God of War: Twelve-Winged Fallen Angels of Light and Darkness at the Beginning!

I feel it's better written than your last book, and it's already somewhat readable. I would like to give you some advice, that is, the protagonist can be more powerful. It's a bit long to foreshadow the protagonist's strength improvement. Then the emotional pull requires more contact. The basic framework can already be seen, which is very good. It's great to see your progress. By the way, when will the book "Buye Jiucang" be rewritten? The overall idea sounds good, don't give up. Come on, support you!

The subject matter of this article is relatively new, and it is recommended for newcomers to read. I also recommend people who like cool writing to come and read it. Anyway, I thought it was okay after watching it from beginning to end. Another point is that too few people read this book. Everyone is welcome to come and see

The author writes really well [shy][shy][shy]

I haven't read the previous one, but this one is really good. Generally, the spirit of books feels weak after reading this. I witnessed a young man's transformation from hatred to rebirth. Even though the world has changed, his original intention remains unchanged. I can feel that the protagonist's heart is gradually getting stronger. Looking forward to how the Bright Moon Bow will be laid out, and how to stir up trouble in the world of darkness. But inevitably, there are some problems with this book. The protagonist's design of the demon system and the demonized god are very carefully designed, but on the other hand, there are problems with the monsters. First of all, why is it called the ghost clan? Is it similar to the devil? There are elves in the ghost clan living in the dark world. Wouldn't it be awkward for dark elves to feel that way? The space system is controlled by a barrier, and there is no artifact to isolate it? Kong Emperor is stretching his hips a lot. The role of money has been eliminated, and tens of billions of assets are simply for fun? The treatment is top-notch, and the resources are either free or non-existent. It's really miserable for students, who don't get any material resources. If the sword holder hadn't had points, I really doubt that all those treasures would be of no use and would have to be confiscated. There are indeed minor issues upon closer inspection, but the overall plot is progressing step by step. For the time being, there is no such fake high-mindedness that is so mysterious and mysterious that one suddenly cannot understand it, and the vernacular readers are ecstatic.

The writing is pretty good, keep it up. The author's writing is really good, but there are too few updates. Please hurry up and write. The character of the protagonist and the various methods he uses, as well as the system, are all handled very well. He is not very dependent on the system and does not spend a lot of time describing the system. It can be said that the author's level is still very high. If possible, can you fast forward a little and go to the dark world to fight?

I don't agree with Shuangwen. I can only say that it's a little bit more fun to grow up. I feel like I don't see where Shuangwen is. The only way for the protagonist to get revenge is to die together. It would be better to unlock the angel and the devil later.

Why did you write Mu Qingyu to death?

No, why is it updated twice a day now? [Laughing awkwardly] I didn't make up for it before, but now it's even less. Brother, I'm really waiting online for you. I'm eager to watch it. [Awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

Maybe it was a bit frustrating at the beginning, but when I saw the update here in one breath, the protagonist was reborn from extinction, it was very good there, and then it returned to the same level as before.

Overall, it's okay and enjoyable to watch. However, the protagonist's level is a bit slow to improve. Others are in the third or fourth stage, but he still stays in the second stage.

It looks good and suits my taste. When will the author update? Such a little bit is not enough to watch [blowing kiss]

What can I say, not bad. The subject matter is okay, the setting and background are pretty good, but sometimes the plot is a bit cliche. Overall, it's good and quite enjoyable to watch, but not many people watch it. It's still good if you keep reading. I think it's understandable that the male protagonist was timid at first. Didn't you just die and go back to the past? So whose personality can change all of a sudden? Slow growth is inevitable. The character in the back is still a little different. There are some changes. Very recommended. Come on

Very novel, I like it very much, cool article!

I like this content and this novel

It's really fun to watch! There are just one or two bad points, but the world structure is good. The author must write it down! [Please update]

Nice book, okay in Tomato.

Gu Muyi's magical power Yang Guchu Royal God sword bearer

It's okay, I'll give you a salute for the birth of the king [sending my heart]

It's okay. Although the author's writing style is not particularly good, it can be read.

I've read more than 100 chapters and I think it's okay. The plot is quite novel. Come on

It's big, it looks good, please give me more, [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

Very good, looking forward to the follow-up

Come on, author, your writing is okay.

It's beautiful, why isn't it rated highly?

There is no distinction between male and female authors.

I've been chasing you for five months, can you please hurry up😭😭😭

It looks pretty good from the front, let's give it a five-star rating first. I read it in one day, it was really good

In fact, in my personal opinion, I feel that the relationship between the women around the male protagonist is a bit ambiguous. If there weren't so many girls, I think it would have been rated five stars. I think the appearance of the one with Qin Jiuye was particularly shocking. Also, I feel like many people inside like to spy on the male protagonist.

It's beautiful, very beautiful. Please keep updating. I hope it won't stop updating. Come on!

It's so exciting, I love this book. It's just that the updates are a bit sparse, I hope there will be more updates. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]