The Fairy Record of Xianqiong

The description of the female characters is really great, especially when the male and female protagonists give out sweets. Tomato has never seen this level. However, the male protagonist is too difficult to start, and he is always unlucky to encounter high-end games, so that he suffers all the way. In addition, the male protagonist's strength is not at the top soon after practicing, which gives people a feeling of abuse of the protagonist. Although he does not suffer, he cannot touch the female protagonists. Moreover, this worldview really has no time to spare. It is a little depressing and does not make people breathless. I hope I can write more sweet and greasy daily life in the future. I feel like this way of writing, let alone tomatoes, I guess there will be a lot of criticism from the mother-in-law. I hope the author can stick to it and finish it. As for the shortcomings, there are also comments below. First, the plot is incoherent, because it is a high-end game from the beginning, and various powerful figures are introduced all at once. There is no step-by-step development of the plot and the introduction of characters. It can be described as urgent. It is estimated that many light readers will be confused. The second is the problem of the male protagonist. It is normal to worry about exposure and fear of death. However, with the goddess Qian Tuxue's flawless love as a foil, the male protagonist is indeed a bit stingy and his image is somewhat unsustainable. It gives me a feeling that he is not worthy of Qian Tuxue. In short, the writing style of this book is very good, but the plot development and world view setting are really not interesting.

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The writing is the best among the novels I have read in Tomato so far. It can be seen that the author has a profound knowledge, the plot is coherent and not laggy, and the portrayal of each heroine is brilliant and has her own characteristics. The only shortcoming is that the development of the world view and background is a little rushed and messy. A large number of various forces and character nicknames are thrown out in a large space at once, which makes it difficult to read. The overall shortcomings are not concealed, it is very good, and it even makes me feel that the author has shrunk his talent at Tomato. Now I just hope that it will not be discontinued. Such an exquisite work deserves to be shown in its full glory.

This book shouldn't be on Tomato [laughing] It feels a bit like Liu Bei from the old days, and he still abuses women.

It's true [Chigua] [Chigua] describes women. The author is really fierce and does not hold back to describe the beauty of women. The sentences are beautiful throughout, but the shortcomings are that the content and atmosphere are a bit foggy and depressing. If you add humor and make it easy and enjoyable to read, this book will be a masterpiece. In the early stage, the protagonist was frequently frustrated, so let the protagonist face it with humor. The despair and depression conveyed at the beginning of the book, are you too anxious? There is no fear in the despair, and there is a free and easy humor in the pain [Chigua] [Chigua] [Chigua] makes it more comfortable to read

It is a first-class masterpiece, the characters are well created, and the process of an 'ant' struggling to survive is described in great detail. The description of the female characters is excellent. I even doubted how the author could write a normal beauty text so lustfully. The driving scenes were described in detail. No, man, I thought I had become a moderator. I lamented that the writing is really good. I doubted that the review was because it was difficult to read and I didn't read it carefully? The author ran away in the middle of the book, resulting in fragments of the plot, but there is an author who is not joking and his writing style is really good. It is suitable to calm down and read slowly, and slowly understand it. I feel that the city of villains is a bit delayed in the middle, but it does not hinder the overall impression. It is still a perfect work.

The author writes really well Pros: The portrayal of women is pretty good, the protagonist is also growing, the writing is very good, very good Disadvantages: First of all, this is not a cool article, and secondly, some chapters of the article seem to be intermittent. But it's free, and the requirements don't have to be too high. The most important thing is, has the author come to shore? Does he have a representative work?

Personally, I think it's quite good. Of course, you have to ignore some of the plots when reading this novel, such as the Forbidden Gate, and just jump to it (the same goes for the spread of fame at the beginning, but luckily Bai Jian's place came back) (of course, as long as you don't jump to read, you can understand it, and the parts that are not written are also The plot is not important), overall, it is very interesting, and the character of the protagonist is actually well shaped (don't criticize, because at the beginning of the goddess, Pig's Foot was afraid of death and lacked love, and he did not dare to admit it) (This novel describes the growth of Pig's Foot, which is quite acceptable)

The author writes about the first echelon of beauties in the male videos I read. There are many words in it that I have only seen in female videos. It really makes each female protagonist look stunning in the world, making people feel that even touching it is a kind of blasphemy. Maybe that's why the male protagonist is so tragic. Apart from having close contact with beautiful women, he often encounters all kinds of bad luck and often feels powerless. However, the characters are three-dimensional and each character has his own characteristics. If he doesn't care about the pleasure, it seems to be definitely worth it.

This book's score of 7 on Tomato is considered low. Many books with scores of 9 are not as good as this book. Of course, there are obvious problems with the plot and characters, but the author's writing style is smooth and vivid, which is something that many books in Tomato don't have. Just because the car drives well, it deserves a score of 8 or more.

The description of women is easy, and the main female characters are very strong; some people may think that strong women are toxic, but audiences like me who are keen on strong, independent women will enjoy it. Good luck, author. The logic is tight, and any hole dug can be filled in, and all the links are connected to justify it. The uncle's role was so wonderfully written🥰🥰

I finished reading it in one sitting, and there wasn't anything majorly objectionable about it. The characterization and descriptions are very good. If I have to say, I haven't figured out the protagonist's realm after reading hundreds of chapters, and sometimes scenes jump so much that I can't keep up with the rhythm. Midori, which some people fear most, does not exist at all. But another point is that due to the physical condition of the protagonist, he was used as a pawn by the strongest bosses in the early stage and was unable to resist, so he was a bit aggrieved. However, this situation no longer happened later. Some of the foreshadowings did surprise me when they were recycled later.

Although the plot is sometimes very jumpy and difficult to understand, I still like this style. It is different from other fantasy, and it is not the kind of killing monsters and upgrading. The interaction is really interesting, especially the bickering with Nuan Que later. The description of women is really different and makes people feel really soft and tender. Although some plots are a bit confusing and I can't stand it. For example, when I first entered the Demon Realm after getting the inheritance of eternal night, I couldn't stand it. But after I got through it, it was very interesting and I liked it very much ˗ˋˏᰔᩚˎˊ˗

It's a very good book, but it's written in the wrong direction on Tomato. I suggest the author open a small account and use other apps. The rating may be better.

On the whole, it's okay. The description of women is not clichéd. It's okay that the protagonist is afraid of death. It doesn't require everyone to live as food and die as food, but it feels like it's both necessary and cowardly.

There are more than 300 chapters written in the second volume, which does not promote the main plot too much. Bai Jian only appeared in the last few dozen chapters. As soon as Bai Jian came out, it was written that she knows everything, which is a bit like the author's perspective. Fortunately, the plot did not collapse. One of the highlights of this book is the emotional line between the protagonist and the heroines. I personally feel that the line with the high priest is the best written. The author's depiction of the ambiguity between the male and female protagonists is excellent. It can be seen that the author is still making progress, come on! ! !

I feel like the author borrowed a lot from the Netherworld Immortal Path [laughing evilly]

The writing has the feel of ancient fairy tale novels, which is very touching. It is one of the few good works that can be read continuously. The characters are vivid, the plot is not satisfactory, and it is not as bad as others said. It's just that the onomatopoeia is too lacking and always empty, and the male protagonist is a little bit licking the high priest (the number of chapters I have read so far is like this, I don't know what will happen next), come on, author. By the way, if there is a group chat, the author would like to consider setting up a group chat. Some plots are a bit too light. Is it because Tomato is too strict? [Crying][crying]

Excellent work, worth seeing. The characters are well created, the plot has grand scenes, subtle descriptions, calculations, true feelings, tension and excitement, comfort and tranquility, and [sneaky smile], this is a cool novel!

In terms of characterization, currently all female characters are top-notch. Their character traits are very distinct, many but not mediocre, and there are no evil points (not counting strong women and weak men). Most of them are single-mindedly devoted to the protagonist. Personally, I think the protagonist is okay. Although some book friends think it's a bit naive, the character of the protagonist in the harem novel is not that high no matter how high it is. The author also wrote a relatively reasonable motivation for the protagonist at the beginning of the article, which is acceptable. The writing is pretty good. Compared to other Tomato books, the author still has certain writing skills. In terms of plot, the first part is mainly about emotional drama, and the later part is mainly about pushing the main plot mixed with emotional drama. There are many more meaty dramas than other books, but after all, it is a formal platform, and some things are difficult to break. Overall, it's worth reading. It does have the flavor of Liu Beiwen. It's really amazing to change the platform to complete the meaty drama. If this is the author's first book, it's really awesome [Chigua]

I hope I can keep writing until the end this time [Love]

The writing is quite good, the descriptions are smooth, the words are gorgeous, and the characters have distinct personalities. However, the protagonist sometimes feels too useless, and he relies on Taixu Shenfa and the inheritance of Yongye. He has no fighting ability at all. The description of that aspect is also very fast. Sometimes I don't even notice that I have done it. Overall, it is okay. The last time I saw this was "The disciple is too popular, the master is in a hurry" but it was blocked.

It's okay, as long as the girl doesn't show up at the end

The later part is better than the previous one, but I feel that although the protagonist has difficulty finding a place in the main world, the time spent in that secret realm is longer than in the main world. From about 150 chapters to now, isn't it not good? Of course, if it is longer, it won't be a big problem. Finally, come on, don't be tj

I like reading it. I stopped updating it for a long time and haven't given up. This is my first book review. I wish you good luck in the new year. Come on [love] [love] [love]

It's really well written, a rare masterpiece. I hope the author sticks to it

It's well written. It can be seen that the author has a side job [laughs crookedly]

There is nothing to say about the writing, but there are a lot of cuts in the first few dozen chapters, which is not uncomfortable to read. After those dozens of chapters, there are no deletions that affect the reading. There are many female characters, and the description of female appearance is probably the most detailed in the novels I have read. They are all grown-ups, fairies, and witches.

The previous description of the fight between the goddess and the ancient bat has the feeling of the male and female protagonists in Zhu Xian in Kongsang Mountain. It feels good.

Very beautiful, with a grand structure and lifelike characters.