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Very interesting! From another one! The quality is quite positive, so I'll evaluate it after reading a few chapters. The setting is very much like a role reversal. If the world is not upside down, it may be the if world where Anlianna survives. I even suspect that someone died in the quarrel, and it may be Grindelwald, which allowed Dumbledore to develop extreme ideas of abolishing the law of confidentiality. Riddle became the principal before he could apply for the professor position. The tone feels smoother than the previous book, and the growth period is in the memories. The configuration of the third generation of Dark Lord at the beginning is much more difficult, and the overall situation is as dark and lightless as the underground... In short, there will definitely be no shortage of benefits and death line racing. This is to expand the path of Obscurus magic.

①The theme is novel and the world view is represented by witch hunting! Modern witch hunt, very beautiful! When I saw the introduction, I thought it was a Hogwarts professor or something interchangeable with a Death Eater. After reading it, it was indeed the case, but it was not the case. ②The character design is not broken, especially the character design of Voldemort, which is also very praiseworthy! Although it doesn't have the evil feel of the original work, it fits the setting of this book very well. So does Draco ③At the beginning, it was based on the original Hogwarts, and then moved to the new Hogwarts, where Dumbledore is the principal. In an alternative way, the protagonist is treated as a savior, but not like a savior, because the protagonist is only for himself. ④The disadvantage is that the name of the protagonist is the same as the name of the previous high-scoring book. When I imagine the appearance of the protagonist, I always imagine the high-scoring book. But it doesn't matter if I read it for a long time. However, I still hope that the author will not keep using the same name next time he writes a fanfic. Overall, I'm looking forward to the author's debut, and the subsequent plot development is very interesting, and I highly recommend it!

Inheriting some settings from the previous book, it's a different Hogwarts. At the beginning, Voldemort becomes the principal, Dumbledore becomes the villain, and Draco, who lost his parents, is no longer the domineering little dragon, but has become a taciturn avenger, the Uchiha Sasuke of the magical world. The protagonist and Voldemort are actually silent, and the setting is novel and eye-catching. Dumbledore actually secretly colluded with Tom Riddle. The situation was tense and undercurrent, and the wizards inside were suppressed and hostile by the Muggles. It was Tom Riddle who resisted all of this. The more you read, the more curious the story behind it becomes. The author's writing style is just right and makes people immersed in the situation. The tone of the whole book is heavy and heart-wrenching, but not too refreshing. As the protagonist, Teville Foley, who is only 12 years old, has considerable strength and wisdom. He survives in heart-wrenching dangers one after another and strives to protect the people around him. All in all, it is a very good book, ranking first among the Harry Potter fics I have read, and the writing is even better than the previous one, but for some reason the author just doesn't update it. Maybe it's because Kavinka is stubborn, and the author has a headache, so he simply updates another book, or maybe the book is really excellent and has been officially suppressed by Tomato, which makes the author dare to be angry but dare not speak out. A life that cannot be read to the end of this book is simply a failure. It is gray, lifeless, and painful. I beg for an update. I will wait painfully and look forward to it. Author, do you feel my true expectations?

The world view is so attractive, I would like to support it with five stars (after all, I came from the last HP book)

Come on, author, keep writing. There are too few articles about the conflicts between ordinary people and wizards, and there are many that I can't finish in the middle of writing. I hope the author can keep writing. There are too few now and it's difficult to evaluate, but the concept is innovative enough. I don't know how the protagonist's emotional line will be arranged later.

The characters are well-drawn, and the protagonist does not forget his original intention. From being biased at the beginning, to looking at it from the perspective of a "drama character", the author writes decently about what would happen if the two parties were swapped. There is no deliberate vilification or deterioration of the original protagonist. The author of the current protagonist also expresses his selfish desires and preferences, but Welfare does not harm others because of his minor selfish desires. He realistically expresses the thoughts of young people today and can be used as a positive guide for children in their growth. It is recommended to become a book in schools.

Unexpectedly, the author has released a new book, so I came to Kangkang immediately (｡▽｡) ρ The storyline is very novel, it is a different theme from the HP series I have read in the past, and the various settings are also very fascinating! I hope to continue to do more [love][love]

It continues the name of the author's previous book, the characters continue to be cute, and the world view is one of the decisions that made me give it a five-star rating. Before the confrontation between Dumbledore and Voldemort, the wizarding world was discovered by Muggles. Faced with a large number of Muggles and weapons, Dumbledore and Voldemort chose to cooperate with each other. Dun Duoduo led a part of the peace faction, and the mixed blood merged with the Muggle world Voldemort leads the children of pure-blood families to inherit magic and prepare for counterattack Under the influence of this world view, two different waves of children appeared, and the two people in high positions made bad jokes about each other and tried to cooperate with each other, because the ultimate goal was to protect the magic world. This book continues part of the worldview of the previous book. What would the world have been like if Professor Foley had not appeared? This book gives part of the answer. The author's last book has been completed. In my opinion, it is a work with no flaws. This book can clearly see the author's progress, so I am very optimistic about this book. I hope my wife can keep updating it every day. Come on!

It is a very novel setting, and some people may not accept it at first. However, given the rapid development of human science and technology in the book, it is understandable that Dumbledore chose to integrate with the Muggles to create detectors and weapons for wizards in ten years. To erase the memory of a scientist, there is no telling when scientists will discover traces of magic again. Instead of being passive and conservative, and being caught off guard by the secret development of humans, it is better to actively expose it. Some people think this is not Dumbledore, but Grindelwald, but here Dumbledore's starting point is to protect more wizards. In another Harry Potter fanfic by the author, the Secrecy Law has also been abolished, but under the leadership of the third generation of Dark Lords and the first White Wizard, the initiative lies in the hands of wizards, but in this book, the initiative comes to humans. I just don't know if the author will come back and finish this book, ugh [cry][cry][cry] [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Why was the update discontinued? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, Zad made me cry to death when I saw the update was discontinued. My heart became even colder when I saw the update was discontinued.

Harry Potter written in big letters like boiling water looks great! Tver 360° kissing without blind spots!

A very novel angle, feels like another side of the previous book? Or is it another future for the wizarding world? It's a bit sad, but in a sense it's an anti-war themed article, haha, which is pretty good.

In fact, I am very curious, how will this book develop later? There is no absolute good or bad in war, winning is better than losing. It's just a matter of time. I don't know what Boishui will decide in the end, whether wizards can cast spells freely or wizards are completely dominated, or whether it will end with a peaceful coexistence similar to the ending of Boiled Water's first book. [Thinking] But at the moment, the last one seems unlikely. My personal feeling is that it should be similar to the first one. Eg Tver is powerful enough to change the fate of wizards and follow the path of Grindelwald or lead the wizarding world back to the mysterious curtain and draw the curtain of war. Or, like the ending of Fantastic Beasts Part 2, he invents a powerful magic to forcibly modify the memory of all the British or make all the British forget this period. (It doesn't feel very realistic, after all, the speed of information circulation at that time should still be quite fast). This is not the most important thing╮(¯▽¯)╭The most important thing is ๑◡๑Little Tete's attitude towards Deng Duoduo. But at present, it seems to be a mixed bag of good and bad. I just don't know if I will face each other later_(:з∠)_ Looking forward to looking forward to it (◍°∇°◍)ﾉﾞ/waiting for the boiling water updateฅ(̳•w•̳)ฅ[send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

Author, I really beg you, please stop updating that Hong Kong TV series and no one is reading it. I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really want to read this book😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Welfare professor in the parallel world, looking forward to it

It is a very novel experience, a different world of Hogwarts. It's a pity that I only got into Harry Potter this year (no one really understands it until 4202, no, no, no, no), but I am really lucky to see such wonderful imagination and writing by the author, and it is also a pity that I missed the opportunity to support the author while he was still updating. I rushed here immediately after reading the last book (although it seems to be too late now), but I am still very grateful to the author for bringing me another vivid and real perspective. This is my first long review (should it count?), Dedicated to the author, thank you very much! Remember this time.

With the support of the previous book, the author's book is always good-looking, and the plot is compact and logical. The current book is a new plot that breaks out of the original outline, and it is also very good. I give it 5 stars!

Why was the update discontinued😡🥹😭I was wiping my tears and found out that there was no update for half a year😭😭😭

The tone at the beginning was quite sad. The Order of the Phoenix became a weapon used by Muggles to deal with pure-blood wizards, but who knows if Muggles will deal with them next. Many people left in order to protect the glory of pure-blood wizards (the reason why this old man supports pure-blood theory is probably because mixed-bloods and Muggles are not the same as pure-bloods, and wizards related to Muggles will eventually betray their identity as wizards). The changes of the times cannot tolerate pure-bloods. The result of not fighting is destruction, and everyone is forced to grow up. The author's background is very clear, and he has already joined the protagonist lineup.

It's good-looking and connotative, the plot is compact, rich and thoughtful, the characters are well-developed, and the writing is good and humorous. I really don't understand why the rating is so low. I fell in love with the last one, which got a 9.0+. I don't understand why this one is so low.

It's very beautiful and brings us another magical world. Author, you haven't updated for a long time. They all went to get another book. Please update the author (screaming) (twisting) (crawling darkly) (crawling) (twisting) (crawling darkly) (twisting) (convulsing (barking) (crawling and jumping) (head tilting) (sitting still) (slowly retreating) (crawling) (quickly bending) (twisting and folding) (returning to the original scream) (crawling again) (pacing) (slowly turning back) (sneaking softly)

Is there more to be updated? The author is great, it's really heartbreaking to cut such a good book [crying]

Different HP, Voldemort in perfect condition, and more written from a political perspective. I hope I can write more about the character's intelligence from the side. A book with a very new perspective

How can I put it this way? The idea is great and the writing is good, but I feel like the protagonist is out of touch with the story. And the most important point: it's not enough to watch at all, hurry up and get more [crying]

Similar to "In This Hogwarts Without a Savior", it is a very subtle deduction if line. To be honest, I am tired of watching the student literature professor's novels that follow the main line of the original work. This type of deduction with a good plot and characters consistent with the original work has won my heart now! Super pretty!

Background guess: I think Deringewo must be dead. That's why Dumbledore could lead the white wizard to betray magic with love and peace. Magic that was not deterred by force was quickly defeated by technology Only wizards who Apparated as a last resort allowed Muggles to destroy their culture because of their animal nature and trust in Dumbledore. And now the entire wizard race is trying to deal with Dumbledore's hostage and attack the hilt of the wizard guerrillas.

The uncharacteristically magical world, the conflict between Muggles and wizards, and Turville Welfare. It feels like a good work, but why is the rating so low? Boss, I beg you to update it.

This is from the last book, so cheers for the author.

It's very beautiful, but can you update it quickly [I'm about to cry] [Cry] You don't know how to be a eunuch [Cry] [Cry]

I'm looking forward to the author's ability to complete this world line. I'm looking forward to how Tver will grow and become in this context. How does he view the world?

What a great idea! I'm a little curious about what kind of chaos they would be in if they met the original characters... Lol