The Way of Light
光明道
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 867k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Eastern Cultivation
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
380Chapters
55Reads
16Listens
2.4kReads · all time
In booklists 6
A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality
Are there any cultivation novels like "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality"? I'm looking for the classic progression: Qi Refining, Foundation Establishment, Core Formation, Nascent Soul, Deity Transformation, Void Refinement, Body Integration, Tribulation Transcendence, and Mahayana.
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New Writers, Come On In
It's so upsetting to keep seeing the stats barely change. The reader count doesn't go up at all, and there isn't a single comment. Hardly anyone reads the whole book, and by the last chapter, almost no one is still reading. New authors, let's support one another.
2.2kBooks5.9MViews1dUpdated
Anyone Writing a New Story? We Can Review Each Other's Work.
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Qi Refining, Foundation Establishment, Golden Core, Nascent Soul, Deification, Spirit Severing... Eternal Life
908Books49.6MViews2dUpdated
Looking for Mortal-Style Cultivation Novels, Nothing Too Over-the-Top
Please don't jump straight to the Deity Transformation or Body Integration stages. I'd like something longer. Thanks, fellow cultivators.
675Books8.9MViews3dUpdated
A Storage Ring, Mining Rough Stones in Another World, and Cultivation
743Books29.6MViews10dUpdated
Reader comments 6
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After reading the first two chapters, have you reached double digits after reading 100,000? Although I am a layman, I will briefly mention a few points. 1. There are too many words in each paragraph, which is a taboo for mobile reading. 2. The rhythm of traditional writing is inherently slow. It is better to start the first chapter from the conflict point related to the protagonist. But what you write is the background and daily life. Starting from the protagonist is still a novice. It takes a long time to prepare for the first climax. Many people cannot persist in the second chapter, let alone persist to the climax. Don't imitate the masters in terms of rhythm. You should have read many novels of this type, but newcomers should not imitate the writing methods of the masters. 3. The second chapter has nothing to do with the protagonist. It looks like it promotes the plot. In fact, as long as it has nothing to do with the protagonist, it can easily be regarded as background. 4. In just two chapters, I can't even remember how many characters appeared. This is a completely unfamiliar world to readers. What readers want is to take the perspective of the protagonist to understand this strange story, not to watch you describe the story. This is the so-called sense of substitution. The reader does not even take on the role of the protagonist, and describing a group of supporting characters affects the sense of immersion. Novels and movies are different. But you can still insist on updating, and there is no need to speak of perseverance. I hope my grades will get better later.
Well written, keep it up. Take another day off on the 6th
After reading the first few pictures, the author has a very good novel. It can be regarded as a novel moving towards literature. It seems that the author has also received a lot of influence. Come on
The author's writing is good, and the storyline is logically rigorous. Come follow the updates every day, come on! 👍
The plot is indeed a bit confusing, which makes it difficult for readers to follow later.
The language is good, but the plot logic is confusing