From the Start as a Mountain Bandit: I Challenge the Grandmaster to a Fight to the Death

This book is a bit stiff, I think so. After the first 20,000 words, I was ready to stand alone. Just train yourself. Those who read the book may scold lightly, but if they can't stand it, raise their little hands and look for someone else. Give yourself three hearts to encourage you. 🤔🤔🤔🤔 There is a feeling that the clouds and mist can be pushed aside to see the blue sky, but it cannot be pushed away. If there are any great readers who have any suggestions, you can give them some guidance. As long as you don't curse.

If you can't write a big scene, don't bite the bullet and write it. It's been laying the groundwork for so long, and that's it??? It's so embarrassing to watch🤦

There's nothing core about it. I've written so much that I don't know what I'm talking about. I don't recommend reading it.

. . . Jiwai for most of the day. . . . .

Come on come on!

This book is okay! Give it 5 stars to encourage you

Okay, okay, looks okay

It's so poisonous at the beginning that people can't bear to watch it. My brother becomes a villain for me, and I kill my brother to prove the holy way. These three views are absolutely explosive at the beginning.

How about we change the book and start again. . . .

The more I write, the more chaotic it becomes, and the characters are stiff and cannot stand up at all.