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It can be seen that the progress has been very obvious during the writing process. The first world is indeed a bit unbearable. But it was really good later on. Moreover, the selection of these worlds is quite suitable, [Like][Like][Like]

The problem is sentence breaks and punctuation. Everything else is very good. The modification of the plot, the connection of the world, and the form and style of the protagonist are all top-notch. It does not need to be too prominent to explain the system and its own strength. There is no discord. The reason for the low number of viewers is probably the name and the starting world. After reading other people's comments, they are all objective facts. I can continue reading and still think the writing is good. As you said, there are no byd poisonous points, which is extremely valuable in Tomato.

Not bad, looks okay

I think it looks pretty good, but everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage. Try it and take a look. If you don't like it, just pretend I didn't tell you.

It's well written, others don't know it, but I like to read it anyway

It's still okay, but I personally don't like Star Vault (I haven't played it) and Runeterra. It is strongly recommended that the author go to the world of 40K without [thinking][thinking][thinking]

It's well written, I quite like it.

Come on, really cool article

The content is good, it's time to seduce the protagonist.

Not bad! There are some flaws when reading it, but it is very entertaining when listening to the book! Come on, work harder!

How do you feel about the change?