The Good-For-Nothing Junior Sister Is Reborn and Kills the Entire World of Immortality

The overall plot is well written. The female protagonist is a sweetheart, sassy and beautiful. The male protagonist's love is not so obvious at first, but later it is pretty good and satisfying. However, the ending is a bit too hasty. The master's enemy has not been avenged yet, and what about the revenge of his parents? Why did it end?

The theme is good, but there are still many small details that need to be improved.

This book is still available.

The plot is exciting, but the heroine's master's matter hasn't been resolved yet, okay? Have you forgotten all this?

Forehead! Is this the end? There should be a follow-up, right? Never mind, it doesn't conflict anyway. I like the heroine's character and her style of doing things. Everyone in it has their own personal characteristics, which is pretty good [currently in development] [currently in development] [currently in development]

I just didn't avenge my master, and my friend didn't follow up either.

Please accept the new book. This time it's true. If you don't write a million dollars, you won't change the name.

Read 325 2024.5.17 Friday 03:04

Very nice short article! ! !

It's quite interesting, but the ending is a bit rushed. Why is there no follow-up? I haven't avenged my master yet [rolls eyes] There are still a lot of things that haven't been written, and I feel like there are still a lot of details that haven't been completed.

I personally feel pretty good Better than many novels

Big cheers for the author! Looking forward to your next work.

There is revenge, there is friendship, there is family affection, there is hard work and progress, five stars!

Still so beautiful [love]

Beautiful, very beautiful

A very nice book

Very beautiful, worth recommending

Super nice novel

It's okay, you can take a look if you like it

Simple and clear, good

Rich and colorful content

The writing is easy to use and not verbose.

Looks good, but too fast

Okay, okay, it looks pretty good.

It was well written before. It's just that the ending is a bit rushed. A lot of it was not explained.

Writing is not easy. Five stars. Master Qiu will be gone if he doesn't even help me.

It's good to watch, but the ending is not enough to prevent her master from being finished. What happened to her friends later? ∴

It's nice, but the ending is a bit rushed

The first part was pretty good, but I think it should have been finished not so quickly. An hasn't found Ye Lingxi yet, and An's story hasn't been fully told yet, like the master's revenge. ?

Cool article, but I feel really helpless towards these parents. What did you think of throwing the child to others and leaving? [Laughing and crying] Such parents are really speechless [face covering]