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As usual, Zhongli will strengthen.

I've been following it since the last one, it's very well written.

From the previous book, please come on author. There must be a more complete ending this time. ฅ( ̳• ◡ • ̳)ฅ

"In this world, demons and gods are rising together. Although I have no intention of competing, I know the suffering of the people. I just want to clean up the four directions and protect a corner of the floating world." (I like to make up the number of words for this sentence.) So far, it looks pretty good. I don't know much about these two games, so I won't talk about it. In other aspects, first of all, various events are a bit messy, some content advances too fast, the plot connection is not very good, and some foreshadowing is too abrupt (it may also be because I don't understand the game) I took a look at the timeline you wrote in the comment area. The game itself has not yet written out this part of the content, so it is understandable that your writing is messy. Regarding the issue of chaos, I suggest that you use the fishbone method to sort out the major events that have been announced by the official known timeline and briefly list the various branch lines. This will help you organize your thoughts a little bit and generally won't be too messy, but it will be more time-consuming. Because it is a fan fiction, if the writing style is appropriate, you can try to innovate and there is no need to copy it mechanically. There will inevitably be some flaws. It is very important that the power system is reasonable. If it is not clear, it will be very uncomfortable when it is strong and weak, and it will make people unable to read (it will be very frustrating or very exciting. What happens next? If the combat power collapses, you can refer to what Long San wrote later). It is important that the power system is enough for the next plot, but it is not enough. This is not for the protagonist, but also for other characters. I think the sense of satisfaction should be based on reasonableness rather than the Supreme God being knocked unconscious by a time traveler with a brick and then having all his equipment stripped. Finally, there is the character design. Regarding the characters with high appearance rate, the settings can be comprehensive as long as they can be comprehensive, and the details can be as detailed as possible. Only through deep understanding and even sublimation can we get out of the original limitations. Of course, this requires a lot from the author. If I can write it, it will be very powerful. If I can't, it's okay, as long as I don't ruin the character. In fact, judging from the content alone, I don't think it's particularly good, but it's already rare in today's environment. It all depends on the support of peers. The current environment is really not as bad as it used to be in "Fights Break the Sphere", "Perfect World", "Shading the Sky" and "Fighting X Continent". Don't worry about the last one I crossed out to make up the word count. Nowadays, I blindly pursue the feeling of pleasure. After watching too much, I don't even know which galaxy I am in. Even my aesthetic sense has declined a lot. And... Well, I'm too lazy to type, I'm exhausted. Finally, I hope that the author can create better in the future and polish the work to present it to everyone. Five-star praise is an encouragement. Come on [like]

I caught up with this new book from another book by the author. It's great. Cheers, author!

It's beautiful, it's really nice, and it's really well written. Coming from the last book, the ending was a little rushed. I hope this one can be written more completely. And the character design about Zhongli is not very biased, the writing is also very good, and it is very consistent with the character. The other five people are also Jing Yuanyuan, who is too cute. Although I am the Yingxing of the blade (and Zhongli of course) before becoming the blade, I am still a bit crazy. Haha, I love an honest person who is a bit crazy. Sure enough, Zhongli is always a dad wherever he goes. It's so funny. You are a dad in the true sense of the word. Stop saying that raising a baby is your destiny, Zhongli! Yeah, yeah, daddy Zhongli, I am your child who is living outside, take me back quickly, woo woo woo (＞＜) (Write well. Although I rarely comment, I will always accompany you and the rewards will not be less. Don't worry (≧∇≦) [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

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Come on, author! Don't cut it! ! ! It's not easy to read a good book [crying]

From another Zhongli

Don't be like the last one

This is the second novel by Genshin Zhongli that we have read in its entirety. It's really great. The first one was by the same author, but it ended very suddenly. I feel a bit regretful. I hope this one will continue to be better. Support it.

Coming from the previous book, I think this one is pretty good too.

Very good, come on! I support you! ! From my current point of view, Zhongli's character is not OOC, and the other characters' images are also pretty good. You must continue writing. [Sending Hearts] [Blowing Kisses] [Blowing Kisses]

Come on, author, go for it!

It used to be pretty good before

Looking good as always.

The author's books are as beautiful as ever. I followed your last book Zhongli [shy]

The author is awesome as always

I like this book very much

Good looking (♥∀♥) Come on, come on (≧▽≦)

Wc this book is really nice I just wanted to say that it was not easy to find a book as good as the one about Zhongli Leaving the Railway. But the author is actually the same_(:з∠)_? Ah, I thought the new book was from another anime

Author, I really like your writing about Zhongli! I have seen many fanfics about Zhongli, but I think what you wrote is the best in my opinion.

I caught up from another article [Blowing Kisses] The author wrote very well! ! ! I am looking forward to the follow-up (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧Hope not to be (⋟⋞) I like Yun Shang Wu Xiao very much and hope they all have a good ending! I don't know if the author will continue to introduce other people in Teyvat. I regret that I didn't see the follow-up plot of Wendy in the previous article. I wonder if there is a chance to see new encounters here [Sending Hearts] Catch up on the latest! Thanks to the hard-working author [Sending my heart to you] 1.6 The rhythm is great! The emperor's temperament is really suitable for Xianzhou(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧If he is here, the future Yunshang Wuxiao will not fall apart, right?

Awesome, awesome, awesome

I hope Zhongli can become the Star God

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Well written and beautiful, I love reading it

I don't know if anyone else will show up in the future.

Thinking about it, I haven't read the last one, but this one feels much better than the last one?

The writing is very good, I must keep writing [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] The character restoration is very good and the plot is very smooth. Come on