[Redemption of pure love + Empress who has raised his wife since childhood + Transparent information + Layout planning and development + Double strong + Self-made character pictures of each period]
It snowed heavily that night, and Cheng Che, as the chief planner, stepped into the game he had made by himself.
In Qingshi Town in the far north, he raised the ten-year-old girl with tiles in her hands and wolf-like eyes with the promise of a full meal.
"From now on, I will support you."
With a promise, he would treat the future peerless empress as his daughter, and even more as his wife!
In order to cleanse her of her essence, he wandered around the major forces like a profiteer, making tens of thousands of dollars with nothing;
In order to protect her, he used his mortal body to organize the world, scare away the most powerful cultivators with just one word, and see through the weak spot of the peerless killer at a glance!
From the sallow little beggar to the charming girl with skin like jade;
From being stepped on and rubbed in the mud, to stepping into the martial arts realm at the age of eighteen, killing powerful enemies with one strike!
Looking at the beautiful girl who awakened her phoenix bones in the bathtub and exuded the radiance of divinity, before Cheng Che had time to sigh that a girl had grown up in our family, the next second, the cold "goddess" crawled into his arms wetly, like a clingy cat.
"Cheng Che, I have become stronger, I will protect you from now on."
Looking at the future empress drooling while sleeping in his arms, Cheng Che smiled helplessly:
This is not raising a daughter, it is clearly raising a little ancestor who can break the sky!
(The male protagonist is weak in the early stage and relies on information advantage, but is strong in the later stage. The female protagonist is unique in talent and beauty)
(Mainly focused on the happiness of cultivation, currently sixteen years old, in the stage of transformation and maturity.)
..
In time, all obstacles will be removed.
Jiang Ning's eyes turned red as she tied Cheng Che to a wooden chair with a red rope. Her beautiful eyes that should have been cold and arrogant were full of possessiveness.
Reader comments
It's a well-written story about how to grow up. The male protagonist doesn't pretend to be a gentleman who doesn't care about men and women. The plot is interlocking. The male protagonist strategizes without missing a beat. There are no flaws. I look forward to the follow-up of "Fat Fat".
It is a rare good book. I really found a biographical book among a bunch of history books. It has excellent writing, detailed interpersonal background stories, inner descriptions and mental changes. It is delicate in daily life, has a degree of fighting, and has a process of growth. This book is great and a potential stock.
Everything else is pretty good, but Soul Transmitter is a bit uncomfortable for me personally (´･_･`), the heroine's Ai picture is a bit scary and scared me in the middle of the night Σ( ° △ °|||), the training of the heroine in all aspects is a bit too ideal, the way the protagonist handles things is also a bit too ideal, the combat power is normal for now, but the balance feels a bit crispy (＠_＠;). The error tolerance rate of handling things by pulling the wool over the skin is too low, but the identity of the protagonist makes up for this. (*゜ー゜*)
Overall, I can give it 8.5 Points now, and I can look forward to the future (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
Quickly update the production team. Even the donkeys in the production team feel so rested (just kidding, we still have to pursue quality) ( ᖛ ̫ ᖛ )ʃ)
The setting plot is better than other development stories, and the author's writing style is also very good. It is very comfortable and enjoyable to read. I read it all in one sitting. There are not many people who read it. The author should not give up on this book [please update]
The enemy is always one level higher than the protagonist, so he can't beat it, and then runs away. There is also the talent of the heroine, which is also finished. Just a random passerby, Xiao Ming, has reached the third degree of martial arts in a year. This is no faster than the heroine. Don't brag about the talent of the heroine. The hero is of no use. He just relies on poor information in the early stage to scare people.
Does it look good or not? It looks good, it's really good. The emotional progression between the protagonist and the heroine is very comfortable, the protagonist is strategizing, and the enemies are arranged just right, making the heroine invincible in battles across levels. The author is very good at description, environment description, character description, psychological description, action description, etc. The writing style is very good, but to put it bluntly, the novel is about conflict, confrontation, and a roller coaster that arouses the reader's emotions. And the author wastes too much words on description. There are currently more than 100 pictures, and he is still wandering in several small towns on the border. He is still struggling to advance at a low level. He has not written the golden finger of the protagonist to give a sense of satisfaction, which has slowed down the advancement of the heroine. The main reason is that there are too many descriptions, killing a small villain, a small town, a city lord, a leader, a gang leader, a beggar, a shopkeeper, a soldier, etc. The various descriptions of them set off the protagonist's excellence, which is very redundant. It's not fun to advance in strength, it's not fun to hunt for treasures and open boxes, it's not fun to arrange conflicts, and it's not fun to use the protagonist's golden finger to know the overall situation similar to the rebirth novel. Therefore, I think the author is good at writing in a more everyday style, using various descriptions to add progressive character relationships, because the descriptions of various characters' psychology and actions are very unique and eye-catching. However, this article is based on the arrangement of the golden fingers of the male and female protagonists, and is more inclined to an advanced fighting style, so the writing style seems redundant and less refreshing. However, it is also a rare masterpiece to use to kill time in your spare time.
"When we were all lonely and helpless, you were the one who stayed with me for so many years." "When you open the door in front of you, the escape route behind you will disappear. From beginning to end, you will have only one way to go." "Perhaps because of ignorance of dreams, wandering people chase phantoms." "The meaning of living..."
"It's the things that flash through your mind at the moment when you are about to die..." "Destiny is something that is born to be stepped on. If you don't have the strength to resist it, just wait with courage."
Based on my thousands of hours of reading experience, Tomato is an absolute good book. The writing is good, and the plot is not ridiculous. I recommend it all the way. It is very comfortable to watch. There is basically no poison. It deserves five stars.
The author is resurrected
I originally wanted to give it five stars, but now I'll give it four stars. The content of this novel is actually quite good. There are more than 200 chapters. I thought this novel would be a full-length novel, and I can see that there is an ambition to create new chapters. Unfortunately, it turns out that it is also a short and long story without much description of the feelings between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. The romantic scenes mainly revolve around the battle of wits and escape. I originally thought that after the main boss was almost finished, their emotional scenes would be moved on to the later content, which should also be emotional content. Unfortunately, the author ended the novel too hastily and only wrote the emotional scenes between the male protagonist and the female protagonist at the end.
I like nurturing books. This one is not like other male protagonists who pretend that men and women are not close to each other. The connection is smooth and the IQ of the supporting characters is also online. I recommend it [shy]
I still say the same thing, if the author can write in this style, you will definitely have a seat in the online literature world. Looking at the style and character description of this book so far, it is top-notch. The only one that can make me feel the same is "Heaven Should Not Be". Come on, author!
Okay, I think it looks good.
But I have two suggestions. , The first one is that there are too few words. Not enough. More.
The second is to change the name. If you want to open this book with a single female protagonist, then change the name to "Empress Jie Hu was raised at the age of 10. When he ascended the throne, he called me husband."
Five-star support
It depends on how long I read it. This book is very suitable for me. The writing is very good and the plot is very good even if I ignore some details. In short, I hope the author can stick to it. I beg you. The author is great [crying] [crying] [crying] This book is really good and good [crying] Although not many people read it now, the writing is really good and good [love] [love] [love]
Why won't such an awesome book be promoted? The IQ of all members is online, not only the IQ competition, but also the strong is king in the world, and natural selection. The content is simple but vivid, not fancy, but it makes people read it like watching a movie or a life. It is wonderful and lively. The emotional lines interspersed in the middle are not artificial, not pretentious, natural and touching, the small problems of the cultivation system are solved candidly, and the details of growth are described delicately and realistically.
It's pretty good, it must be a single female lead author.
The writing is quite good so far. The protagonist takes the heroine without making the heroine suffer too much. The journey is quite smooth and a bit enjoyable. If this book can continue to be written, the results will not be too bad.
The protagonist can control objects in the Soul Style, but I feel that this world can only be considered low martial arts at present.
The writing is very good, and I really like the setting where the male and female protagonists met at a young age, depended on each other in troubled times, supported each other, and became stronger step by step. The male protagonist has an online IQ and is decisive in killing, while the female protagonist is powerful and talented. The storyline is rigorous and reasonable, and the writing is very good. The protagonist's perseverance and struggle against the surrounding environment and background are written in the early stage.
The ending is full of flowers, non-toxic, high-refreshing, the villain is not brainless, the story is emotionally delicate, the main and emotional lines are particularly rich, you can survive when you're being stubborn, and it's exciting when you're fighting. It's a pity that there are so few people. I can write another million words as the main plot unfolds. I'm looking forward to the extras and the new work!
It's great. I like this kind of male and female protagonists who face their feelings calmly. Like other novels, the adopted heroine really treats others as their daughters. When they take advantage of her, she says, "I've always treated you as my daughter." When my sister comes to see you, she forcibly creates conflicts and then becomes a spoiled child.
It's super beautiful. I haven't felt this way for a long time. The author's writing style is superb. The author would like to thank you for updating.
The writing is smooth, the context is clear, the motivations between the characters and the plot foreshadowing are well handled, and the sense of development is sufficient. It is a rare masterpiece in Tomato. Although there are some flaws in some settings, the flaws are not concealed. I look forward to the author's subsequent updates.
It's so good-looking, it's written in one go, it lays out a huge worldview, and all the foreshadowing can be taken back. Every character, no matter how big or small, is well-drawn, and the plot and emotional lines are both top-notch. It's one of the few good articles I've seen on Tomato. If you like it 👍, you'll want to tweet it!
I have updated to chapter 292 now, I'm tired of reading🥵🥵🥵
The protagonist's soul travels, and the plot tends to be slow-burning
It's well written. It should be a single female protagonist for now. After all, judging from your sister Ning's temperament, if the male protagonist has an ambiguous partner (currently there is no one), he should become a yandere in an instant👍👍👍
I quite like the heroine's character, but the illustrations are a bit off-putting.
Also, as the planner's daughter, it's normal for you, Sister Ning, to be strong. Does anyone feel that [like][like][like]
But the male protagonist is a bit weak, but as a planner, he said that wherever there is an opportunity, there will be an opportunity [Like] [Like] [Like] He has a very high IQ
Anyway, I don't know what to say. Come on, author, I like to read it. I hope more and more people will read your book. I hope the ending is he. The author must insist on reading more.
Personal test of this traditional Chinese character, thank you for the creation [send heart][explore][eat melon]
I really like this book, but it's a pity that it's so unfinished that it has no traffic [crying][crying][crying]
What can I say about this book? From the first few chapters, it can be seen that the author must have written it seriously, but in the later chapters it looks like an AI novel, in my opinion. The initial interactions, plot, and characters were all well written. But the AI traces at the back are so heavy that I can't stand it. Overuse of AI is a failing of this book. I still feel sorry for this book, ugh
Looking at the grand narrative at the beginning, it shows that the author worked hard and his writing style is very good. As a result, it ended hastily, and I really wanted to go beyond the ice circle. It is probably because it was not a cool novel and the pace was slow, which dragged down this good book.
I hope the progress is not as slow as other development articles. It does not mean fast pace, but it is best to summarize small things in a few paragraphs or simply omit them.
The writing is very good so far, but I don't know why no one has read it [Chigua]
Just pay more attention to the details and polish them. There are many details, but I have already read this kind of article, so I won't say more...
I've read almost 50 chapters and no one has died. Is this a sign of everyone's wits? It looks so cool, keep up the good work [laughs]
The writing is very good, can you give me more sweet emotional lines, please [crying]
First, Fire Tongs Liu Ming is so beautiful. I feel like it can make people burn. The world view is very good and the story line is clear. But the name is a bit boring. Try another one.
Why didn't the author give birth three years earlier [crying]
It's a well-written story about how to grow up. The male protagonist doesn't pretend to be a gentleman who doesn't care about men and women. The plot is interlocking. The male protagonist strategizes without missing a beat. There are no flaws. I look forward to the follow-up of "Fat Fat".
It is a rare good book. I really found a biographical book among a bunch of history books. It has excellent writing, detailed interpersonal background stories, inner descriptions and mental changes. It is delicate in daily life, has a degree of fighting, and has a process of growth. This book is great and a potential stock.
Everything else is pretty good, but Soul Transmitter is a bit uncomfortable for me personally (´･_･`), the heroine's Ai picture is a bit scary and scared me in the middle of the night Σ( ° △ °|||), the training of the heroine in all aspects is a bit too ideal, the way the protagonist handles things is also a bit too ideal, the combat power is normal for now, but the balance feels a bit crispy (＠_＠;). The error tolerance rate of handling things by pulling the wool over the skin is too low, but the identity of the protagonist makes up for this. (*゜ー゜*) Overall, I can give it 8.5 Points now, and I can look forward to the future (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧ Quickly update the production team. Even the donkeys in the production team feel so rested (just kidding, we still have to pursue quality) ( ᖛ ̫ ᖛ )ʃ)
The setting plot is better than other development stories, and the author's writing style is also very good. It is very comfortable and enjoyable to read. I read it all in one sitting. There are not many people who read it. The author should not give up on this book [please update] The enemy is always one level higher than the protagonist, so he can't beat it, and then runs away. There is also the talent of the heroine, which is also finished. Just a random passerby, Xiao Ming, has reached the third degree of martial arts in a year. This is no faster than the heroine. Don't brag about the talent of the heroine. The hero is of no use. He just relies on poor information in the early stage to scare people.
Does it look good or not? It looks good, it's really good. The emotional progression between the protagonist and the heroine is very comfortable, the protagonist is strategizing, and the enemies are arranged just right, making the heroine invincible in battles across levels. The author is very good at description, environment description, character description, psychological description, action description, etc. The writing style is very good, but to put it bluntly, the novel is about conflict, confrontation, and a roller coaster that arouses the reader's emotions. And the author wastes too much words on description. There are currently more than 100 pictures, and he is still wandering in several small towns on the border. He is still struggling to advance at a low level. He has not written the golden finger of the protagonist to give a sense of satisfaction, which has slowed down the advancement of the heroine. The main reason is that there are too many descriptions, killing a small villain, a small town, a city lord, a leader, a gang leader, a beggar, a shopkeeper, a soldier, etc. The various descriptions of them set off the protagonist's excellence, which is very redundant. It's not fun to advance in strength, it's not fun to hunt for treasures and open boxes, it's not fun to arrange conflicts, and it's not fun to use the protagonist's golden finger to know the overall situation similar to the rebirth novel. Therefore, I think the author is good at writing in a more everyday style, using various descriptions to add progressive character relationships, because the descriptions of various characters' psychology and actions are very unique and eye-catching. However, this article is based on the arrangement of the golden fingers of the male and female protagonists, and is more inclined to an advanced fighting style, so the writing style seems redundant and less refreshing. However, it is also a rare masterpiece to use to kill time in your spare time.
"When we were all lonely and helpless, you were the one who stayed with me for so many years." "When you open the door in front of you, the escape route behind you will disappear. From beginning to end, you will have only one way to go." "Perhaps because of ignorance of dreams, wandering people chase phantoms." "The meaning of living..." "It's the things that flash through your mind at the moment when you are about to die..." "Destiny is something that is born to be stepped on. If you don't have the strength to resist it, just wait with courage."
Based on my thousands of hours of reading experience, Tomato is an absolute good book. The writing is good, and the plot is not ridiculous. I recommend it all the way. It is very comfortable to watch. There is basically no poison. It deserves five stars. The author is resurrected
I originally wanted to give it five stars, but now I'll give it four stars. The content of this novel is actually quite good. There are more than 200 chapters. I thought this novel would be a full-length novel, and I can see that there is an ambition to create new chapters. Unfortunately, it turns out that it is also a short and long story without much description of the feelings between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. The romantic scenes mainly revolve around the battle of wits and escape. I originally thought that after the main boss was almost finished, their emotional scenes would be moved on to the later content, which should also be emotional content. Unfortunately, the author ended the novel too hastily and only wrote the emotional scenes between the male protagonist and the female protagonist at the end.
I like nurturing books. This one is not like other male protagonists who pretend that men and women are not close to each other. The connection is smooth and the IQ of the supporting characters is also online. I recommend it [shy]
I still say the same thing, if the author can write in this style, you will definitely have a seat in the online literature world. Looking at the style and character description of this book so far, it is top-notch. The only one that can make me feel the same is "Heaven Should Not Be". Come on, author!
Okay, I think it looks good. But I have two suggestions. , The first one is that there are too few words. Not enough. More. The second is to change the name. If you want to open this book with a single female protagonist, then change the name to "Empress Jie Hu was raised at the age of 10. When he ascended the throne, he called me husband."
Five-star support It depends on how long I read it. This book is very suitable for me. The writing is very good and the plot is very good even if I ignore some details. In short, I hope the author can stick to it. I beg you. The author is great [crying] [crying] [crying] This book is really good and good [crying] Although not many people read it now, the writing is really good and good [love] [love] [love]
Why won't such an awesome book be promoted? The IQ of all members is online, not only the IQ competition, but also the strong is king in the world, and natural selection. The content is simple but vivid, not fancy, but it makes people read it like watching a movie or a life. It is wonderful and lively. The emotional lines interspersed in the middle are not artificial, not pretentious, natural and touching, the small problems of the cultivation system are solved candidly, and the details of growth are described delicately and realistically.
It's pretty good, it must be a single female lead author.
The writing is quite good so far. The protagonist takes the heroine without making the heroine suffer too much. The journey is quite smooth and a bit enjoyable. If this book can continue to be written, the results will not be too bad. The protagonist can control objects in the Soul Style, but I feel that this world can only be considered low martial arts at present.
The writing is very good, and I really like the setting where the male and female protagonists met at a young age, depended on each other in troubled times, supported each other, and became stronger step by step. The male protagonist has an online IQ and is decisive in killing, while the female protagonist is powerful and talented. The storyline is rigorous and reasonable, and the writing is very good. The protagonist's perseverance and struggle against the surrounding environment and background are written in the early stage. The ending is full of flowers, non-toxic, high-refreshing, the villain is not brainless, the story is emotionally delicate, the main and emotional lines are particularly rich, you can survive when you're being stubborn, and it's exciting when you're fighting. It's a pity that there are so few people. I can write another million words as the main plot unfolds. I'm looking forward to the extras and the new work!
It's great. I like this kind of male and female protagonists who face their feelings calmly. Like other novels, the adopted heroine really treats others as their daughters. When they take advantage of her, she says, "I've always treated you as my daughter." When my sister comes to see you, she forcibly creates conflicts and then becomes a spoiled child.
It's super beautiful. I haven't felt this way for a long time. The author's writing style is superb. The author would like to thank you for updating.
The writing is smooth, the context is clear, the motivations between the characters and the plot foreshadowing are well handled, and the sense of development is sufficient. It is a rare masterpiece in Tomato. Although there are some flaws in some settings, the flaws are not concealed. I look forward to the author's subsequent updates.
It's so good-looking, it's written in one go, it lays out a huge worldview, and all the foreshadowing can be taken back. Every character, no matter how big or small, is well-drawn, and the plot and emotional lines are both top-notch. It's one of the few good articles I've seen on Tomato. If you like it 👍, you'll want to tweet it!
I have updated to chapter 292 now, I'm tired of reading🥵🥵🥵 The protagonist's soul travels, and the plot tends to be slow-burning It's well written. It should be a single female protagonist for now. After all, judging from your sister Ning's temperament, if the male protagonist has an ambiguous partner (currently there is no one), he should become a yandere in an instant👍👍👍 I quite like the heroine's character, but the illustrations are a bit off-putting. Also, as the planner's daughter, it's normal for you, Sister Ning, to be strong. Does anyone feel that [like][like][like] But the male protagonist is a bit weak, but as a planner, he said that wherever there is an opportunity, there will be an opportunity [Like] [Like] [Like] He has a very high IQ Anyway, I don't know what to say. Come on, author, I like to read it. I hope more and more people will read your book. I hope the ending is he. The author must insist on reading more. Personal test of this traditional Chinese character, thank you for the creation [send heart][explore][eat melon] I really like this book, but it's a pity that it's so unfinished that it has no traffic [crying][crying][crying]
What can I say about this book? From the first few chapters, it can be seen that the author must have written it seriously, but in the later chapters it looks like an AI novel, in my opinion. The initial interactions, plot, and characters were all well written. But the AI traces at the back are so heavy that I can't stand it. Overuse of AI is a failing of this book. I still feel sorry for this book, ugh
Looking at the grand narrative at the beginning, it shows that the author worked hard and his writing style is very good. As a result, it ended hastily, and I really wanted to go beyond the ice circle. It is probably because it was not a cool novel and the pace was slow, which dragged down this good book.
I hope the progress is not as slow as other development articles. It does not mean fast pace, but it is best to summarize small things in a few paragraphs or simply omit them.
The writing is very good so far, but I don't know why no one has read it [Chigua]
Just pay more attention to the details and polish them. There are many details, but I have already read this kind of article, so I won't say more...
I've read almost 50 chapters and no one has died. Is this a sign of everyone's wits? It looks so cool, keep up the good work [laughs]
The writing is very good, can you give me more sweet emotional lines, please [crying]
First, Fire Tongs Liu Ming is so beautiful. I feel like it can make people burn. The world view is very good and the story line is clear. But the name is a bit boring. Try another one.
Why didn't the author give birth three years earlier [crying]