The Road to the Top: A Restaurant from the Start

So far, the writing is quite interesting. There are no obvious ridiculous places or obvious mistakes. Although the protagonist makes a fortune too quickly, the number of ways is basically reasonable. The author is careful, but the content is still relatively small. I would have known better. I hope the author will do more.

I really think it's good, the writing is smooth, the plot is exciting and doesn't drag out, and it makes people want to read more. I want more, but it's not enough!

Very good, very exciting, very beautiful, worthy of five-star praise, worthy of following every day A very nice book.

Although there are some plots in the front that are difficult to pass, the writing in the back is getting better and better. I second that the pace of some comments is indeed a bit fast, but it is obvious that the author is picking important parts to write, which is understandable. What others think of as a small thing may look like a masterpiece in your mind, but majors have specializations. Let me tell you my thoughts after reading for a few days and some comments: This book can be considered good based on the author's writing experience and Tomato's reading level, but based on the current writing, it cannot be considered a high-scoring masterpiece. What I see in the author's writing style is that it only has clear layers and reasonable logic, but lacks vivid images. The key point is that it cannot be drawn with words. Many of the plots in it give people the feeling of narrative. It is difficult to generate a strong picture in the mind, but there are not enough details. Then there is the point of sublimation that the author did not handle properly. The explanations are somewhat inappropriate for the season and lack emotional explosive points. At the same time, some places that should explode have become embarrassing, and at the same time it reduces the sense of the picture. Furthermore, the characterization is too bland, and most of them are the same, which is a bit ridiculous, but I just don't feel the characteristics. (I'm going to tell you my subjective thoughts. There is no need to hold on to them. They are all novels. It's okay to be more idealistic. Being too close to real life has the opposite effect. To be honest, some characters make me a little nauseous. Maybe I have a bit of a virgin heart, but the lack of absolutely positive supporting characters in a novel feels weird, so you can follow your own ideas.) Let's talk about the final plot. Less than 150 chapters, the bottom class directly enters the aristocratic circle. It's too abstract. I'm not saying it's impossible, but it really feels like a free-for-all. The feeling of getting something for nothing makes me envious and jealous. Anyway, I'm not too happy watching it.

Nice! The group of portraits in the court, the personalities of the several princes, and the protagonist's use of the advantage of time travel, these points are very beautifully written! 😘😘 The grasp of human nature and power is very good. I stayed up two nights to read it starting from the Book of Rites (I think, I forgot about it for a long time 😂). I feel that the best part of the writing is that the protagonist is not a god who kills a god or a Buddha who kills a Buddha. Instead, he develops in various conspiracies and conspiracies. The love part is also very interesting. 🥰🥰🥰[Admiration]

The author's writing is really good, but some of the comments really make people feel physically uncomfortable. They are true where they shouldn't be true, and vulgar where they should be true. It can only be said that they have seen the diversity of species. The author must stick to himself and have three correct views!!!!!!! Come on

It's been a long time since WOC has seen this novel that doesn't have any poison points so far. It's quite interesting. There are no poison points so far, and the characters' IQs are online. I just hope that I can have more relaxed daily life.

I have finished reading it. In fact, the whole novel is not very outstanding and is a mediocre work, but the story is very complete and the characters are very vivid and flesh-and-blood. The protagonist is neither invincible nor pretentious. In fact, the story ceases to be about the protagonist alone. There is no harem, and it is really good to be single-minded. The final ending is not satisfactory at all. It is full of sadness. The male and female protagonists meet again across time and space, but they are also unable to see many old friends again, which is a bit melancholy.

The overall review is: very good, a rare time-travel novel for engineering students. Starting a business in the early stage is not very attractive. I personally don't like the introduction of the football plot in the middle and late stages. The whole plot is interspersed with some game-making thinking, commercial and financial thinking, and the author's own thinking. As a modern person, it is still worth thinking about these.

It's good to read, far more than 8 points. The author's writing is profound and the plot is fascinating. Although there are flaws, they are not hidden. The characterization needs to be improved, but the plot is attractive enough to read. It's great. I look forward to the author's next book.