Comprehensive Comic: the Journey of Cultivating Immortality Begins with the Release of Dragon Ball

A very good book. These five stars are for the princess. There are too few of this kind.

I am willing to accept any criticism and hope to write a novel that everyone will be satisfied with. Thank you to all the readers who have read this book. It would be better if you could give me some suggestions. Thank you [Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript]

The creativity is still good. It is different from the same comic novels before, which makes people feel refreshing. However, Xiu Xian and Zong Man are not very soft, and if they are not soft, they feel nondescript. Also, relationships with the heroines come too easily. It's a bit of a stud novel, but there are too many female protagonists.

After reading the comments, I found that it was similar to the manga I had read before. It was good-looking and I loved reading it. The male protagonist was not aggrieved or cowardly, and he picked it up when he needed to. It was quite satisfying in terms of viewing, and I just hoped that the characters would interact more (even though I knew it was impossible, because the more characters there are in the later stages of the manga, the interaction would definitely be worse). The protagonist is also a dream master, and I couldn't bear to read it with more than 30 chapters left. I hope the author can keep it up and don't get caught by Shen He. If he gets caught, he won't be able to read it anymore.

It's super good-looking, the author is very logical, and the plot is perfectly connected. How many can you deceive?

It's a bit messy, but I still give it 5 stars. There are too few books of this type

Actually, I'm thinking about one thing. The life created by the male protagonist needs to survive a tribulation in order to survive. The Origin Tribe is the darling of the Heavenly Dao and is exempted from the Heavenly Tribulation. So, will the creation of a life by the Origin Tribe's template block the Heavenly Dao? If enough are created, will it block the way of heaven, so that the way of heaven will not have time to attack when the male protagonist is going through the tribulation? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

I was halfway through reading it before I remembered to comment. Nowadays, it's rare to find a book that has the flavor of a comprehensive comic in the past. It may be related to the fact that there are not many good-looking anime themes in recent years. There are not many books that can still write about old animation and comprehensive comics. To put it bluntly, they are all for love. Come on, author. (Random thought: By the way, I want to see the sword dance of the elf, even if it is just a summoned character. Esther is still too cute. Of course, everything is based on the author's outline and ideas. This is just a small expectation of readers. If you have it or not, you will continue to support it)

It would be nice to have more dates and packages.

Although the rating is not good, 6.1, I quite like it personally, especially the date episode (Date Live). I enjoyed watching it [shy]

Although I find it a bit difficult to write in some places, but from the chapters I have read so far, there are no obvious big surprises, and I can write this type of comprehensive comic unlimited article on Tomato, and there are so many words, so I can give it a five-star support.

The theme of cultivating immortals + animation is quite interesting. You don't have to go to each world once and then not mention it again. There are quite a lot of settings, which I think are okay (maybe too many may cause discomfort). We can look forward to how the author handles the collision of various elements such as cultivating immortals and various animations (of course, don't be too entangled in combat power, just enjoy watching it)

This book is very well written, with all kinds of two dimensions. It would be even better if it could add blood-devouring attacks. It's really good. When I cultivate my skills and travel through some big worlds in the future, I think I can create a paradise and place all the heroines in it.

It's quite good-looking, and has the feel of a comic novel from many years ago, instead of the many template novels nowadays. It's also very difficult for the author. It has more than 900,000 words and has yet to be rated. , Come on [love]

There are very few books released, so write well and come on! ! ! ! [Praise]

It's a rare comprehensive comic that is both heart-wrenching and heart-wrenching. The author works very hard and updates it three times a day. Come on, author.

Recommended, recommended, recommended! Looks good, looks good, looks good!

It has great potential. As long as it doesn't collapse in the later stage, it will be very beneficial.

Five stars are given to fights and packages Very good comic

It's okay. If it was ten years ago, I would still watch it. Today's aesthetics have changed and I don't really like this style.

Come on, big brother who writes about Xiao Huangshu

You are very good, you have everything, your writing is very good, very awesome.

It's okay. Mainly because I've watched all the anime in the introduction except Debao, but the world of the male protagonist's daily life is a fusion of Debao and Dragon Ball. The main reason is that I haven't seen Debao, so I feel a bit lost [laughs awkwardly]

Okay, okay, keep going Come on, it's very beautiful

It's been a long time since I've seen a post about Bao. Please support me.

Okay, come on, call you|｡ᴛ ʏ ᴛ)っ♡

It's a pleasure to collect. It's definitely a masterpiece as far as harem stories are concerned, but the shortcomings are also very obvious. It's too much to take care of. Starting from Naruto, the protagonist's position is a bit biased towards the mastermind behind the scenes, and the mastermind has to replace the protagonist to fight against the mastermind... How can I put it? I can understand the purpose, but it's a bit uncomfortable.

Needless to say, it looks good It's done, the score is high, now I'm afraid of being banned, I should lower the score

Apart from being a little bad in the early stages, everything is pretty good later on.

A good comprehensive comic that suits my taste