Pattern of Ipsi

Hi, this is the author I believe you already know some of the characteristics of our protagonist "Lord" and I really care about your opinions. Is it getting better? Or behave badly? I'm here to ask for your suggestions to add some plot points that the audience needs. This book is my new work (but I have been thinking about it for a long time). It has a lot of outlines and materials, and I will sort them out into a suitable plot. It also has a lot of imagination and transitional stages (ps. If you have any problems with the look and feel, please raise them. I may not necessarily correct them : p)

The writing style feels like the author does not look like a novice, because the foreshadowing is done well, and the protagonist looks very confused, but that is just the appearance, and now we can only see the player side, but not the human side, so in general this book has great potential, but this book is not suitable for most readers with little experience. This kind of book can only be understood by readers who have read many kinds of books, or have the patience to read it. I think this book is actually more suitable for a paper set, which can only be understood by reading from beginning to end.

Personally, I think it's worth reading. The protagonist's psychology is that every action depends on his mood. Chaos Evil is indeed played as a game, but it also promotes the main plot. Don't go into too much detail when reading this book. The main focus is to watch the protagonist's cool actions first-hand. Protagonist: This is what we players are like [laughing]

Well, first of all, as for this novel, my personal summary is that it is very good. But for new readers, their first impression of the novel may be the word "chaotic". To be honest, I didn't understand it until now. The first is the chaos in the main line. Because this thing seems to have no main plot. As for the protagonist, he fully displays his identity as a player and the first natural disaster. Don't care about anything, everything is for yourself. If you are happy, the world will be at peace; if you are angry, the world will be destroyed. Well, the various foreshadowings in this novel are quite good. But overall, I feel there are two small shortcomings. One is that sometimes you can't tell who is talking when reading or listening to a book. The other thing is that it is not enough to watch, not enough to watch at all. I hope the author can add more. After all, it's really not enough. Although it feels like writing this requires a lot of brain cells. But I still hope the author can write more. Come on! The author is great. Close

I was almost fooled by the cover. I thought it was some kind of completed literary work. Let me see what's going on?

Okay, so far there are no bad points. The protagonist has been traveling with the mentality of playing games without missing the human form. The language used to describe some scenes is also gorgeous. The author is also very leisurely and loves to browse the comment area (

This score is a bit strange. . . After reading the comments, I feel that if the author had said nothing, the rating might have been one point higher, or even more. . . I didn't read the comments, I just read them. If it were treated as an ordinary toilet paper isekai, or a game, then this work would not work at all. It's all about a story. The more seriously you watch it and the more you like the current plot, the more you will be stopped. Whether you are interested in CP or like a certain setting, you will be ruthlessly told that the thing you like is a fake piece of paper, not even a piece of paper. However, if you are like me and have read it in one go, even if it is just the first chapter (now part of the second chapter has been updated), think about it for yourself. At least I regard it as a work of deconstruction and nihilism set in a different world in the game, so this thing can even be called a masterpiece. . . The only bad thing is that this thing cannot be read as a story, and everyone comes to Tomato to read books as a story. I had guessed before that the author most likely thought about the beginning or the ending, wrote a few paragraphs of background, and set up the characters, but the overall story did not have a framework. Being able to write about this flavor is largely accidental. After reading it, this is probably true from the comments. . . Is the author more inclined to update the second book? Although the core is nihilistic deconstruction. . . But I guess no matter how you end it, you have to return to reality. Since the author needs to attract real readers, there needs to be some chapter where the author leaves a message. . . Then the author can make some changes, for example, these illusory characters actually correspond to real characters. Part of this MOD stand-alone game is actually online, and some gods and characters in it are real people. Although the entire story and the entire game are deconstructed by nothingness (because the values ​​can be changed), the end of the story says that all the efforts are not in vain. . . For example, the one in the old capital, the reporter, is actually broadcasting live to the public, and then at the beginning of the first chapter, and at the end of the first chapter, it is mentioned a little bit, but it is okay not to mention it, but it is a bit abrupt, but it doesn't matter. . . Works that deconstruct nothingness are good, but almost no one likes works that work hard but have no results, although I really don't think the protagonist can do anything if he works hard from the beginning of the story. . . It doesn't matter. Isn't this thing added later? The Tao Weird Fairy finally saved the world.

Don't stop. It looks like it's going to end no matter how you look at it? I have been happy, I am kind to everything and full of malice to everything, because I am a brave man

This is the most player-like protagonist I have ever seen

There are really few novels like this that dare to describe the protagonist as a person. Others are all placed in another world to show off or just cheating in place to show off. The writing is a bit messy, but it suits the players very well.

I can only see a little shadow of the plot line, and I can't find the protagonist's purpose. I'll still have a look. If I can't connect the protagonist's actions, then the novel will come to an end, and there should be holes to fill in later. The novel has a large worldview, but there are no chapters dedicated to sorting out the worldview. As far as the protagonist's "system" is concerned, there is no explanation why it cannot be used at the beginning but can be used later. That is the clichéd game hero. It is said that behind the brave man's arrogant mask is his unwillingness and sorrow for the world.

I can't seem to find any articles on Tomato that tell stories in such a serious way... I feel that the world view has not been fully developed yet (I have read Chapter 31 so far), but the setting and the character of the protagonist are very interesting, but I heard that the update was interrupted once? The ratings and popularity are not very high. I can only hope that such a good article can be finished. I hope the author can persevere.

There is a very relaxed and happy feeling

This plot is quite interesting. I hope it won't be discontinued. I'll at least write it to 60 chapters. Many good works are discontinued before reaching 40 chapters. ()

Generally speaking, you still need to pass the first week normally.

I was drawn in when I saw the name and cover. I hooked it up with the introduction and experienced it. It tastes authentic, has a traditional feel, but is also novel and beautiful. If someone wants to write a similar novel, I would recommend him to follow this example.

#Query the author's mental state It seems that after watching "The Strange Fairy" again (I stopped watching it after reading dozens of chapters), I finally felt a little resistant to seeing this kind of insane protagonist again. Interesting but cold world, rich and even thought-provoking stories, mortals who keep coming back, and the twists and turns of the disconnected foreshadowing. An interesting book, but after reading the first volume, I think I need to take a good rest. I remember that I came to Tomato to read cool articles...

Radio series, stream of consciousness, unexpectedly good-looking. Although the previous behavior was very naive, later I thought about my performance in some RPG games and it seemed that they were pretty much the same (eyes moved). I even found that changing the text was not useful, so I learned to change the code (

Although the protagonist looks crazy on the surface, I personally think he is very sane. The protagonist knows that this world is just God's toy box, and it is normal for players to do whatever they want in the open game world.

Very good book.

The writing is quite good, but the behavior of the protagonist is too severe. I can understand that he can't cheat in the front and is crushed in various ways. In the back, he is a mod and a cheater, but he is still suppressed all the time. If he is a Buddhist player, that's it. But the protagonist behaves lawlessly. I don't quite understand what the author means.

I like this book very much. It feels like I am playing a big open world game. I really like it. I tried the same thing in another game. I was so slathered that I felt dizzy. This is the first time I have seen a novel with this theme. I like it very much. Please keep writing, author.

This secondary setting makes me want to stop [laughing] It feels very strange, as if I am also playing the game, unlocking different background settings through backtracking and going crazy like the protagonist, digging out secrets, the hook is big enough, the villain is strong enough, and the protagonist is really arrogant like a player, which is very enjoyable to watch.

The book is good, but not suitable for most people. Don't step on me, I love reading it.

The content is messy, but there is still something interesting to watch. The protagonist's state is close to a kind of gnostic nihilism. He does not consider himself a person in this world, and does not consider all existences in other worlds to be the same beings as himself, so he does whatever he wants. There are some changes at present, maybe there will be a turn for the better.

The design of this sword is indeed very unique, exactly as you describe it. The hilt of the sword is a sharp prismatic shape, and the grip part is an undulating round corrugated shape. The sword pattern is in the shape of "". The sword body is like a hollow cross, with four blades protruding from the bottom, with the sword tip pointing inward and the blade facing outward, as if two long swords crossed in an "X" shape in the middle. The flat part extending from the bottom of the sword blade forms an impressive handguard, and the wrapped strip of cloth is filled with sacred platinum runes, full of a mysterious atmosphere. I'm curious about what kind of weapon it is, but I can't imagine the author.

It's interesting, but I feel like the protagonist's character is a little bit weird, a little bitch? Suitable for breaking defense and hitting the ground in the mid-term. I want to watch it.

I like this kind of epileptic feeling [face covering]

This book is wonderful. It is the first time I have seen the character and behavior of the main character.

Look! The male protagonist has an absolute gamer mentality, pure fourth natural disaster, there is no sloppiness, he can kill if he wants, he can play if he wants, it's fun to watch