I Can See the Hidden Desires of Fairies!

The writing is pretty good. I can pass the review and still write in a way that makes people understand what I'm doing. I feel like I can't write without a certain writing style. In terms of characters, I felt a little sorry for Su Waner who died before she even appeared. She had no friends or parents. She just wanted to be a little transparent but ended up dead. Poor baby.

The setting is pretty good, but I just don't understand why the protagonist has to stare at married couples and flirt with them? [Cover face]

I only read more than 30 chapters and saw this Disadvantages: ① Many dialogue details or psychological descriptions of the characters are not shown, and it feels like the readers are expected to experience it themselves. ②The protagonist's dialogue with others is a little immature, like a student who has just entered college, or a shy graduate who has just emerged from society. Advantages: ① Comparing the "communication" with the teacher's wife and the shortcomings can clearly reveal the author's delicacy. This contrast makes people linger nostalgicly, giving the illusion that the food is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it. ②This mistress is simply my ultimate fantasy. Well, if she were a Chunnu, she would be perfect, the pinnacle! ! [Cry][cry][cry] Because I am sexually repressed, I can only give 4 stars based on the advantages and disadvantages. If there are no disadvantages and only one advantage, I will give 5 stars➕Give me a gift [give a heart] I also really want to experience the tenderness of my mistress, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, ahhhhhhhhhhhh, ahhhhhhhhhhh, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh [crying] [crying] [crying]

The writing is really good. Unlike other immortality writings which are like keeping a running account, the collection of magic weapons focuses on the description of people. The most rare thing is that other immortality writings are all about one's own birth, without the intrigues and intrigues of the human world, which seems very unreal. This story has plots and relationships, and the supporting characters are not human beings. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist's advancement is a bit slow. Since the identity of the genius has been exposed and there is so much external pressure, it should be improved a little more. There is also the need to explore the alchemy methods and magic weapons that have been obtained. This is human nature and has not been described. It will inevitably suppress the reader's curiosity and the score will naturally not be very high.

Gain favor and improve your skills. It's a very immersive golden finger. You can check it out.

It's okay, it's quite fun, I'm very imaginative while sitting [eating melon]

It's an older type of cool novel about cultivating immortals, but it's rare to find it without any poisonous points. It may be a bit cliched in its coolness, but Liu Bei's attributes make up for this very well [Adoration][Adoration]

Should I accept Jiang Linglong?

Take it, take it, take it, take it, take it, take it, take it all.

There are many fairy tales, but this one is well written and the characters' psychological descriptions are delicate, so it is worth reading.

It's really good, please give it a try.

I usually eat a light diet, like less oil, less salt, less sugar, young women The protagonist is too cute [making faces]

It's pretty good. You can watch it.

Very nice, highly recommended

Invincible and authentic hehe

The plot is good and the description is detailed

Pretty good, worth a look

Liu Xuande, it's all over if you don't have any brains [laughs evilly]

Is there anything like this that looks pretty similar?

The plot content is okay, I hope it won't be interrupted and it won't disappoint people.

So far, the article is pretty good. The excessive combat power is acceptable, the plot arrangement is reasonable, and there are not too many poisonous points.

The novel is well written, 666 can read it.

It makes me want to hit him a few times [laughs evilly]

It looks good. I love watching it. If I have everything else, can I have a girl? [Shy]

I'm trying to save the points, I'm afraid I'll lose them, the author is so great [laughing evilly]

At least so far, very good, quite satisfied

I just saw the latest 125 chapters. It's a high-quality fantasy novel with no major poison. There are a few sections that are not satisfactory in terms of look and feel, but they are not minor poisons.

It is extremely smooth to read in one sitting, the writing is smooth, the contradictions and exciting points of the plot complement each other, and the reading experience is excellent.

The author's writing is not bad, and it makes people want to stop reading it. Especially the descriptions in many places are very good. The author should work hard to update, try not to suppress the combat power too much, and use his golden fingers better. After all, a good article must be good. Come on, author!

The front is pretty good, but once you enter the court, it feels boring.