Make the Game Come True and Create the First Immortal Clan in Eternity

Divine book! And it's a new type! I really didn't expect Tomato to have such an awesome author! Family stories are generally difficult to write because there are too many characters and it is easy to describe them too vaguely, making readers feel too novice and unable to get into the emotions. However, when I read the latest chapter, I found that the author has written each character's personality and experience very deeply! Constantly provoke readers' emotions and move them! I keep wanting to see what happens next, every family member is very vivid!

It is indeed a good book. I have been reading it for ten years. The kind of immortal cultivation books are too slow to read. The current systematic texts are similar. The cultivation of immortality in this book is slow and fast at the same time. It is very novel and comfortable to read. The author's writing skills are also first-rate.

The writing is good, and the theme of development is a bit new. There is no need to specifically describe the feeling of being almost demonic in intelligence. There is also plenty of space for blank space. Personally, I feel that the protagonist does not need to have such a strong sense of immersion and should have more of a sense of isolation.

To be honest, it's okay as a cool novel, with any subject matter, it's quite attractive. But there are some things that I find a little unsatisfactory. For example, at the beginning, my daughter's son's writing was not very good. My daughter said in the early stage that her qualifications were not good, but she loved reading and writing. However, she did not explain who she learned from in the early stage, her father? Mother? His mother is a peasant woman and his father is a slave. Who has this knowledge? I think this can be explained. Also, it was said in the early stage that their qualifications were not good, but they became great masters from the time they resisted the invasion of the Hu family. Well... To be honest, I think there is a little problem, but it is not a big problem. The author can learn a little bit from another book called Xuanjian Xianzu. Although it is not a good book, the characters in it are very delicate and there is still a lot of room for improvement.

It's a very nice book. The plot is very smooth. I hope the author will work hard. Fire Tongs Liu Ming. Big cheers to the author. There will always be some people who don't know why they want to score randomly. I saw several 1-star ones. I don't know what they think. If you don't like this kind of thing, go check out other ones. Just give it a one-star rating to increase its presence. There are too many people waiting. The points can definitely go up.

It's a very good book. It's a rare masterpiece in the ancestral and family genres. The writing style is humorous and relatively relaxed. Unfortunately, there are too few words. It was lost when it was getting better. I hope the author will learn from the eagle to eat the chicken and update six or seven chapters a day.

I saw Chapter 111, it was so good. It's been a long time since I've seen such a well-written family story. Although it is a family story, there is a sense of cultivation in it. The development speed is well controlled, and everyone's description is online. It feels like I have been on the road to revenge, and I feel a little tired. After completing a small goal, another revenge goal appears.

When Yu Xian died, he felt that he was well-shaped, but the mediocre Jin Dan inherited the will of Qingyun Pavilion in the hands of Tianji Pavilion and the County Prince's Mansion to grab a glimmer of life for Qingyun County. When he saw the variable of revenge of the Li family, he was ready to die for it as soon as he started planning, and told Tianming that he was going to die. A madman wants to die for the sake of his family even though he knows he can survive, and he has been infamy for the ages. He is worthy of the name of a madman. The coming and going of the Li family in recent chapters has made my scalp numb even more. All in all, a good book, I love reading it, and I update it quickly! Throw away your illusions and prepare to fight! !

It's very nice. I think it's a magical book. It's fine. Brothers, you can read it. The rating is low. After watching the later part, I realized what cultivating immortals is, how to avenge any grievances, and why you create a family to cultivate immortals. This is what cultivating immortals is. When I mentioned it earlier, Dagang was a little confused, but later on, it is about cultivating immortals. Just like us modern people, cultivating immortals is not just a human thing, and we take revenge when we have grudges.

It's great. I really feel like this book shouldn't be here. The characters here are so well described. Although this article is based on a family, everyone has their own story and characteristics. The plot is passionate and tender, and it won't make people feel awkward when it's burning. The twists and turns are handled very appropriately. The tenderness really makes people feel the same. It can be said that there is no male protagonist in this article, because everyone is the protagonist of their own story. The storyline is not brainless and has ideas. At the same time, it is not about being invincible all the way and singing songs of victory, but about being prepared for danger in times of peace and striving for ideals and goals. For someone like me who has been reading novels since elementary school, I have really been short of books for several years. I really don't want to read a book after reading it for a while. I have been reading this book for almost a day without looking for other books to cross-read. I feel that this book is really amazing. Really, highly recommend watching it!

This book is really good-looking. Although the author writes about the subject of simulators, I feel that each character is well-developed. Each of them is constantly fighting for the rise of the Li family. Every time they encounter dangers and difficulties, they can work together to face and survive them. They are affectionate and righteous. They are grateful to the friends who can lend a helping hand in danger, and take them into consideration. They deal the most fatal blow to every enemy, so that the enemy will always live in fear of them. In the book, we can see the growth of many descendants, from immature to mature, from weak to strong. Finally, I would like to summarize what the author wrote about Real Special Brew. The rating of 9.2 Is pretty good, and I feel like I can still mention it. Also, the author should update it soon. I finished it after only two chapters [angry]

The pace of this novel is okay, and the plot is also okay. It can be regarded as a kind of family style, which is relatively good. But after reading it in one sitting, Caijindan is a bit slow, but it is okay. I can also accept this. Overall, there is no big problem.

The full text is non-toxic, the book is very novel, and the description of the Li family is even more exciting. Hundreds of feet of green front, dragons and phoenixes roaring together, some people seize the good fortune of heaven and earth, are attacked by evil spirits, but do not give up, in order to build their own path of saints in troubled times; some people have been killed by their masters, and have endured for ten years, and suddenly gained power and entered the Qingyun, transformed into strange fire, obtained the fruit of Taoism, destroyed the foundation, created invincible power, and became the foundation of the great emperor. In time, the entire clan will become a great emperor, all species will be of the highest quality, everyone will be like a dragon, and will exist forever.

This is the first time I have seen such a family development template with novel themes and online IQ. The characters are vivid and flesh-and-blood, which makes readers unable to help but get involved in it. It is an immersive reading, especially the character portrayal of the old pig demon king, which is deeply rooted in people's hearts, but it is also difficult to let go. I hope to give it a good ending and resurrect this character in the future.

The characters are perfectly created, and the emotions are well represented. One person slowly develops into a big family. The descriptions of each person are particularly perfect, with flesh and blood, and everyone is working hard for the family.

To put it in Li Yaotie's tone, it's so damn good-looking! The subject matter is very new. The emotional shaping of the characters is also very full, and the foreshadowing is also very good. It's just a pity that this book requires using your brain to read, and most Tomato readers don't have this condition... Hahaha! It makes my blood boil! Sometimes I cry and sometimes I get angry.

First generation Male: The talent panel is not high but the upgrade is fast. Female: Ordinary person but a genius at controlling beasts second generation Male 1: mediocre in spirit but genius in swordsmanship Male 2: The wealth of the Weapon Refining Emperor, building the foundation and creating a new Weapon Refining career Female 1: Immortal gift of medicine. After reading the secret book of medicine, she understood the supreme way and became an immortal body. The second female: She has the qualifications of a saint. She can make Jin Dan frightened just by looking at her even before she has entered the Taoism. In short, she has a very high level of prowess and is the best in the second generation. Third generation Male 1: The talent panel is very high. He is basically the scheduled leader of the sect. He is wandering around alone. He has the taste of the protagonist. Male 2: A pure heart, looking at problems directly to the essence, with the taste of Taoism Three to Nine: There is not too much pen and ink to return, there is a secret method of blood connection, the seven gourd brothers fourth generation Male 1: The talent panel is huge and he has the qualifications of an emperor

Not bad, nothing bad about them, they all look good, especially those well-shaped children of the Li family, such as Yaowen Yaoqing, Li Tianyi, Li Changan, Li Changyao, etc. In short, the images of the children of the Li family are very good, with distinctive personalities, and nothing bad about them. They are good-looking, come on, keep up the good work.

I finished reading the new version in 2 days, the plot is good😊, I will keep it for bookworms Those who should be resurrected can be resurrected. Stop fighting all the time.

A good-looking and interesting book about family cultivation of immortality!

Not bad, not bad. After reading the introduction, I didn't really have the desire to continue reading [laughing awkwardly] [laughing awkwardly] I read a chapter or two patiently, eh? Not bad [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] (The content of the introduction should be realized in a later stage) I feel that the score is also very low. If it doesn't collapse later, this book is definitely worth reading [ Send my heart ] [ Send your heart ]

So far I have seen it after Ten Days of God-Slaying I have read some very good novels with emotional writing style. The writing content is rich in foreshadowing and the subject matter is novel and unique. Of course, because of the subject matter, this could have been a good article, but the author did not follow the popular trend. Secondly, because of the subject matter, there are many plots that can be hidden and then revealed to attract people's attention. The emotions are well detailed and very thought-provoking. Everyone's experience is different, but it depends on my length. The above is what I personally think is the attraction of this book. Of course, I also think that this book has two major pitfalls. I will discuss it with all netizens here. 1. Due to the time setting, it is difficult for the author to have development potential in reality (the author may also deliberately want it to flourish in the later period). My personal opinion is to create a setting that can level the time in the mid-term. 3. The development content in the game is very rich, but in reality it can also be developed in detail on both sides. 2. Due to the novelty of some aspects of the development model, the novelty will be reduced and the viewing experience will be insufficient (this is my personal experience from watching some development novels). You can make some jokes and other imaginative writing, but it may affect the overall style of writing. As for why the ratings are not improving, watching and understanding are not improving, it is not only because the author has just become famous, but also because the subject matter itself is a cool genre but not completely cool [Thinking] I hope my comments can help book friends and authors who are in a book shortage [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

The villain's IQ is on the line, twists and turns, and the protagonist is not invincible. He does not stick to superficial forms, has a true heart, wears the villain's skin and does decent things, is not defined by the world, and has never put on the golden hoop. He is just a person with a clear conscience. The best in the mid-term

This book starts by saying that the protagonist is very expensive, but others think that the protagonist is actually very talented. This may dissuade some people. Also, at the beginning, the protagonist's family does not know where they have gone, and the protagonist is left alone in Blue Star. Apart from these two points that the author did not explain clearly, the rest is no problem. The thinking is clear. IQ Online depicts each character's personality and subsequent changes very delicately. The behind-the-scenes article on the family is a high-quality article.

This novel is so good, [laughing and crying], I prefer reading romance, I hope there is no harem in the back, cp.

I think this book has no poisonous points. It is worth reading in Tomato. There is no heroine. I like this kind of family upbringing from childhood to adulthood.

I think it should be 9.8. How come it's only 9.2? To be honest, the author's level is indeed very high, and the writing style is even better (for the sake of writing style, I can ignore the typos wwww), and the foreshadowing and dark lines are reversed. Maybe it is this kind of long-lasting charm, and it should not be in the mainstream, which is why I only read it now In fact, when I saw the fairy coming out, I was tired of watching it. I skipped the next part until the protagonist traveled back in time. I can only say that the plot setting is simply top-notch. I plan to keep it on my bookshelf for a few years before reading it again. Looking at the update time, the author should also be immobile (great sadness)

What can I say? I think this novel is really good. There are some shortcomings. For example, Li Dalong is a slave but upgrades quickly in the later period. It is a little unreasonable. But it's much better than that kind of mindless cool article. There is a family, flesh and blood, emotions I think as a family stream it's successful The later stages will also really make people excited, and they will be brought into the experience with the characters. I was in pain over Kuangtu Li's death. I shed tears when I watched it (maybe I'm a girl and my tears level is lower😭) Its description of Kuangtu Li seemed to really make me see a young man riding a donkey under the sunset. The word "confucian" seems to run through the entire life of the madman. How much has he paid to prove that he is not a Confucian? "Sister Qingyu, Grandpa Benshu is right, I am a coward..." "I want the Li family to survive forever." "Old donkey, come with me for one more walk." "Many years ago you said that your Li family has never been subdued. I don't believe it." "I should have believed it. I thought Kuangtu Li was a coward. I was wrong." You ask me if he is brave, I have seen many warriors in Lingyu Fang, but none of them are as brave as your madmen! Hey, everyone has different feelings about reading novels, but in my case it really made me feel regretful I only know that they only want one word - Li This is my first time seriously writing a book review. The author is great. Please update it quickly.

The following are all personal perceptions: the overall feeling is enough to say that the novel is a good one. The most outstanding point is the creation of family characters, which are individual and not distorted. A slight weakness is the description of the protagonist. Although it is not very obvious, there is still a certain sense of fragmentation. The emotions of the characters are very complex, but there is a lack of certain foreshadowing, which makes people feel unable to grasp the specific mental state. Of course, this point will not have much impact on the reading experience of the novel. After all, it mainly focuses on family lines. [Top post][top post][top post]

Very unique, looking forward to the next post. One thing is that the inking of reality and the game is too uneven, far less natural than in the early stage. It is understandable that the author wanted to write two lines that finally merged into one, or that the reality line may have been opened a little early, and it is far less natural than the game line, and there is an obvious sense of dissonance. However, it is precisely because this part is less inked that there is no big problem. In the later stages, it may be the part of the plot where the timelines intersect. If it can be written well, it will definitely be a highlight. I also hope that the author will pay more attention to the depiction of the reality line. The protagonist in the group photo still needs to be written more.