Shooting the Condor at the Beginning, the Descendant of Dongxie

I finally came across a martial arts novel with Li Mochou as the heroine, which is not systematic yet. No matter how the writing is, it must be five stars! It would be better if there was a single female protagonist! ! !

Not bad, hope the author keeps up the good work! I hope that in the future, the protagonist will not have an affair, have a harem, or become a stud!

The plot is still very good, it doesn't deviate too much from the original work, and it also has its own extension, but the update pace is too slow. I guess old bookworms don't have the patience to read one or two chapters a day, so go for it! I just realized that I was the first comment. I shouldn't. The aroma of wine is not afraid of the depth of the alley. Big cheers for the author [Like] [Like] [Like]

Well written. But you must not be a eunuch and update quickly. 4 Updates a day,

Advantages: It does not deviate from the overall direction of the original work, and sets its own path for the protagonist. It also fully considers the readers' enjoyment, and does not blindly cheat, causing the overall direction to deviate from the author's ability. This is worthy of affirmation. Disadvantages: In some places, modern Internet terms or expressions that are not in line with the background of the times are used in some places. Although it will increase the interest of the content, it will also feel like jumping out of the drama. Suggestion: hold on tight, don't collapse!

It's beautiful. I haven't seen such high-quality writing in a long time.

A very good fanfic. No harem, no intrusion.

This is the first time I feel like a lively fanfic. The characters are all very lively. Except for the language being a bit out of place, it's still very good! Great support!

After reading it, I jumped to read it. It feels okay. Everyone has their own legend of the Condor Heroes. The author wrote his own biography of the Condor Heroes. It's good to give Li Mochou and others a happy ending

It seems to be very good so far. The story revolves around the protagonist, but not all of them. Each character has distinct characteristics and the story line is also very good. Li Mochou was indeed not a murderous devil at the beginning. She just ran out because she didn't like being in the ancient tomb. As long as she is a normal person, she will not like to stay in the ancient tomb. So, Mr. Zhenzhi, work hard and don't brag. I haven't had a favorite book for a long time.

This is the most interesting novel by Jin Yong that I have read so far. Although I haven't finished it yet, I feel that this is not a novel about all worlds, but a proper martial arts novel. The dialogue is funny and so exciting!

After reading it, I feel pretty good. Why is the score so low? Except for the protagonist's inexplicable patriotic behavior, which looks a bit like Murong Fu, there is nothing wrong with anything else.

The single female protagonist Li Mochou is quite good, and the likes of Yang Kang, Yang Tiexin, and the disciples of Peach Blossom Island all have better endings. Moreover, the author created many original characters and the storyline is quite interesting and has a certain twist.

First of all, I really like the choice of the protagonist's origin, and it makes up for a lot of regrets I had when reading the original work. The happy ending makes up for a lot of my regrets. From my point of view, this book deserves five stars! Although sometimes I feel that the protagonist is too arrogant, in Jin Yong's world, can one still be called a martial artist if he has strength but is not arrogant?

Tianlong base, Jin Yong's martial arts archaeological expert! Connect many clues together and have a clear idea. Excellent! One shortcoming is that in the latter part, Zayu Zaxia's martial arts progress too fast, and anyone with a name can be innate. Let's take a good look at the logical structure of martial arts.

Overall, it's pretty good. The storyline is reasonable. The main ending is quite satisfactory. I really think Yang Kang is a good character. If there is a good guide, it won't be like the one in the TV series. I like to watch it.

Not bad, the plot and characters are okay, but the characterization of the heroine Li Mochou is not enough and is a bit shallow. In the choice of words and sentences and the use of sentences, it can be seen that there is some lack of writing power. The plot in the middle and late stages is a bit bland, and it is a pity to abandon it as tasteless. But overall, I still recommend watching it.

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It's okay, I can read it, I can't say it's good, it's just three stars, but the author has barely changed Jin Yong's demon a little bit, and added a star. It's not easy for the author to finish writing a martial arts book. Give me some motivation. The content of this book is that the main character is from Peach Blossom Island, and the Xiaoyao sect's inner martial arts disputes are all over the world.

After reading part of it, this novel has the feel of an old martial arts novel, and at the same time, it has the sense of humor of a new era novel. The name of the protagonist is a bit off-putting. It's not that you didn't write it well, and someone made this name very famous a long time ago.

The update is too slow, the number of words is too few, needs to be corrected, hahaha😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

The writing is very good. I give it five stars to encourage you. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's really exciting, the male protagonist can win the Fairy Chi Lian as soon as possible😘

It looks good, I hope I won't become an immortal in the future [eat melon]

I think it's pretty good, it has its flaws and the plot is passable.

Once you close it and then open it, it's 100,000 words, it's really beautiful [like] Four stars are really walking around in the five extremes, and they are not as good as dogs by nature. Samsung, do you understand the value of "Soldier Killing Machine"? There are a lot of awesome martial arts written in it, but when it comes to actual combat, the results are all minions, and even a named supporting character can't die. Emmmm, it's hard to judge.

Come on, author, a great book

It's quite interesting and worth recommending

Dear author, your work is really good! I like it very much. [Smile][smile][smile]

It's great that it has a single heroine, not a stud story. The early stages were good, but the ending was too sudden. You can watch it if you are bored but you cannot savor it.