool articles with a system that gets whatever you want. Come on, the author, the writing is really good.

This is truly the most solid novel I have read in the past year. The protagonist is steady and steady, neither arrogant nor impetuous. The author's writing style is calm and powerful. The last time I was so immersed in a novel was when I was in junior high school and read The Mortal. Worth recommending, don't be a eunuch or a bad guy [Love]

So far it's okay. I saw the Martial Saint of the Ten Directions that many people said was imitated. Then I took a look and saw, good guys, there are only two sisters at the beginning. . . I no longer had the energy to read anymore. . . [Laughing and crying]

The writing is very good. I don't know why the rating is so low. I am a dragon and I don't see any poisonous points. I feel like I want to get out of here. I recommend it, but there are too few words [Chigua]

After reading it for a while, this book is really good. For me, the characters are very vivid and the emotions are relatively delicate. The male protagonist also belongs to the category of online IQ. It is very suitable for me. I think this book will definitely become popular [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

Give it a five-star rating. It is still of a certain level. It is not lacking in logic and is more normal. It may not be so popular for the time being, but if you stick to it, quantity will turn into quality. It will definitely become popular in the future.

It is not very poisonous and can still be eaten. The fighting is more delicate, which would be really good for a new author. (Chapter 1 to 83 mainly talks about martial arts apprentices, competitions, high school, bandits entering the city, and escape) (Chapter 84 changes the map and reaches a new map) (Chapter 85 to 87 joins the sect, the Xuanwu lineage of the Four Jue Sect) (Chapter 88 to 139 fights monsters and upgrades) ① There is some lack of details, but it is not a big deal. ② If you have your own ideas, don't scold the author. If you have your own ideas, start writing as a fan. Everyone has different ideas, don't impose your ideas on the author.

Full of heat, the kind that the more you watch it, the more you want to watch it, it's worth watching Highly recommended, the writing is great

Except for the fact that it is not finished, everything else is good. The logic of the battle is clear, and the subtle sense of satisfaction is accessible to female readers. There are no uncomfortable plots, and the male protagonist does not have a harem. I look forward to the moment when the male protagonist slaps him in the face.

To be honest, the score is low because of the small number of words. In fact, it can reach 9.0 Points. I highly recommend Kangkang.

Not bad, if you can keep reading, it would be better if there are more details on martial arts moves.

See the evaluation of Chapter 131 Overall, it's really good, although there are some bugs. The writing style is very similar to that of the old author. I estimate that the 300 or so pictures are all stable. I'll talk about the later stuff later. The martial arts style is quite pure, but your advantage as a time traveler is not revealed at all (I only feel that he is like a local aborigine). The advantage of your system is the number of water words and telling readers what the protagonist's realm is like. However, the reason why the time traveler is not revealed may be to maintain the martial arts style of writing. Let's take a look at this again. As for the rather blunt transition that others have said, I think it was handled well, at least it doesn't make people feel particularly poisonous, and then it's basically a relief after that. Yeah, yeah, I saw Chapter 144 and commented again. I'm speechless. I went from being a normal hard-working person to an extremely greedy person who kills people at will just for money.

The logic of this book is clear, and it is not a brainless text. It contains both fighting and killing in the world, as well as human feelings and sophistication. Although I haven't seen the section about cultivating immortality yet, the current section on the rivers and lakes alone is already a rare good article. I currently give it a score of 9.5.

It's a rare good book in Tomato. The author's writing style is very solid and his outlook is normal.

Time travel + a breath of fresh air in the martial arts world, super good

The plot is compact and has explosive points. It is suitable for reading and is a good book that people can read on.

It was so good that I watched it all night and I was sleepwalking at work.

The writing is very good, it is sentimental, flesh and blood, the structure is clear-cut, and the language is rich in emotion. It describes a martial arts novel very well. The book makes good use of poetry and famous quotes to enhance the literary talent of the novel. Life is full of seas and rivers, time passes, people go their separate ways, the scenery outside the window is ever-changing, but I still miss it, the enthusiasm of the innocent in the world, the last thing that can't be retained in the world, the beauty of the mirror, the beauty of the tree. It's hard to cool the hot blood! I am lucky enough to encounter this masterpiece this year, the sun is like fire, the good times are like dreams, the jade plate is hanging high, I light up my cigarette and take a deep breath, word by word, I express my heart. The writing is very good, but it will end eventually. Fortunately, he stayed with me for a while, allowing me to integrate into the book's intrigues, sinister people, coldness and warmth, and clear kindness and righteousness. Narrated on the tenth day of the first lunar month of the Year of the Dragon in Jiachen

It's really, really good! [Like] A very good novel, Tomato 🍅 This is the second very good novel about cultivating immortals. The male protagonist is very plump and the plot setting is very good. I hope the high level will be maintained in the future. Don't stop updating! It's a pity that Tomato has blacked out the book and can't read it!

The writing is steady, not holy, it is a good book, and it also has a simplified version of the system. Now that I've looked at it, I think it's generally possible to pursue it, but I don't know if it will collapse later. Collected first.

I think it's pretty good-looking, and the writing is quite coherent. It doesn't drag on. Why did you download it?

It's pretty good, I don't know why it's not updated anymore. The protagonist kills decisively and as steadily as an old dog. The characterization is quite good. Every time a character appears and is thought to be an important supporting role, it will be gone after just a few chapters. In particular, the several playmates under the tree have different endings. It's quite sympathetic.

Brother, this is the first novel of Tomato that I beg you to update. I will come over every two or three days to see if you have updated it. I am waiting for you.

It is a rare good novel. Although it has some flaws, it is still acceptable. I read it in one sitting. Both the plot and the fighting are quite good. The plots are interlocking and have foreshadowing. There are revenges and favors. There is no such thing as the gift girl in the refreshing novel, nor the pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger in the refreshing novel. From the beginning, one is weak and strives to become stronger. In the process, there is no system, only a progress bar. The flaw is that some loopholes have not been filled in at the beginning, including the early martial arts test, and the ones behind his father. They should be filled in later. There is also the martial arts. The proficiency is increasing, and there are many martial arts. It would be better if the same martial arts can be integrated. Overall, it is good. It is very enjoyable to watch.

Although it is very similar to the Shifang Martial Saint, the specific details are still different... At best, it can only be said to be the relationship between Dou Po Cang Qiong and Wu Dong Qian Kun... I think it's pretty good. If you like this style, you can check it out. It's also a perfect stand-in for the Martial Saint of the Ten Directions.

Good looking Tomato has the smoothest rhythm of its kind

The plot is reasonable and there are no problems with the plot. Whether it is martial arts or fairy tales, the characters are acceptable. The plot is a bit tight and the pace is fast. Maybe it is for the fairy tales in the future. However, the early martial arts writing is okay. If the pace is slowed down and the characters are enriched, it will be a good book.

The author understands serialization. For ordinary books, you may want to catch up after reading the latest chapter, but this may not happen when the enthusiasm fades the next day. This one is different and will make you want to keep reading. The main line is clear, the future is promising, and there is no need to worry about opening new maps frequently. The plot is very concise and stays on the main line. It is quite connected and compact. There are no unnecessary settings, no complicated skills and equipment, and no messy copies and branch lines. The protagonist is decisive in killing and has an online IQ. He does not need to rely on the protagonist's aura to maintain his character. Being able to do this has already killed most online novels. Wish you can become a god soon.

This is a very good book that I have read. It is a martial arts novel so far. The setting of the novel is that there are cultivators of immortality. So according to the current plot, it has not yet reached the plot from martial arts to cultivating immortals, but my current evaluation is very high! The technique is very high, the artistic conception is well grasped, and the fighting and killing are also well-written. I hope that no matter the protagonist or the supporting role, the characters and emotions can still be described in more subtle ways. The more detailed it will be, the better! I personally hope not to pursue speed but more! It's better to be careful than to be quick! Because both the protagonist and the supporting role have to live it up! Everyone must live out their true temperament in the arena!

I prefer this kind of setting, one step at a time, no obvious exaggerated cheating settings, the plot is more eye-catching, the pace is faster, and it is not procrastinating. It is recommended to collect it and wait until the pigs are fattened before killing them [smile]