Earthly Immortal

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As a cultivator of the gram type, this book is undoubtedly successful, and the protagonist's situation is also suitable for a person of the gram type. Unlike some people who are obsessed with cultivating immortals, the protagonist is very sober, and there are no consequences for his cultivation.

This is one of the more outstanding books I have read recently. There are always some unexpected angles to bring the plot forward. I hope there won't be any love-hate relationships between men and women. I just want to keep this style of cultivating immortality and seeking immortality.

This book is different from other grammatical cultivators. In other books, you can only see excessive depictions of madness and darkness, but this book has just the right amount of detail. It is an unexpected development, but it does not exceed the acceptable range, but there are still too few words. I hope the author will continue to work hard to maintain it. 666, This is the end

The horror aspect is not bad. If I want to talk about the shortcomings, it is that it is not exciting enough. The latter part is relatively dull, but the writing in the first part is indeed very exciting.

It's not easy to write a book, so it's a five-star review. The demining is completed, suspense + cultivation of immortality + exploration. The main line of puzzle solving cuts into flesh and blood. Extra points for imagination, good atmosphere, average writing, and interesting plot. (Some minor omissions, nothing serious.) It's worth recommending. I still support the new book and like it.

The result of this book will not be bad, the writing style is good, the structure is good, the protagonist is real and not brainless, the suspense is good, the knife is good, it integrates many elements together, and it is also well written, which is rare. If more people want it, it can become a hit. Come on, author, I hope it can continue.

It's a very good book, well-written and gives people the feel of a published book, without the power of a Tomato novel. The logic is rigorous, the plot is ups and downs, and the characters are vivid. In fact, it is not difficult to see that the author intentionally borrowed from Tao Wei Xian, but the whole book looks more like a ghost blowing out a lamp, and it really has a strong ghost blowing out a lamp feeling. There are not many characters in the book, but the plot is very rich. The only shortcoming is that there is a common tomato problem, the ending is rushed, and the later stage begins to collapse. The middle stage of Yellow Wonderland, which took almost two hundred chapters to be written, becomes a fairy at the end. The story also feels that there are many holes that have not been filled in, and many are not expanded upon. But at least there are no eunuchs running away in the end, and the flaws are not concealed. It is a very good book. After reading about this book, I think it can be compared with Ghost Blowing a Lantern, and there should be no big problem in publishing it.

This one is well written and can be recommended.

It's nice. I haven't seen this kind of modern cultivating immortality in a long time. It's well written, but it's a little lacking. I hope the author will update it every day.

Except for the fact that the author goes caving from time to time and the updates are unstable, it's perfect [like]

It's rare to find a good Cthulhu series. Many of Tomato's novels are fairy tales covered in Cthulhu skins. This one doesn't do that. After reading dozens of chapters, I found the flavor of the original Cthulhu series, but it's not as crazy as it was. The rating is low, really low. It's only over seven o'clock. I almost missed a good Christian novel! It's okay, but it's a pity that it's unfinished. It's hard to write about Kexi. The author should be Jiang Cailang. As you can see later, it's only two hundred chapters, so it's normal for the rating to be low.

The only shortcoming is probably that the overall situation is always looking for the truth, and there is no transition. Occasionally, I go back to see my mother, and I just take a look. If there are too few daily transitions, I will feel a little tired. Also, the strength of the monster is a bit unclear.

It's quite an interesting setting. I just felt a little nauseous after thinking about it, but I couldn't help but watch what happened next [awkward laugh]

Modern fantasy is similar to a ghost blowing out a lamp. The writing is foreshadowed and the author creates suspense without directly giving explanations like a short story. It is considered a good novel in Tomato and makes people want to keep reading. It is at least above average in Tomato. It would be better if the author could refine the writing style, describe and intersperse forces other than the protagonist more, and make the layout deeper. In short, novels that are innovative and have their own style are good.

It's very well written and has a weird and fairy-like feel. The protagonist is always being pushed forward but it's hard to see the overall world clearly. It's really good.

It's okay, except for a little confusion in some places, but I don't think it deviates from the theme. It's just that although it's the underground part at the beginning of Xena, I may not understand much about it. It depicts a wonderful world. I would choose this book when I want to read immersively. I read it almost in one go. I stopped for a few days at the last dozen chapters. In my mind, it ranks in the top thirty of the more than five hundred books I have read. Fortunately, it ends with more than 400,000 words. No matter how long it is, it may not be unbearable. It just ends like this.

I am a long-time Tomato book friend. I came across this book while I was chasing new books. The writing is fascinating, the plot is well interspersed, and there is a feeling of suspense from beginning to end. It is not a cool story about cultivating immortals that kills everyone, but a growing protagonist. I hope those who like it can take a look. The story setting is also quite interesting. I hope the author will add more books. No rest is allowed except to go to the toilet [laughing]

Cultivation of immortality through urban deception is quite good. It made my eyes light up. The writing is also about ordinary people cultivating immortality with a little bit of luck. The writing style is also smooth. I recommend everyone to read it because I feel that the author is slow to update due to the lack of people and old thieves.

The writing is really interesting. The last scene of Ran Zhu in the latest chapter is really sad, but he should be very happy in the illusion. Come on author.

The author writes well, this is a truly good book, I feel like it can be a god

The first part has a strong sense of immersion, and I hope you can work on it more later.

Very nice, very nice. Classic cave exploration, the mystery of immortality. Nothing matters, only realm and strength. In short, there is one sentence: the protagonist never looks at the realm of strength. Because he is the protagonist. Really very beautiful If you can deceive someone, you are a fool [vomit]

It's not a bad ending. The last chapter is a good ending. However, the last chapter is a bit abrupt. I feel like the author didn't want to write it anymore [crying], but it's great. I hope the author will keep up the good work. Come on.

Four stars because the ending was too rushed. The description at the beginning of the plot is amazing and fits my fantasy of chaos so well. The constant switching between real and fake is very enjoyable. If the ending was carefully considered, it would be a good book.

It is very beautiful, well-conceived, fascinating plot, and delicately written. It is a good book.

It's so beautiful. I didn't take it seriously at the beginning. I thought it would be great to go down a hole. I didn't expect all kinds of strange things to happen. The protagonist also grows up very quickly. I like the feeling of killing him [full] It's over, it's over, it's such a difficult and good book [crying] [crying], shouldn't it be cut?

It's good, but the protagonist is not the kind of black protagonist. If you want to watch that kind of story, you can leave.

To be honest, it is a rare high-quality book (っ'-')╮=͟͟͞͞🎁) ﾟдﾟ )

A whimsical plot and brain-burning content. Whimsical. It's scary when you think about it.