Terra? Holy Terra!

The first few pictures are nice. The cool thing is the strength of Terra International in this article. The unpleasant part lies in the 14-year-old character of the protagonist and his inexplicable affection for Kelsey. It doesn't matter to me whether the ingredients are mixed or not. The author said that the first 100 chapters have not yet touched the main plot, but I think his development of forces, contact with Rhodes Island and the journey to Chernobog can be considered the main plot. But in it, there is too little description of Terra International, and there are too many stations on Rhode Island. It always feels a bit too frustrating. I always have to rely on Luo's power, and it doesn't matter if I borrow it. But the perspective is on Rhode Island, and it seems that Rhode Island is the protagonist, which is a bit poisonous. The second thing is the character of the protagonist, especially the description of the protagonist's character when he gets along with Kelsey a little earlier in the Chernobog plot. Treating him as a mother (?) Always made me feel extremely embarrassed, so I skipped it directly. To sum up, there isn't much fun at the beginning, which makes it hard for me to continue watching. But after all, it is a free work and the requirements are not high. I give four stars as an encouragement.

He is a very good stitcher, and even when he sewed, I knew he would be a little unbearable. But that doesn't stop it from being a good book, and the sewing is good.

My evaluation is that it doesn't go into too many details. It's just a different and enjoyable novel. It's a very good novel that consumes boring time. The introduction is a bit too complicated, the main plot is slow to advance, and it also tends to follow the traditional Rhode Island plot. Of course, writing this way will not be so easy to collapse. After all, the writing skills of novel writers are limited, so I don't have much pursuit, so I may read more openly.

After reading it for a while, I feel pretty good. By the way, is there a female protagonist, a single girl or a harem [Thinking][Thinking]

This is a very promising book, I hope the author can finish it.

After seeing Chapter 57, the 19-year-old swordsman Ta Ke said it was very good. It satisfied my fantasy of time travel, but it was too little.

I give you a five-star review because the plot is indeed very interesting, but it has become different from my original intention of reading this book. The five stars are completely worth it. I read it because of my own reasons. This book is indeed very interesting.

A fanfic with great potential, good luck to the author

What the author wrote can be [given my heart], tell me honestly, how many games have you played? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

There is no shortage of innovation in this world, and you, my friend, have gone a little too far.

:) It's a very good fanfic. Although it has a lot of elements, it's all well done.

Let's raise it for a month first. Not satisfying.

It's very interesting. Kudos to the author.

After reading this book, you will discover the ultimate mystery of the world! This world - is the living grass of the world!

She really has great potential, and the plot is also very interesting. Who doesn't love the white-haired young lady? [Adoration][Adoration]

Author author, I drew Lin Yuxia seven times

The book is very interesting, especially for me with such complex compositions. Good health

There are really many ingredients

Well, I don't think there will be any problem if I sew a little more.

Please rate! Have pity on the author

Very interesting, good luck to the author!

Complex ingredients, but fun

It's really well written, really good

Not bad, good looking.

Really pretty

Extremely complex ingredients? Indeed, the problem is that I am too. Love comes from ()

This very good novel made my left hand rotate at an angle of 45 degrees unconsciously.

Very good book! All newcomers must read it! A rare good book from Ark(*¯¯*)

The writing is very good, the content is understandable, and there are no major problems. I'll give it five points.

Come on, the future is promising