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[Laughing evilly] This book is really excellent, the main plot has a clear and refreshing rhythm, and the protagonist is very humorous and neat in doing things. There is no frustrating plot, and it is very enjoyable to watch. There are so many humorous jokes in the text, but why are there so few paragraphs and comments? I just can't bear to read other books, but this one...[Face covering] I don't want to read, but I liked it very much. Personally, this book started to change when Sir Huang made trouble for the protagonist. Then came the role of the Independent Commission Against Corruption, Liming, but I can't remember who it was. Later, I had to donate everything... [Face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering], and then I never wanted to open this book again. Who is not patriotic? Is it necessary to donate all your wealth to be patriotic? How much have you donated to natural and man-made disasters in the past few years? Even if you don't have money, why don't you volunteer at the head office? [Face covering] Although I don't have much ability, at least Shuidichou donated a few hundred yuan. That's wrong, mainly because I feel that the plot you wrote has become cliche and formulaic. Who will feel immersed in the plot of the last thirty chapters?

The writing is pretty good, with some minor flaws, such as Ni Yongxiao, but the plot later proves that he wrote the wrong person's name. Have you forgotten the author of Fang Sisters?

Except for the fact that the system didn't appear at all, the rest of the writing was pretty good. It floated behind. . .

The details are good, but a bit short. Also, the author who cannot use pictures is not a good author. The author should consciously add pictures to certain plots [eating melon] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] [thinking]

Aren't you trying to pick up Huiling and the Fang sisters? You haven't been looking for them for so long.

I feel that I can take in Tian Yangsheng's sister. I feel that I can take in Tian Yangsheng's sister. It would be great to have a beautiful woman and several brothers-in-law who can fight. It would be great to win people's hearts.

The plot of the story is compact and the progress is not slow. The author has some writing skills, which are much better than other Hong Kong comprehensive novels of the same type. What impressed me deeply is that the author has put some effort into characterization. Many characters in the book have their own distinctive features. Unlike the characters in other Hong Kong comprehensive novels, except for the different names, there is no difference between the characters at all. The author's writing style is quite funny, and I feel like he has some dark undertones, hahaha. From the novel, it feels pretty good, at least not so stiff. The whole novel has too many narrative parts, just like the narration. It replaces most of the story progress and dialogue between people. Feeling affects the reading experience. Overall, this novel scores at least 8 points.

It's good to read. I was reading another book called Zhu Tian Wen which happened to be about the world of Hong Kong TV dramas, but the update was slow. I was prompted to search for basic Hong Kong TV dramas. This book happens to be the highest level. The protagonist is well portrayed and the plot progresses at a good pace. But the update is not enough and I finished it in one night. I read 200,000 words. By the way, sorry, I have to step on it. There is a book next door. The Hong Kong lottery score is really high 9.3. The actual level is really bad. I wrote more than 700,000 words and it made me sick. It's only two thousand words in one day, so I'm just boasting in vain!

Very good very good

Not bad, just a little less

It's well written and looks good, haha, it's quite funny.

Being a dwarf mule is hard enough, but being an undercover dwarf mule is the hardest of all. This is good, adding a little joy to the plot and a little amusement to the daily routine.

To be honest, such a crow is very real, and it is normal to have high loyalty. The eldest brother does not own a yacht, but the crow can afford it and even buy it. You must know that the protagonist has no territory at that time, which shows how the protagonist treats the younger brother. This is the protagonist eating meat. He doesn't even drink the soup when he is close to the younger brother, but just fills the meat slices with rice!

This comprehensive review of Hong Kong is pretty good, but the names of the people are a bit unclear.

Add a school scene

Well written, but the pace is a bit fast

I like this Hong Kong variety style very much [Note] Read to the latest chapter 85 in one go

Guo Aiming is beautiful, but what impressed me most about her was Lan Jiawen in Criminal Investigation Files 2. It's a real childhood shadow. When I watched it, I thought I would come back as a big boss in the third season [crying]

Come on, come on, come on! ! ! !

Well written, keep it up

So pretty! I like it [laughs]

Multiple episodes are integrated, but not inconsistent! The plot is concise and not dragging, and the content is really enjoyable! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Harem? Now there are only two women

Still very beautiful

Not bad, keep up the good work

Nice needle, hehehe

This book📚 is very exciting and beautiful

There's nothing to say, I just like it

Brothers, please, is there any comic plot? Kick me. I want to read comic novels now.

It's too deliberate to imitate Brother Feng Yun in terms of patriotism. Brother Feng Yun, wasn't it also written by you, the author?