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Better writing style The plot is good Character structure can The subject matter is also good There are some small problems in the details, such as resistance to nuclear bombs, such as the speed of cultivation (it is still a bit too fast to directly resist Su's spiritual power, and it is easy to lose combat power. Of course, I opened a new map and I didn't mention it). If you think about these small issues carefully, it is easy to lose combat power [Thinking]

So short, so short [crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy][crazy] @ Monkey King is not a Buddha

Cultivation of immortals and technology coexist in the same era, and the number of people cultivating immortals is very small. I particularly like this setting, which is niche and novel.

The content is very immersive and quite good.

It's so beautiful and no one sees it? Not that much Write faster. Write faster.

It's so short, my sister-in-law makes me cry

The subject matter is good and quite novel. Good luck to the author [smile]