[Unlimited flow + suspense + data flow + imagination.
One year after the horror story came,
Li Hyuk was selected.
The strange story of "Shadows in the Ancient Temple":
Li Hyuk opened the golden card and randomly obtained the skill [Extraction].
Throw the dice again and get four chances.
"You extracted an ordinary fruit [tomato] and successfully tempered it into a spiritual fruit. After swallowing it, your strength will be +60, speed +60, and defense +60."
"You extracted an ordinary peach wood sword and successfully crushed it to the evil peach toughness. It can kill evil spirits and demons, and it can evolve by absorbing its blood."
"…………"
Senior Person A: There is something wrong with this newcomer. He actually killed an F-level monster by himself. He must be cheating!
Newcomer A: Boss, please hug me!
F-level monster Hedgehog: Run for your life, there is a hidden boss! !
Reality veteran boss: This newcomer is really cheating. If he picks up something, it will become a treasure!
[The introduction is weak, please read the text for exciting content]
Reader comments
Very good, I am digging for gold in 💩, and finally I have one more person I want to read on [Learned]
Looking at it now, there is still nothing wrong with it, and I still want to continue watching it. In terms of rhythm, I personally don't think there is anything wrong with it. If you decide to write hundreds of chapters, it is normal for the pace to slow down in the early stages.
It's okay, but some parts keep repeating the same idea when dealing with the plot, which is a bit lagging.
The characters are quite fleshed out and not very silly. The extraction of the protagonist's golden finger should be strengthened. At the beginning, there was such a limit on the number of times to complete the puzzle mission, and the characters in the plot were not very stupid, which was good.
It's really awesome. I can write 100,000 words on an ancient temple chapter and I haven't finished it yet. It's not like me who always gets stuck on writing.
I didn't expect that the main character could not be defeated even if he was in trouble.
In fact, during the bone-grabbing contract, the protagonist's performance was a bit unsatisfactory. He had already grabbed it, but if you open it again and take a look, you won't fall into passivity.
1. Searching for spiritual fruits
2. Attribute system
In some places, the character collapses and the plot conflicts. After dozens of chapters of sketching, the character has become very real. You can feel the sudden change. You can read it as a short story, but overall it's not bad.
The writing is okay, the protagonist is brave and resourceful, but even the beginning is too long.
Lu Yongping was not cursed at all. What curse could he lift?
This book gave me the feeling that it was a bit intellectually depressing and a bit protracted.
Okay, okayヾ ^_^♪Who taught you to write novels like this? Just write, who can write better than you?
The author comes out, I will send you some souvenirs [smile] @
I originally wanted to give it one star. After all, the first copy was 100 copies, so it was really tiring, but I went to check out the author. I read his last book, and it was really exciting. It's a pity that updates are discontinued now.
😓This is the end
Personally, I think it's okay. It's better than some authors. If I could rewrite some parts and delete some of the watery plots, I think it would be a very good novel. The plot feels relatively new, and the human nature is more vivid.
Ah this...
I felt it was well written, but I didn't expect it to end with only one copy [laughing and crying]
The content is quite good, but it's a pity that the eunuch is at the end.
It's okay to write a story with more than 90 chapters, but the whole book may take quite a few chapters. Do other people think that this kind of book must be like this after reading other books with around 40-50 chapters? I will always support you, author
Good looking, super good looking
I have never seen anything so procrastinating. I have written more than 80 chapters in one copy and have not yet finished it. I have delayed reading it until I started reading it.
6. One copy can contain more than a hundred chapters [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] and the content is not boring.
? ? ? ? What the hell, I thought it was weird to have more than 100 chapters in one copy, but I didn't expect you only have 100 chapters [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]
It's okay, let's see how the plot unfolds
Although the first copy is long, I personally feel that the content is pretty good. It's a pity that it's over [Eating Melon]
Don't let the ratings fool you.
Very interesting, the content is so exciting
Good looking hahahahaha 6
Why the finale?
Good, but a bit lacking
It feels pretty good. Is the score so low?
There are no profiles of classmates during the live broadcast
Overall, it's okay. It's just that the plot is a bit too long.
Before reading, let's read the comments section. I only wrote one copy of this novel and it ended at chapter 110. I felt it was okay but too short.
Very good, I am digging for gold in 💩, and finally I have one more person I want to read on [Learned] Looking at it now, there is still nothing wrong with it, and I still want to continue watching it. In terms of rhythm, I personally don't think there is anything wrong with it. If you decide to write hundreds of chapters, it is normal for the pace to slow down in the early stages.
It's okay, but some parts keep repeating the same idea when dealing with the plot, which is a bit lagging.
The characters are quite fleshed out and not very silly. The extraction of the protagonist's golden finger should be strengthened. At the beginning, there was such a limit on the number of times to complete the puzzle mission, and the characters in the plot were not very stupid, which was good.
It's really awesome. I can write 100,000 words on an ancient temple chapter and I haven't finished it yet. It's not like me who always gets stuck on writing.
I didn't expect that the main character could not be defeated even if he was in trouble.
In fact, during the bone-grabbing contract, the protagonist's performance was a bit unsatisfactory. He had already grabbed it, but if you open it again and take a look, you won't fall into passivity.
1. Searching for spiritual fruits 2. Attribute system
In some places, the character collapses and the plot conflicts. After dozens of chapters of sketching, the character has become very real. You can feel the sudden change. You can read it as a short story, but overall it's not bad.
The writing is okay, the protagonist is brave and resourceful, but even the beginning is too long.
Lu Yongping was not cursed at all. What curse could he lift? This book gave me the feeling that it was a bit intellectually depressing and a bit protracted.
Okay, okayヾ ^_^♪Who taught you to write novels like this? Just write, who can write better than you?
The author comes out, I will send you some souvenirs [smile] @
I originally wanted to give it one star. After all, the first copy was 100 copies, so it was really tiring, but I went to check out the author. I read his last book, and it was really exciting. It's a pity that updates are discontinued now. 😓This is the end
Personally, I think it's okay. It's better than some authors. If I could rewrite some parts and delete some of the watery plots, I think it would be a very good novel. The plot feels relatively new, and the human nature is more vivid.
Ah this... I felt it was well written, but I didn't expect it to end with only one copy [laughing and crying]
The content is quite good, but it's a pity that the eunuch is at the end.
It's okay to write a story with more than 90 chapters, but the whole book may take quite a few chapters. Do other people think that this kind of book must be like this after reading other books with around 40-50 chapters? I will always support you, author
Good looking, super good looking I have never seen anything so procrastinating. I have written more than 80 chapters in one copy and have not yet finished it. I have delayed reading it until I started reading it.
6. One copy can contain more than a hundred chapters [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] and the content is not boring. ? ? ? ? What the hell, I thought it was weird to have more than 100 chapters in one copy, but I didn't expect you only have 100 chapters [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]
It's okay, let's see how the plot unfolds
Although the first copy is long, I personally feel that the content is pretty good. It's a pity that it's over [Eating Melon]
Don't let the ratings fool you.
Very interesting, the content is so exciting
Good looking hahahahaha 6
Why the finale?
Good, but a bit lacking
It feels pretty good. Is the score so low?
There are no profiles of classmates during the live broadcast
Overall, it's okay. It's just that the plot is a bit too long.
Before reading, let's read the comments section. I only wrote one copy of this novel and it ended at chapter 110. I felt it was okay but too short.