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I have read a book similar to this one, and I guess the author has also read it. Unfortunately, that book is over 500,000 words long. I like the content of this book. The protagonist has normal views and the content is quite interesting. I hope the author can write up to 1 million words. Also, update quickly and update more often. [Laughs][laughs]

The part about the magical world is pretty good, but it's a pity that the plug-in and the title of the book are wrong, and the chat group part is not well coordinated. I wanted to see the collision between the magical world and the world of chat groups. I had severe difficulty in immersing myself in it. I always wanted to jump to the chapter to see the content of the chat group. In the end, there was very little except at the beginning. This kind of poor balance will lose some people who came in because of the subject matter.

Come on, just two sheets are enough to read, two sheets a day A handsome young man in a black python robe knelt beside the bed, his eyes filled with red bloodshot eyes, and his slender hands tremblingly touched the cheek of the girl on the bed. "Sister, sister, can you open your eyes and look for me?" The girl's breath was weak and her face was pale. After all, she couldn't answer the boy. "Sister, I know you can still wake up, right?" The boy rubbed his head against her neck. "It's what those quack doctors said that made you angry, isn't it?" The boy stood up and said, "I "How about you fuck them off? My sister is just asleep. If I fuck them, my sister won't be angry, okay?" The boy turned around and left, muttering in a low voice, "Sister doesn't like my sex." After half a cup of tea, the boy came back. "Sister, I didn't do sex. They did it themselves. My sister can't be angry with me." The boy lay beside her, hugged the girl weakly, and slowly closed his eyes. "Sister, can you update a few more chapters..."

The early plot is okay, but the extraordinary systems of other worlds are too naturally compatible. Just keep reading, maybe the author will stop writing one day.

Tsk, so where can I update the author in the future? I just want to change an APP. My phone keeps saying that I have insufficient memory. The first one on the list is Tomato, which has more than eight gigabytes. You must know that my old phone only has sixty-four gigabytes [face covering]

The writing is good, but the presence of the chat group is too low. Except for the two times when the protagonist puts the bait when it is activated and when the fish takes the bait after a while, it does not appear. The protagonist is also in a very troubled time, with a storm coming, and as a result, the protagonist is not qualified to join the game and can only teach and educate people. In summary, the protagonist is moving forward in the education career of cultivating the next generation and retaining the fire in the golden finger-chat group with a low sense of existence and an extremely dangerous environment.

Come on, come on, come on

Wherever the author plans to open a book, I will follow him

It's pretty good, but the chat group doesn't have much presence.

There have been no reviews on Ben Omelet Rice before. I am really remiss. This is my first Omelet Rice book and it is also the most unforgettable book for me. I don't know what to say. It's so good... And it's really a pity. Come on!

It's a pity that this is another novel that has been banned by the platform. Sure enough, this place is not suitable for original creation...

I think the author can ignore those people who are shouting. You explain to them that they are still competing with you, so there is no need. Just read the novel to have fun. The novel is inherently illusory and not reality. Those people are desperate to bring reality into the novel to teach them. This approach is no different from making fun of them, so there is no need to pay attention to them.

Alas, the author's writing is quite good. It's a pity. Where will he publish a new book? I'll give you a thumbs up when the time comes.

Where will the author go to write a book? Remember to mention the book title and software.

The writing is very good, there is nothing wrong with it. Will the author continue to update it on other novel websites?

Very good author of Come on [Like]

Author, I hope your future career will be smooth sailing. . .

The author is great, what a pity Is there no direct contact person for signing the contract now? If you have any questions, you can contact me directly, not call customer service

It's very nice, but it's a pity that it was targeted by customer service.

The world view is not big, but it is very grand. The male protagonist is also very good. It is really good.

Okay, not too brainless and not too dark

A very down-to-earth book.

The last support

Let's start the fight. The chat group's presence is not high.

Damn it, damn it, damn it! I just think he writes well. But it was sacrificed.

A very good novel about a mage from another world

The subject matter is my favorite type, so good luck to the author.

Very good, thank you to the author, these are not enough [laughing]

Looks good, but a little missing

Love it, love it, keep working hard