Beautiful Sister, Stop Tempting Me

It looks good, but I feel there are some shortcomings. Let's do this. The author will send me the saved manuscript and let me check it [Please update][Please update] Can't be banned, this is my life [crying]

Woo hoo hoo [I'm about to cry], can you please update me a little more, since I found this article yesterday. Waiting for the article makes me feel itchy [crying]. This is by far the smoothest and most relevant to my heart among the Siba fanfics I have read. [Almost crying] I have been working on it for a long time, and now I see that I need to press the points, but the points are not high now, so I will press lightly.

Siba's novel is quite enjoyable. The plot is good and the characters are cheerful. Come on. The plot is a bit confusing

Nice! I've almost finished Siba's articles. I have to support her new book! How should I say it, eh?

It's not too much to see him finish before the Chinese New Year, and 500,000 words is not too much. I'm really grateful. I finally found another book that I can read. Although when I first saw this recommendation, I thought it was something I couldn't stand. Good [eating melon]

Let me start by saying that I am not a fan of Juju or Seine, but I do like the little idol. This book explains the Seine River system very clearly (in my opinion, don't blame me if you don't understand it.) Those who don't know about the Seine can also take a look. The content is quite engaging and the characters are well developed. I think it's worth a look. The above is just my personal opinion

Siba's new book is quite good to read, but the content of the words is not in double quotation marks [grievance] [grievance] [grievance] and other things are quite good. Come on, author! 🍑･ᴗ･🍑 🍤•⌄•🍤 I'm really afraid of being deleted [crying][crying][crying]

This 48-year-old book is really interesting to read. The author probably wants people who are not pho fans to understand this novel, or as a science popularization, so the progress is relatively slow. At present, there are too many introductions, but now it is picking up speed and I am looking forward to it. The characters are well established and the content is more attractive. I finished it in one go. Come on, author! ! [Please update] A helpless move, fear of being xx

"I often recommend this novel" and I can only say it's a miracle that I can see such a high-quality novel with two heroines on Tomato. There is a poem by "Du Fu" that praises the writer's writing skills: "The literary talent is extremely rich, and its spread will be unparalleled." "From: "Send Li Twelve and White Twenty Rhymes"" "You can praise the author." Secondly, the review of the novel as a whole is as follows: 1. This novel is beautifully written, with an ups and downs and exciting plot. The author vividly depicts the complexity and contradictions in the inner world of the characters with delicate writing style, making readers deeply involved and unable to extricate themselves. 2. The novel has a novel concept and clever foreshadowing. The story develops layer by layer, which is fascinating and makes people want to stop. 3. The language of the article is fluent and not artificial. It is catchy and educational. At the same time, the novel's emotions are rich and real, making people feel the same and deeply touch them. 4. The characters in the novel are vivid and prominent, and their personality traits and psychological activities have been deeply portrayed. This allows readers to better understand the characters' inner world and emotional changes. 5. The author uses his unique writing skills and excellent artistic skills to show the glory and contradiction of human nature. The whole novel has both profound ideological connotation and artistic appeal. It is a good work worth reading. The author's writing is as follows: 1. Plot and storytelling: "The author's novel is really well written, with twists and turns and exciting plots." "The novel's storyline is so gripping that you won't be able to put it down." 2. Characterization: "The characters in the novel are so lifelike that they seem to be standing in front of me." "I was deeply shocked by the author's vivid expression of the characters' emotions and actions." 3. Writing and expression skills: "The author's writing style is smooth and reads as naturally as flowing clouds." "The author's language expression ability is really strong, his word choice is accurate, vivid and full of appeal." 4. Theme and depth: "This novel not only has a wonderful story, but also has a profound and thought-provoking theme."

It's very interesting. How can I put it? There were very few articles written in Hanoi before. It can be said that it only became popular in the past two years. I discovered this book in May. I saw it on the recommendation list at that time. I happened to be in Hanoi so I clicked on it and read it. As a result, I invested in it. After that, I just happened to be taking a big test in life and I really didn't have time to read it, so I didn't read it until now. I read it from about 10 o'clock yesterday to 3:24 now. , It lasted for so many hours, I am a very impatient person, and I skipped through many books, but in this book I really read the confession from the beginning. From the broken chapter of the divine picture to stop the kiss yesterday to the confession here, I really still have something to say. I wrote it here and there in about 200 words. Although it is mostly nonsense, I still said it at the beginning. It is really good-looking, and it is worth it.

Since I read the author's book, I found that the content is so true that it makes people wonder if the author is a retired idol. Even if not, he must be a veteran pho.

It's so well written. I saw it in Tomato. It's so well written. It's the second most beautiful article about Siba that I've seen in Tomato.

As a water recommendation, the author is really pleasantly surprised by the writing team. I hope not to remove too many CPs.

I particularly like this book! And the update frequency is quite satisfactory (I would be more satisfied if it could be more frequent [laughing]) I think Qing Yu and Ran Ran's cp is really good! Love it, love it, give it more Really like it! Be the first to buy the book after it is published!

It's a pretty good book. It's a pretty good novel that I saw in a snh book. The content is quite sweet (I like the little sweet articles [Shy]). The author will update it every day. Please support me [I learned it] [I learned it] Okay, score points

I like it. I am the only one who likes it. This is my first time commenting.

It's rare to find Si Bawen who is pursuing a career, and she is paving the way step by step, working hard to attract fans, I really like it! Although I have CP, I am still very ambitious. I don't know if there will be any content about getting into trouble, but I hope there will be more updates, and I love watching it! Gaga Cooperation reduces points

The article is delicate and the plot is closely linked, but the update is too slow. The descriptions of the characters are also very good. If you can't find anything to read, you can check it out. The possibility of the author discontinuing the update is still relatively low.

Very nice! There is a very real feeling, a bit like Qingxin's celibacy hahaha [laughing] And it is not just about love, but also about career. Personally, I think it has a picture of xql working hard to build a career together. I look forward to the subsequent plot [top post]

I feel very good after reading it, but it's too little. I feel like the protagonist's life has just begun. There are so many things to write about. I like this story very much. I hope it won't end so easily. I will always support you. The author is very grateful [please update] [like]

I just opened this book with the intention of giving it a try, but I didn't expect to get sucked in right away. I read the latest chapter in two days. The heroine is a career-oriented player, and the story line is very clear. I'm already planning to read it a second time. Protect the book, protect the author! Listen to the author

Wow, I found a novel that I love so much. It's so good and interesting. I'd like to ask if the other heroine is Ran Ran? She also said there are so many heroines, I'm looking forward to it! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

The characters are very nice and the details are very vivid. Finally, I would like to ask, the author, you won't stop updating after writing.

All I can say is that the author's writing is very good. As a Juju fan, I enjoyed watching it very much. The plot arrangement is also very interesting. It's nice! Also, I like Qingyu's character very much, he is a very lovable character! I would venture to give you some advice, that is, when writing the MC and the stage, you can write more about the reactions of the people in the audience. I think it will look much better, it will feel more lively, and it will be more comfortable to watch! (I'm going to take the liberty of saying, if you don't like it, don't comment!) Finally, cheers to the author! ! ! Emmm... I hope the author can update it more... I mean it's a bit unreadable~ Of course, you should also pay attention to rest! Abba?

It's beautiful, I just hope I can write more about Yaoyao in the future, please beg me [crying]

It's good to read because this book is a fan of Song Xinran [note]

I thought I was with Shen Mengyao at first, but later you told me that the official partner was Song Xinran? But Qing Xin has few desires, which is too cool. Can you write as soon as possible until you reach adulthood? And don't have sadomasochism in the middle, okay? I quite like sweet love.

Ahhhh, I think chasing dreams is a very, very, very powerful and admirable thing. I entered the pit in 2018, and it was really a sparkling and charming scene of everyone working together in 2019. I really hope that the protagonist can go further and further on the road to chasing dreams. With people working hand in hand, this is a person's ordinary and shining life.

This is the most interesting novel I have read in the river. The character Zhang Qingyu has her own characteristics and style. Overall, she is very beautiful and sweet. Author, I listen to you.

I love watching it, but there are some parts that could be modified. It doesn't quite fit Ran. Secondly, does the president really have to write everyone in? I think it's enough to just write some that are related to the protagonist. Can I add more later if I encounter the plot? But according to the real timeline, Jing will be filming later. I don't know how the author wrote it. I'm looking forward to it.