Cultivation of Immortality: from an Ordinary Boy to the Taoist Ancestor of the Immortal World

The writing is good. It draws on similar plots from Han Laomo and Chen Mazi. It has a lot of harems, betrayals, and calculations, but there are just too many harems. Personal suggestion: The labels for the main palace, concubines, and maids should be written more clearly, and the relationship must be poisoned every time. "The specialty of Da Chu is too cliché. It would be better to write some supplements. The purpose is clear. The protagonist himself is a person with clear goals and decisive killings. There is no need to keep poisoning and seizing Yuanyin in the same old way. He is a demon cultivator. He has massacred the city, and high-level monks go to collect supplements." It's more normal. My personal suggestion is to leave heirs and consolidate your power before ascending. If the author has a group to communicate with, you can communicate more. It is still worth reading. "There are too many articles about single female protagonists. This book has more harems and blood, not the Holy Mother. I hope to keep it." Give me 5 points, cheers for the author 👏

Although it is a novel about cultivating immortals, I hope that the protagonist's experience in cultivating immortals will be smoother or more bumpy. It is best to prevent readers from guessing the plot behind it, otherwise it will be uninteresting. I hope the author will not write the protagonist in such a serious way like most of the novels about cultivating immortals, and that it will be closer to the real life model. There will be points for comments.

Give it five stars. The title is not great, but it is an excellent harem novel. You must support such authors! Come on⛽️

A very beautiful book, every chapter touched my heart.

Personally I think it's pretty good!

Good, good, good, good

It's pretty good. Come on, author [laughs evilly]

The writing is very interesting and beautiful!

Damn, it's really good to be honest.

Everything else is fine and can be seen. However, most of the Taoist companions in the early stage were cold, and I hope that the ending will be to go back to the past and resurrect them.

It suits my taste, looking forward to the follow-up.

This book is quite well written, I will continue to work on it

Continuously promote the practice, and describe and analyze clearly to attract people into the "scenery". Like

It's beautiful, and it seems like a mortal cultivating immortality.

The writing is quite good, with clever ideas and constant short stories, but the rating is too low.

The early story plot is reasonable and cleverly conceived Extremely bad, the value of the author is extremely distorted, and it is a pig's foot that slaughters mortals. It is incredible that this kind of book can still be on the shelves!

Super exciting and beautiful book, great Super nice book, great

Come on, it looks pretty

A nice book

It's good, but it always rains heavily during the red line.

The content has a haunting feeling, and the overall content is not laggy. The plots are intertwined.

The plot is touching, the reasoning is close, the protagonist is motivated and counterattacks, there is love and justice, and the intersection of time and space

Wonderful and very silky.

Good writing, good writing, keep up the good work.

Very good! Thank you teacher

A very well written book.

Good, good, good, good

Fascinating, pretty good.

Kill decisively without wasting words

Well written and smooth writing