[Two male protagonists] [Sweet abuse] [Fate update]
Help, Master is a love brain
My name is Hu San, I have a sword master
I have a secret, actually I am one. . . Flying man outside the sky
I come from the twenty-first century and I know the fate of all of them.
Reader comments
It looks good. It has a feeling that it doesn't belong to a tomato. This kind of ordinary feeling with a touch of gentleness is really good-looking. Come on, author.
I really like this book by the author, so I went to various related topics to help the author recommend the book. I hope more people will see this treasure [Blow a kiss] I hope the author will continue to persevere.
Cheers for you! ! ! ! ! !
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This is a novel from a first-person perspective, so I had to pay attention to the details as soon as I started reading it. It is a relatively short novel, but not perfunctory. There is a feeling of being brought into the protagonist [full] [full] and following the protagonist's perspective [full] but. To him, his perspective is just that of a supporting character, the life of a supporting character who wants to get everything back, and a supporting character who wants to get back regrets.
It was like I had read a heart-wrenching novel before, and the story came to an end. As a third-dimensional person, I could not recover, and I finally had the opportunity to change everything with my own hands...
Because it is born, that is, I am born. This is why I have fantasized about it thousands of times every time I experience a (novel) world. I pick up my pen to reshape life, and I regret every time!
(Although the writing style of this novel is obviously very shallow, the author presents his thoughts and feelings to the world. This courage [crying] and the vitality of writing are the best evaluations given by beginners [like] [like])
It's so well written, I really have nothing to say. The narrative method is novel in Tomato, and the relationship between the two protagonists is not too long. There are not too many fancy plots, and the secondary characters are also very vivid. Tan Jing is really amazing, I highly recommend it.
The characters are quite likable, and it's good to watch before going to bed. The five people together are actually quite funny (bushi). It seemed a bit confusing at first, but it got better later on. I just wasn't used to reading first-person narration, but I'll get used to it after reading a few more chapters. The relationship between the young couple is still very sweet. I want to see a little bit of parental love, so can I make a special episode to talk about it? [Shy] I hope that Master Niang's disciple (definitely not because I can't remember the name) can also have a good ending.
The writing is okay, it makes me cry a little, it's more of a group portrait, and the characters are also very poignant [Adoration] The young couple is so sweet [Love] [Love] Let Gong grow up quickly [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]
Give the protagonist more drama, it's not enough [please give more updates][please give more updates]
Absolutely amazing. . . The plot of the story is super fascinating. I couldn't bear to put down my phone until I saw the finale. I stayed up all night to finish it [I almost cried]. The relationship between Hu San and Yan Xin is really interesting, and I am so excited to focus on one of them! Big cheers for the author! !
It's so interesting. Although it's not fat yet, it's very good-looking. I'm already looking forward to eating it. Hahaha [face covering]. The protagonist's emotional line is also very interesting, as is the deputy CP. But I'm very curious about the final ending of the apprentice of the master's wife (the original text seems to have a hint? But I like to watch it too fast and I don't pay attention). It's the second time to finish it.
I really like it, it's really good-looking, please give it a thumbs up, author!
It's just a little bit lacking. It's really painful for me to catch up on updates. It's dark and twisted [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]
It's very warm and everyone is a very nice person. It's rare to see a book on Tomato that suits my taste very well. Although there are sudden jumps in some places, sometimes it is a bit blurry, and it seems that there are still some things that have not been explained clearly. But overall I give it a five-point rating. The writing is very good, very to my liking, and the logic is reasonable. [Sending my heart to you]
This book contains many characters and many stories. Although not every one of them is impressive, this book still makes me miss it. I wait for the update every day. When I read the ending, I felt like I was separated from the perspective of that world. Although I feel that the emotional line of the protagonist is not as profound as Daochang's story, but I like every story here. I can't say that I am regretful, but more like I want to sigh for no reason. I like Hu San's character very much. He seems to be a slightly cold and powerful young man, but in fact he values love and righteousness and speaks a lot from his heart. He who has a sword has no heart, but Hu San has a "heart". The protagonist's emotional line is not that sadistic and quite sweet. I am looking forward to the author's new book.
It's very interesting. The setting of the natural swordsman in the book is very interesting (I won't go into details here for fear of spoilers, but the big setting is really novel! It's really amazing!), Very special! The more I watch San'er, the more I like it. I also like the grumpy old master! In short, you won't lose money by investing in shares!
It's so good-looking, super good-looking, I love Sanbao so much. I have a little guess (Uncle Shen has been reborn, and the same goes for Sanbao. This life is not his first time traveling. He has traveled through it before, but he doesn't remember it. Then the person who looks the same as Sanbao in the mirror he met in that secret realm is Sanbao's previous life...)
Anyway, that's it, I hope the author will update Modo Modo [][][]
Update it, update it, the author will update it soon (Devil Whispering)
Nice. . . The narrative method is very new. The only shortcoming is that there are too few, and the protagonists are not detailed enough🌚🌚🌚, hehehe, anyway, it is very interesting and the ending is very good (it's great, we are saved)
A really nice article! Starting from the first point of view, not only the supporting characters are flesh and blood in the eyes of the protagonist, but the protagonist himself is also a character that readers like very much! And! ! And the author is really good at writing about young lovers! Such a sweet couple makes me spin in circles (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*
A very nice article, the writing style is very unique! One chapter is not skipped, I like [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]
So pretty! Highly recommended! The author's writing is good, which is really rare in Tomato. I haven't seen such good writing for a long time, and the characters are all very good!
This is my first time reading a first-person article, but it's so interesting!
The first-person novel may be a bit confusing at first because there are many foreshadowings, but after reading it, you will feel that it is a very good novel. The emotions are very delicate. The worldview is also relatively complete. Micro group portrait. All in all, it is a rare and good book. Like👍
It's really beautiful. I wish Yan and Hu happiness forever, and I also wish everyone in the rain happiness.
Recently, I really like this kind of story that uses relatively plain brushstrokes to describe the ups and downs! ! ! Obviously many people have very few roles, but it gives people a sense of reality. Everyone is a full and independent individual, and everyone has their own pursuits. I like it! ! !
Author, you wrote this book beautifully. I was a little confused at first, but the more I read, the more I liked it. The first part really feels like a memoir. The story has ups and downs, but there is warmth among the protagonists and a group of people. I really like the reading experience that the whole book gave me [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] (≧▽≦)
It's pretty good, come on
The writing is very good and beautiful (*/∇＼*) [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It's just that I can't understand the first few paragraphs. It's confusing. Maybe I'm not used to the first person?
Although it's a bit confusing, I can keep reading. Each chapter is relatively short and can be used to pass the time.
So pretty! When will the author write another one like this? Kick me, kick me. I feel so disappointed after reading it😭😭😭
I really thought that the protagonist was a flying man from outside the world😈😈😈, but when I saw the back, it seemed that was not entirely the case ❤️❤️❤️. The author's writing is really beautiful👄👄👄, I love reading it🌹🌹🌹. 🤤🤤🤤 I still want to read it, the author must write more about Kouya, everyone must keep reading Kouya💪💪💪, it's a really beautiful duo😋😋😋. Second brush, it's really beautiful.
OMG, it's so beautiful, I'm repainting it again! Oh my god, the author is awesome Klass
A good book, I wish all of them peace and happiness in another world O(≧▽≦)O
It's so beautiful. I'm really looking forward to the torture.
Very interesting [like] very heartwarming. The beginning and end of the story of the two cats also complete this book. The news of Jiang Suixiao's death is like an end, so melancholy
There are too many regrets and too many explanations. In the end, I found out that the article "The Traveling Doctor of Giants" impressed me the most. Well…
It looks good. It has a feeling that it doesn't belong to a tomato. This kind of ordinary feeling with a touch of gentleness is really good-looking. Come on, author.
I really like this book by the author, so I went to various related topics to help the author recommend the book. I hope more people will see this treasure [Blow a kiss] I hope the author will continue to persevere. Cheers for you! ! ! ! ! ! ☆ * . ☆ . ∧＿∧ ∩* ☆ * ☆ ( ∀ )/ . . ⊂ ノ* ☆ ☆ * (つ ノ .☆ ( ノ
This is a novel from a first-person perspective, so I had to pay attention to the details as soon as I started reading it. It is a relatively short novel, but not perfunctory. There is a feeling of being brought into the protagonist [full] [full] and following the protagonist's perspective [full] but. To him, his perspective is just that of a supporting character, the life of a supporting character who wants to get everything back, and a supporting character who wants to get back regrets. It was like I had read a heart-wrenching novel before, and the story came to an end. As a third-dimensional person, I could not recover, and I finally had the opportunity to change everything with my own hands... Because it is born, that is, I am born. This is why I have fantasized about it thousands of times every time I experience a (novel) world. I pick up my pen to reshape life, and I regret every time! (Although the writing style of this novel is obviously very shallow, the author presents his thoughts and feelings to the world. This courage [crying] and the vitality of writing are the best evaluations given by beginners [like] [like])
It's so well written, I really have nothing to say. The narrative method is novel in Tomato, and the relationship between the two protagonists is not too long. There are not too many fancy plots, and the secondary characters are also very vivid. Tan Jing is really amazing, I highly recommend it.
The characters are quite likable, and it's good to watch before going to bed. The five people together are actually quite funny (bushi). It seemed a bit confusing at first, but it got better later on. I just wasn't used to reading first-person narration, but I'll get used to it after reading a few more chapters. The relationship between the young couple is still very sweet. I want to see a little bit of parental love, so can I make a special episode to talk about it? [Shy] I hope that Master Niang's disciple (definitely not because I can't remember the name) can also have a good ending.
The writing is okay, it makes me cry a little, it's more of a group portrait, and the characters are also very poignant [Adoration] The young couple is so sweet [Love] [Love] Let Gong grow up quickly [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] Give the protagonist more drama, it's not enough [please give more updates][please give more updates]
Absolutely amazing. . . The plot of the story is super fascinating. I couldn't bear to put down my phone until I saw the finale. I stayed up all night to finish it [I almost cried]. The relationship between Hu San and Yan Xin is really interesting, and I am so excited to focus on one of them! Big cheers for the author! !
It's so interesting. Although it's not fat yet, it's very good-looking. I'm already looking forward to eating it. Hahaha [face covering]. The protagonist's emotional line is also very interesting, as is the deputy CP. But I'm very curious about the final ending of the apprentice of the master's wife (the original text seems to have a hint? But I like to watch it too fast and I don't pay attention). It's the second time to finish it.
I really like it, it's really good-looking, please give it a thumbs up, author! It's just a little bit lacking. It's really painful for me to catch up on updates. It's dark and twisted [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]
It's very warm and everyone is a very nice person. It's rare to see a book on Tomato that suits my taste very well. Although there are sudden jumps in some places, sometimes it is a bit blurry, and it seems that there are still some things that have not been explained clearly. But overall I give it a five-point rating. The writing is very good, very to my liking, and the logic is reasonable. [Sending my heart to you]
This book contains many characters and many stories. Although not every one of them is impressive, this book still makes me miss it. I wait for the update every day. When I read the ending, I felt like I was separated from the perspective of that world. Although I feel that the emotional line of the protagonist is not as profound as Daochang's story, but I like every story here. I can't say that I am regretful, but more like I want to sigh for no reason. I like Hu San's character very much. He seems to be a slightly cold and powerful young man, but in fact he values love and righteousness and speaks a lot from his heart. He who has a sword has no heart, but Hu San has a "heart". The protagonist's emotional line is not that sadistic and quite sweet. I am looking forward to the author's new book.
It's very interesting. The setting of the natural swordsman in the book is very interesting (I won't go into details here for fear of spoilers, but the big setting is really novel! It's really amazing!), Very special! The more I watch San'er, the more I like it. I also like the grumpy old master! In short, you won't lose money by investing in shares!
It's so good-looking, super good-looking, I love Sanbao so much. I have a little guess (Uncle Shen has been reborn, and the same goes for Sanbao. This life is not his first time traveling. He has traveled through it before, but he doesn't remember it. Then the person who looks the same as Sanbao in the mirror he met in that secret realm is Sanbao's previous life...) Anyway, that's it, I hope the author will update Modo Modo [][][] Update it, update it, the author will update it soon (Devil Whispering)
Nice. . . The narrative method is very new. The only shortcoming is that there are too few, and the protagonists are not detailed enough🌚🌚🌚, hehehe, anyway, it is very interesting and the ending is very good (it's great, we are saved)
A really nice article! Starting from the first point of view, not only the supporting characters are flesh and blood in the eyes of the protagonist, but the protagonist himself is also a character that readers like very much! And! ! And the author is really good at writing about young lovers! Such a sweet couple makes me spin in circles (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*
A very nice article, the writing style is very unique! One chapter is not skipped, I like [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]
So pretty! Highly recommended! The author's writing is good, which is really rare in Tomato. I haven't seen such good writing for a long time, and the characters are all very good!
This is my first time reading a first-person article, but it's so interesting!
The first-person novel may be a bit confusing at first because there are many foreshadowings, but after reading it, you will feel that it is a very good novel. The emotions are very delicate. The worldview is also relatively complete. Micro group portrait. All in all, it is a rare and good book. Like👍
It's really beautiful. I wish Yan and Hu happiness forever, and I also wish everyone in the rain happiness.
Recently, I really like this kind of story that uses relatively plain brushstrokes to describe the ups and downs! ! ! Obviously many people have very few roles, but it gives people a sense of reality. Everyone is a full and independent individual, and everyone has their own pursuits. I like it! ! !
Author, you wrote this book beautifully. I was a little confused at first, but the more I read, the more I liked it. The first part really feels like a memoir. The story has ups and downs, but there is warmth among the protagonists and a group of people. I really like the reading experience that the whole book gave me [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] (≧▽≦)
It's pretty good, come on
The writing is very good and beautiful (*/∇＼*) [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking It's just that I can't understand the first few paragraphs. It's confusing. Maybe I'm not used to the first person?
Although it's a bit confusing, I can keep reading. Each chapter is relatively short and can be used to pass the time.
So pretty! When will the author write another one like this? Kick me, kick me. I feel so disappointed after reading it😭😭😭 I really thought that the protagonist was a flying man from outside the world😈😈😈, but when I saw the back, it seemed that was not entirely the case ❤️❤️❤️. The author's writing is really beautiful👄👄👄, I love reading it🌹🌹🌹. 🤤🤤🤤 I still want to read it, the author must write more about Kouya, everyone must keep reading Kouya💪💪💪, it's a really beautiful duo😋😋😋. Second brush, it's really beautiful. OMG, it's so beautiful, I'm repainting it again! Oh my god, the author is awesome Klass
A good book, I wish all of them peace and happiness in another world O(≧▽≦)O
It's so beautiful. I'm really looking forward to the torture.
Very interesting [like] very heartwarming. The beginning and end of the story of the two cats also complete this book. The news of Jiang Suixiao's death is like an end, so melancholy There are too many regrets and too many explanations. In the end, I found out that the article "The Traveling Doctor of Giants" impressed me the most. Well…